Rebirth in the Great Desolate Way

Author: As long as you don't smear and belittle Nuwa, I will read it

A good book, a magical book that is rare to find in a thousand years. It is guaranteed to make you suffer from embarrassment.

The schematic diagram of the prehistoric world in the setting of this book is of course only a simplified diagram. There are also some spatial aspects used by Mustard Na Sumeru, just like the thirty-three days and the eighteenth level of hell. It looks like a thin layer of separation, but in fact it is infinitely broad.

I couldn't stand it after reading five or six chapters, but then I read the comments and said that it had different ideas from other prehistoric games. I thought I could continue to persevere, but it turned out that I couldn't persevere anymore after reading Chapter 10. From the beginning of the world to the protagonist climbing Mount Buzhou, only ten years passed. Thousands of years, what can one hundred thousand years be enough to do in such a high-level world, especially since the Great Desolate World is the top of the world, and it will take more than one hundred thousand years just after Pangu reaches the top of the sky after the creation of the sky. Even counting from the time after Pangu transforms into heaven and earth, that little time is not enough to do anything! Also, if you climb Buzhou Mountain, Buzhou Mountain is the most coercive. Not to mention Taiyi, even a saint might not be able to climb it. The world you wrote is too rubbish.

I keep "relying" and "relying". Even a mentally retarded person who travels back to prehistoric times would never be like this. Is the author a person with Down syndrome?

😤😤😤 It doesn't seem to be much different from the prehistoric routines written by others. I picked it up from the introduction. 🤫No creativity at all?

It's so rubbish. The world opened up by the protagonist Tai Yi is about the same size as the planet. Isn't Da Luo a stellar level? What kind of low-end prehistoric is this? It's just a little better than the prehistoric era of the nuclear bomb saint. You know, Da Luo can survive in chaos, which is at least a cosmic level!

I'm a eunuch, the author is a eunuch, please disperse.

Why are you writing so much that you have turned it into an urban novel? You have no prioritization in writing this prehistoric novel.

The author recommends that you write less modal particles. You are writing a novel about cultivating immortals, not an urban novel. There is no need to add modal particles in every sentence, which will affect the perception.

I had no motivation to read this book until the third chapter. If I had the chance to reach the top, I would choose to transform into cannon fodder, but I would be in trouble at every turn. The self-contained skills are low-end and have no characteristics.

Yan Daozhu is such a heaven-defying thing, why would you use it to cause reincarnation? A supercomputer that does not need to replace parts, does not need an external database, and can evolve infinitely, how about using it for reincarnation? Create a world, and then write down in the encyclopedia beads what needs to be put into this world, the direction of development, the power system, the development of civilization, whether to create creatures by yourself or to evolve naturally. Does this still require the three realms of heaven, earth and man? Isn't it true that all the authority is acting as Daozhu and he can do it fairly?

The large historical process cannot be changed. If it changes, it means nothing. Without the most basic meaning, there is nothing to see.

The starting setting is very good, the rest is hard to describe, the practice system is a mess, and the writing is verbose.

A Hunyuan Daluo boss is calling a fellow Taoist to a weakling

After reading two chapters, I don't want to read anymore. It's unreasonable for the protagonist to travel through time without bringing his own skills. Even when Sanqing was born, he didn't have any skills. The skills are all derived from their own innate magical powers. The skills are all created day after tomorrow. The world has just been opened. Where can the inherited skills come from? Only innate supernatural powers! Moreover, traveling through the ancient world is already the biggest lag, and it would be boring to cheat anymore. In fact, I once thought about how to write a story about traveling through the ancient world that would be interesting. The protagonist could be a programmer and become an ordinary living being after traveling through time. Then he goes to seek enlightenment from a powerful person and then realizes the martial arts. He regards the two qi of yin and yang as 0 and 1, and opens up a virtual world based on illusions and enlightenment in dreams. This world can be socialized, discussed, and shopped. The novels, films and TV shows are turned into virtual heavens and made into games, and then the permissions are given to all sentient beings to log in to this world, and the world can be strengthened with the spiritual power of all sentient beings in order to refine the false and true. Finally, one can master the power to turn the virtual into reality, cover the way of heaven with the virtual world to achieve the purpose of uniting the way of heaven, and even give the sentient beings the ability to squeeze the system panel and rush out of the prehistoric world to fight against chaos. Anyone who is interested can write

The plot is okay, but the writing is so jarring that I couldn't stand it after reading nearly 200 chapters.

The plot is okay, but the writing is so jarring that I couldn't stand it after reading nearly 200 chapters.

I suggest you go and take a look first. My backyard leads to the prehistoric world. No matter which one you like, it is a mythical system or a Hongjun system. At least Luo Ji must be reasonable. At least you must have a correct concept of time in the prehistoric world. What makes me speechless is that the recent prehistoric novels have improved to a new level in hundreds of years. According to this, the Great Luo is all over the land. But you have to know that the three thousand avenues in the prehistoric world correspond to three Qian Daluo, the Taoist struggle is endless. Tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of years will not have much impact on the world of immortality. I suggest you read more novels about immortality. He has a good concept of time. He can only make you live forever, but it does not mean that you will not die. It only takes a million years to become an immortal. If you think like an ordinary person, you have to recognize the reality. In reality, Long Aotian has traveled through the horse.

It's a natural way of writing, but Cheng Hunyuan Daluo is a bit new.

There is no way to substitute, and the words are exhausted. It feels like I am narrating, experiencing history, and writing history. Whether the purpose of writing a book is to write about art or commodities, it feels neither right nor wrong.

It's just a bit embarrassing to read this writing.

It was okay at first, but now it's still the kind of prehistoric novel from the past, and it has become a cliché and has no new ideas.

The protagonist becomes a bystander in the prehistoric world.

😅😅😅He knew very well that... These words were used too much. There is a bit of language fatigue, which makes the whole plot quietly lose the sense of substitution.

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Dragon King Simulator (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

It's really tiring to read. It's such a mess. If you don't know how to set it, just follow the public's instructions. You can't edit it well by yourself.

The world tree starts with Daluo, but you are still at the mortal level, what a low-level prehistoric, the powerful Daluo are so terrifying that they can take ten meters in one step 🪖