Villain: the Memory Is Exposed, Making the Emperor Cry and Beg for Forgiveness

Abuse for the sake of abuse, illogical, forcefully lyrical writing, so embarrassing that it could fill up a three-bedroom apartment. From a setting point of view, the protagonist is the kind of person who does good deeds silently but suffers from infamy. There are difficulties behind all seemingly heinous things. So the question is, why has he sat in the position of supreme ruler for so many years without even a trustworthy leadership team who knows the inside story? You act like a street rat and an enemy of the people. I really can't think of any compelling reason for you to do this. How will you be able to clear your name in front of the public in the end? It's really just trying to forcibly lower your intelligence in order to create an environment where everyone in the world is the enemy. The creation of the female characters is also difficult to describe. It is really nauseating to watch. Is it a matter of course that the male protagonist treats you so well? Will you fight to the death once you make a little mistake? In the end, he was able to fool him by saying a sentence he couldn't remember? Each heroine is like a giant baby. After so many years of getting along with each other, they can't develop even a trace of affection? Wouldn't you notice that something was wrong and become suspicious? When you see the male protagonist being kind to you in your memory, you won't reflect on it and deduce the truth? IQ can't improve a little bit after so many years, right? It's all going backwards, right? At present, it seems that if we really want to continue writing like this, we can only end it without a female protagonist. The ultimate little white text that forcibly creates contradictions, has no logic, and no foreshadowing. The ending can be known at a glance. I also know that writing is your dream. I can see how much effort you have put into your dream. It is not easy to drag your exhausted body to pay for your dream after work. But I still want to say that if you write poorly, you should receive criticism and correction. Is it just because it is a dream that you can write such disgusting words as a matter of course, instead of pursuing progress and writing more exciting stories? Finally, I hope the author can work hard. After all, articles that are too straightforward cannot retain thoughtful readers.

I just read the first chapter of the main text, and then flipped through the chapter table of contents. The plot is a bit slow and dragging! The plot of the latest chapter has just arrived at the Seven Kingdoms Competition. Chapter 40 of Yun Wuyue's story! Qin Zhimu's story has not yet ended in its 80th chapter. To be honest, I feel tired after reading it for a long time. I have also read the author's replies to other book friends' comments. The author wants to write a longer book, but this type of book narrates the experiences of the heroine, and there are many heroines! Then we need to control the length of each heroine's story, otherwise what's the difference between it and other stallion stories? The heroine of the previous story disappears later, and the plot is too procrastinating, which makes readers tired, and the excitement will disappear silently. Depending on the situation, there will be at least a dozen heroines. If each heroine has a length of one hundred chapters, then this book will have more than a thousand chapters. It is obvious how many characters there will be until the end! In fact, I think the first forty chapters are really well written! I was attracted to this too. If the story of a female protagonist is limited to more than fifty chapters and less than one hundred chapters, and unimportant plots should not be described in too much detail, and readers can fully capture the pleasure of watching the male protagonist torture and chase her husband to the crematorium after knowing the truth, then this book will be a qualified work! That's all, I wish the author endless creative inspiration! The work is a hit!

I have a big complaint about the author. I came across this book in the Daily Guide today. When I posted this comment, I didn't read a word of the text, but this introduction made me feel very stomachache. Reading this introduction, I feel like I can imagine a bloody plot.

I picked it up accidentally when I was watching pirated copies. After reading them all, I like this kind of knife and it made me cry. The author is great, come on! I hope it can be polished well in the future, but I hope to see the tragic end of Luo Chen who didn't know that the nugget came through The tickets have been made up! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Very well written, very good! I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I've booked it all and will continue to pursue it But I have to complain about one thing. The female protagonists are really mentally retarded. A little manipulation by others can make them target the male protagonist Also, if I think about it from the male protagonist's perspective, if I were a relative of the male protagonist, even if he fell into the evil way and killed people like crazy, I would He will also accompany him; he has received so many favors and been rescued so many times, but he still betrays the male protagonist, no matter what the reason is, it is difficult for people to accept In conclusion, the writing style in the following part is much better than the previous one. The group of mentally retarded people outside the coffin in Kowloon should try not to mention it all the time, or not to write in such a depressing way.

I'm convinced, isn't this the trend that Lui had some time ago? The plot is quite different.

