I'm Really a Magician

First of all, the subject matter is quite good, but the author's writing style needs to be improved, and the subject matter is useless. After reading so many chapters, the content of the novel is straightforward, and the story description has no ups and downs at all; the entire chronicle feels like a diary written by my friend's student (my friend teaches 4th grade elementary school)

My roommate's licking dog is too much. It's nice to have this episode once in a while, but it's annoying when it's too much

Magic is quite interesting, but it's too boring in daily life. No wonder no one

This book has signs of a scumbag, the kind of man who flirts with someone but doesn't marry him. I suggest the author think about it carefully. The starting point of flirting with someone who doesn't want to marry him is universal. I hope the author will take it seriously.

Use magic to perform tricks, and write down the details of the performance. It feels like you have walked through the process of performing the trick in one stroke, and it also feels like the protagonist is afraid of being seen through. I once read a novel in which the main character used a space ring to perform magic tricks, which was more exciting than this one. Anyway, in novels, as long as the magic tricks are wonderful and awesome 😰 People in the live broadcast room couldn't find any fault and shouted 666 that there's nothing wrong with it.

It's so messy, I just need to glance at it casually

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the writing is useless A good spiritual cultivation disguised as a magic trick It actually writes about third-rate college life, and the writing style is not very good. It's like writing a diary, a lot of nonsense, a lot of unnecessary writing

The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to write it. Writing about college life directly ruins the subject matter

After reading a few chapters, I feel like there is no main line.

The subject matter is quite creative, but the writing is like a running account, and I don't even know how to explain it. The inexplicable heroine appeared out of nowhere. Slipping away.

One suggestion is to delete all the paragraphs about Tiangang Disha magic. The system will gradually disappear. I think it is more interesting to concentrate on writing tricks through live broadcasts and offline performances Writing, especially new writers, is most taboo. Generally speaking, you can grasp it. Can't help it, specializing from an early age is the right path (many great masters have this habit) If you really want to write about Tiangang Disha, you can show it slowly later, instead of showing it out in the early stage to catch your appetite. After all, who is used to eating big fish and meat and eating bran pickles? Your kind of spoiler is devastating to the current plot. After all, compared to Tiangang Earthsha's magical powers and tricks, they are not even considered trivial. Who has the patience to watch it?

I just wanted to ask if the author could put a video behind each magic chapter. We don't know if you wrote a lot of things that we have never heard of or seen. We also have some ideas about how to add a video. Oh, it turns out that this is the trick passed down by our ancestors.

The 24th first order, I feel like the author has sent this book, all I can say is go for it 💪

I think it's best for the author to read it by himself when he writes it. It makes my head hurt when I read it, so you can read it yourself Ask him if he wants a suit, it can be used during the performance. Shen fantasized about it and sent a voice reply. "Look for the one who makes long gowns. What kind of suit do you want?" "A Chinese tunic suit will do, too. Help me find someone who makes this kind of clothes." What are you wearing a suit for? It's not appropriate. What are you thinking about? It would be best to make two pairs of old-fashioned cloth shoes. "Okay, long gown." Ren Sitong thought for a while. The outfit really needs to fit. Long gown is suitable. Chen Huan and them went to the dance academy where there was a classroom for practicing dance. This is just this paragraph. I typed it for a long time and deleted it completely. Forget it, I won't comment anymore.

As for magic tricks, the Immortal Cord in Sword Rain looks great.

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