The Way of Body Tempering
横炼武道
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 223 Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
6Chapters
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Reader comments 14
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The first one is for poisonous weeds. I am 180cm tall and weigh 130 pounds. I still have muscles. Where did the muscles come from? Don't talk about muscles if you don't have 160cm.
Let's change the first one. If you have money, you might be afraid that you won't find a martial arts gym. Opening a martial arts gym is just to make money.
The author's language description is really good, and the plot design could be improved. 1. In order to introduce the sister flower and the subsequent plot, a plot is set up where the protagonist is not wanted. The martial arts school is like the current school. It needs students with good grades, but also rich students (the plot of the sister flower is really a bit poisonous) 2. In the world of high martial arts, the protagonist's family is very rich, how to protect his wealth 3. The protagonist has only been in the martial arts gym for a while, and he has to fight for life and death for the martial arts gym. Is the advancement too hasty. The author can set the protagonist's father as a disciple of the martial arts school, so that the martial arts school protects his wealth, and he provides part of the money to the martial arts school, and they are mutually dependent. Isn't it better? I'm not here to cause trouble, I'm here to make suggestions.
In the first chapter, if the author changed the martial arts gym that the protagonist goes to to a martial arts gym without trouble, it would be more readable. Otherwise, he would know that this martial arts gym is in big trouble after reading the first chapter, and the protagonist would be too stupid to rush to find trouble.
I went to look for it, and the author combined the gift of natural power at the beginning with "I have a martial arts world" into one
This introduction can be read page after page, volume after volume.
Why is it similar to the gift of natural power at the beginning?
After reading a few chapters, I didn't feel that it was attractive! The storyline is quite cliche!
What does this book have to do with Mythology and Tongzi Gong? Pretty much the same as before
Directly copy the opening game and give out natural power?