It was a complete plagiarism of the novel. The author had the audacity to say that he touched the heartstrings and wrote the novel with painstaking efforts. I posted a table of contents of the original novel and everyone would know it at a glance.

This type of book is simply intellectual. I don't know why. Many of these books nowadays are even more disgusting than Long Aotian's urban novel about Long Aotian pretending to slap the harem stallion in the face. There is no logic at all.

I haven't finished the book yet, so feel free to criticize me if you find something wrong. I was confused: why did I stay after being betrayed by all my relatives and friends, and being the enemy of the whole world? He was simply exiled and left to wander. If the author wishes, directly cut off the connection with this world. Then travel to other dimensions and start a new life. Why are you still here? (I also know that this is a bit extreme, but I still want to say: I don't need others to comment on my life's merits and demerits. To borrow a phrase I like very much: It's just a little bit of trouble!) As for those fools who didn't know the truth in the past and only wanted to believe what they said they saw with their own eyes. If you don't know, forget it and don't care. If I knew it, I would suddenly regret it. I just want to say: Why did you go there earlier! If I really regret it, let them find it, and go find it across time and space. If you are not strong enough, just practice. After practicing, come back. I said it myself: I was wrong... No, that's all. If there is anything wrong, you are welcome to criticize me. I will definitely accept it.

From 12 o'clock to 2:30, I found that there were too many battles in this book and I was tired of reading. There is too little abuse, and the scenes where the heroine regrets are a bit sparse. In fact, everyone is reading it for the purpose of chasing her husband to the crematorium. If the author really wants to write a longer story, he can let the protagonist come out or travel with the heroine with memories. That can also be written. Otherwise, just keep reminiscing like this, which will easily make readers tired and may not be able to read it later. I feel that what people who read this book want to see is how the heroine regrets after knowing the protagonist's memory, and thus pays the price for their actions. Instead of letting a group of supporting characters and the heroine watch with gusto outside the copper coffin, the protagonist has already entered the copper coffin, and what is the use of the heroine regretting it? This will not make the readers happy. This is just a personal opinion. If the subsequent writing is good, I will continue to subscribe. If the author feels it is wrong, he can delete this comment.

After I put myself in it, with a pure heart, I burst into tears and runny noses. It was so well written.

What does the author think this book relies on to attract readers? Is it an upgrade to fight monsters? Does the author think killing monsters and upgrading is the selling point of this book? There are so many fantasy novels in the starting point, with fairy tales and jade at the front, spiritual energy reviving, and the world of martial arts rising behind. The reason why I chose to subscribe to this book is not because I want to watch others watch the fight through the sky through a coffin.

This is what I like to read. It's really good. I'm not so picky when it comes to novels. It's hard to find two good ones now. I gave the author some time and the writing style gradually improved. There are a few bad points that didn't bother me at all. I like this style very much. Everyone, give it a chance. There are not many good books in Qidian now. If The Eunuch is gone, give the author a chance.

The author should polish it up, the writing style is still good, the subject matter is very novel, but you made the women look too similar, it makes people sick. Originally, the biggest highlight of this subject was the plot of several women chasing their husbands in the crematorium after the whitewash, but the premise is that you want readers to like these women. You can also see from the comments now that they basically want the female supporting characters to die directly. The biggest highlight is that you have written it so that you have no expectations, so naturally no readers will stay. Besides, let's not talk about your rhythm. You are still recalling after 300,000 words. Are you really ready to end it when the memories are over? Then I think you might as well be a eunuch now and open a new book. With the popularity still there, maybe there will be another chance.

The setting of the male protagonist and the system is very good, it is no longer the disgusting setting that relies on modifying the plot to play with everyone's emotions. It's this sister's plot that is really hard to describe in words. I am speechless because I have hated the protagonist for hundreds of years because of the bone-digging. The matter of digging bones is just the master's opinion. It has no basis and is as outrageous as a stranger saying to me after I woke up: You were knocked unconscious by your mother, and she separated your kidneys while you were unconscious. 😅I believe you. I hope the story lines of the following heroines can be more complete. Anyway, I have no hope for this white-eyed, wolfish sister.

It sucks😅, bookworms, just run away and don't read this book.

