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It's very well written. Except for the section about the Chinese national football team, I suggest avoiding writing about them altogether or only mentioning them briefly.

This is ridiculous! To suppress peak Kaká after only a few Premier League games is utterly mindless. Does the author even watch football?

The author is definitely having a blast! Strong teams are thrashing each other by 60 or 7 goals all the time. And not only are they thrashing other strong teams, but the national team is also thrashing them. The protagonist is awesome, but his teammates aren't! The author is giving the men's national football team way too much credit.

Please, please, please don't write about the Chinese national football team! If you do, it will definitely be a disaster. The Chinese national football team cannot be saved by one person. Football is a team sport, a reflection of a country's overall football strength. It's not something one person can save with a cheat code.

It's not exciting without commentary; it's not thrilling at all.

To say that a football star is corrupting by going to nightclubs is to demonize this form of entertainment as a "cannibalistic haven." Anyone who truly understands Ronaldo and Messi would agree that Ronaldo doesn't go to bars, and Messi lacks the Argentine "barbecue gang"—barbecue is even more harmful than alcohol.

The writing is dry and lacks any passion. Author, this is a football novel, you can exaggerate a bit, but it can't be devoid of passion. After reading dozens of chapters, it's still utterly boring. At least when there's a goal, can't we have a whole game? ... Goolllllllllllll

It's best not to write about the Chinese national football team; it's too much of a headache. And definitely don't write about Dong; that's just rubbish.

If you're going to write about football, just write about the matches and intersperse some celebrity commentary. Why do you have to include things like personal reflections and conflicts? And how can you tolerate such a ruthless agent and even hire someone from China? Please, can you at least take a look at how the masters write their books?

Novels about football these days: those featuring the national team always have terrible results; those that don't are a little better off; and those who actually play for the national team don't get a single penny in rewards.