I just came from a similar book called "You Were Promised to Kill Me, Why Are You All Crying", and it seems that the plot is somewhat similar, so it should be considered the same genre? This book only has 170,000 words, so I'm a bit afraid to read it, and it seems to be a subjective abuse of the author, please let me fatten you up.

I'll watch when the protagonist is really resurrected. And don't take the roles of these heroines too seriously. Even if you like them, you can't go back to the past because the protagonist doesn't owe them anything anymore.

Doesn't anyone think Luo Chen is brainless? After all, he is a quasi-sage. He has no character at all, and he has no authority. His expressions are written all over his face every time, and his words are like a brainless villain, a bit like trying to punch someone in the face. (Only my personal opinion, don't criticize me, you are the one who is right🐶)

What do you mainly read when reading novels? What do readers want to read when they come to read your book? The writing style is above average, but it is much better than this book. At least in my opinion, the author is still at the level of description. Maybe I am not good enough. The idea is good and the creativity is attractive enough. This is the main reason why this book is still very popular. However, judging from the author's updates, it is becoming less and less innovative. Remember what you want to write and don't follow the crowd. Besides, the process of recalling is not very enjoyable. There is also the rhythm, the rhythm is very strange, I have to write a lot of monsters and upgrades, and I am still struggling to death. I have long been tired of aesthetics, and I can't stand it after reading two chapters. I think that the protagonist relies on willpower to persist in many parts of his memories. Such a slow pace is not suitable for this type of novel. I personally think that rhythm and plot are the most important. As long as the writing style of online novels is not embarrassing, most people can accept it. The author can focus more on polishing the plot. For a new book, there is no need to pursue perfection. It is better to make the attractions first, and wait until the language is more famous before worrying about it. If you write part-time, your energy and ability in this area are limited. The author can look at how the rhythm of other better novels is grasped. The two recent ones I have read are more daily, Little Golden Crow and Azkaban (I won't mention the names to prevent kyosis), and I think they are good. The author does not need to worry and expect to make great progress soon, everyone understands. Now that I know my problem, I don't understand why I still go my own way. The author is obviously very persistent and sincere, so why can't he show up the perseverance to change the outline and make major changes while it's still cool? I also say that it is a new book, just practice it, and it is the same if you write a few books without making any changes. The author's attitude is blinding, and his ability is not bad. If he shows some perseverance, he will definitely achieve results. I am just a reader, and my level cannot be said to be very high. I hope the author can achieve better results, and I wish you all the best.

No one of this routine can be completed, all eunuchs

I want to see what you can learn from it. Eunuchs are just eunuchs, so be tougher.

A few months ago, there was a book that I really liked. I kept reading it until it died. I thought that it would be really troublesome to read it. Anyway, there must be many people who are willing to read it every day, so I just kept it, but then I received a notification that it was ready. I felt very complicated at the time. From then on, I stopped reading the books that I really liked. I would read them when they were updated, when they were updated, and when I got bored, I would go back and read them again. After following some of the words of the authors and understanding some of the cruelty within the novel author that readers could not see, I gradually began to wonder, as I have a hobby of writing in Xia Zhiba, whether I should really be like a certain comment said, rather than tightening screws instead of writing. Oh, I have a job myself and the salary is pretty good. I don't need to think about tightening screws. That's fine. However, from the stories told by the author of this book, whether it is the story of the book or his own story, I feel the power of courage again. Perhaps the hymn of mankind is really the hymn of courage. So, I was inspired, as if I had been given a shot of blood. Eh... I'm afraid I'm hopeless. I hope the author can continue to move forward with this kind of courage and persistence. Maybe one day you will be promoted to a big boss. I can also say that I typed a short essay in his book review area in the middle of the night. Come on! Then Update soon! (The picture shows the difference I am posting this picture to show you my xp

I don't want anything else, just don't go to the palace

I can't support the author, but I hope the author sticks to it

I subscribed and got two free monthly tickets The author writes well Stick to his own style Whether Qidian novels can be popular depends on the subject matter and perseverance Sadomasochism + fantasy, Qidian has quite a large audience Work hard to finish the book, write one or two million, and your reputation will come out I'm optimistic about you Come on

Another copy has been sent, please don't cut it 😢

I think it's well written. After all, it's the author's first book. The writing style and plot are both okay.

It's been 5 days and there's still no update? Give me a break