Court Emperor of Tennis King

To be honest, I feel that the writing is so-so. There is not much to watch at the 4th or 50th chapter. I will give you some suggestions and the author will consider them himself 1. Compared to the setting of the characters, the plot outline and writing style are more important 2. Don't write about China, because no matter you win or lose, it is a failure. No one will read this genre br>3. Except for the protagonist taking the initiative to recruit people to change the plot, try not to modify the original historical plot (referring to those who transferred schools in advance) 4. The protagonist's image is not obvious Everyone's playing style in the world of Net King is different. In this kind of group portrait novel, the character's skills and personality complement each other and determine the character's image. In a certain form, skills are a reflection of personality "Offense" and "Defense" are already a complete and powerful set of theories, which are enough to support a character image. This can be applied to a supporting role, but not to the protagonist. Because it is too monotonous and has no sense of substitution, the protagonist cannot conquer the world with just these two moves, so there must be an extension of his skills, but the extension can be placed in the later stage, just like Fuji's understanding of new counterattacks in the national competition Those "gentlemen have no weapons" you wrote, The connection is too far-fetched. If we copy some from other classics and doctrines in the future (such as non-attack, inaction, etc.), It will be even more confusing, but it will reduce the style of both offensive and defensive moves Finally, Feng Lin, Huo Yin and Thunder were added to the protagonist's skill library. I have to say that this is a failure. In this kind of group portrait writing, it is best not to repeat the character skills if possible. Unless it is a system, spiritual inheritance (similar to the pillars of Qingxue) and imitation of magical skills, otherwise do not learn other people's tricks They are all from the Sanada family, and they also rely on the art of war. Wouldn't it be better if you use an eight formation for the protagonist? New settings are always more attractive to readers, and Distinguish the image of the protagonist and Sanada There are three types of eight gates, which can be written as the evolution of skills, and can be written twice, and there are many moves, so the number of words is more convenient 5. If you really want to write about the Chinese team, you can add the special culture to fantasy tennis, but do not mix the culture of other countries, such as the Seven Deadly Sins or something Oh, never, let's just talk about some of the more common and representative ones: Weapons: swords, guns and bows, for example, guns are for penetration, bows are for precision and long-range attack Sects: Six Arts of Confucianism, Taoist Carefree + Wuwei, Six Paths of Buddhism + Buddha Appearance, Seven Arts of Guigu Yin Fu + Vertical and Horizontal, Yin and Yang Five Elements + Astrology Arts: chess (data and control), medicine (Five Animals Play), poetry (textual intention), opera (deduction and imitation) Each of these is enough to fill in the skills of a character. See if you think about it, or just copy it from the game, animation, and novel. For details, you can check Baidu 6. Come on, author

Long Ya's natural ability is so abnormal, it can be deprived and devoured. As long as you play with Long Ya, you can directly turn the opponent's skills into your own, and the opponent will permanently lose this skill.

Isn't it right that you, Rikkai Dai, are not strong enough? During the Byodoin period, Rikkai Dai had no rivals in Kanto, but Seigaku Daiwa was a third-rate player during his time. He had never been in doubles in the Kanto finals, so he was so strong?

Tatekai had won 13 consecutive victories in Kanto before Yukimura, why don't you feel like it's not enough?

It feels like the author has changed a lot of things from the original settings. For example, Mori Juzaburo obviously studied at Shitenhoji Temple and transferred to Tatekai University in the second year of junior high school. Genichiro Sanada and the others were in the first year of junior high school at that time. By the time the protagonist appeared, Mori had already entered U17.

The writing is quite good. U17 hopes not to join the Chinese team because it is easy to collapse. Just follow the original work and it will be fine.

No, isn't Echizen Ryuya in the United States? Why did you end up in Japan? Long Ya probably didn't go to middle school in Japan, right?

It's impossible for ghosts to transfer schools. Ghosts play tennis because they want to make children happy, not to win.

Application format Name: (Chinese name) Age: (between 13 and 15 years old) Skills: (required) World-class skills (such as light hitting destruction, etc., Optional) Selfless state: (optional) Shura Shinto: (optional) Only eight people needed, first come, first served!

There are some details not written, such as ball speed

If you don't have a big breakthrough before the national competition, you will lose to Qing Xue. His special skill is Devouring. To be honest, the protagonist must at least be able to compete with Long Ya by destroying the root, crushing and destroying.

Brothers, how about this character Name: Long Yu Age: 15 Talent: Eye of the Emperor (the function can see through people's hearts and see through all skills and different dimensions, all skills can be directly copied after one look) The Body of the Emperor (the function is to prevent everything from being swallowed, and to increase its own attributes. This skill is mainly to prevent Echizen Ryuya's swallowing skills, these two skills will be automatically activated as soon as they come into contact with a tennis ball) National-level skills: Serve type (outside spin serve) (Dragon Roar) Smash: Meteor and fire shower Vertical jump play with center of gravity Counterattack type: Dazzling flowers - it can be divided into dozens of balls. The night is coming - it directly makes people see and hear darkness. The vast sea is boundless - no matter where the ball hits, no one can catch up, and it feels like it is far away. Defense type: Heavenly Emperor's Domain [The function is absolute defense. All balls will return to Long Yu unconsciously regardless of whether they are rotating or not. Those who can break this will only be if they are much stronger than Long Yu] World-class skills: [Destruction by light shot] [Secret shot ] [Dragon Ten Thousand Miles] - This is a serve. The tennis ball directly transforms into a dragon. This serve can be very fast or very slow. It may suddenly accelerate in the middle or not. You can control the acceleration of this skill by yourself. [Freezing Moment] - When playing, the opponent can freeze the opponent for more than ten seconds as long as he catches the ball. [Eight-foot Magatama] - directly transforms into hundreds of dazzling rays of light and hits the opponent, making the opponent unable to open his eyes. All the rays of light are randomly changing positions every second. [Backlash] - You can counterattack all the opponent's skills. The stronger your skills are, the stronger your skills will be. [Junling Tianxia] - The tennis ball directly transforms into thousands of troops and charges towards you. It directly presses you and makes you breathless and makes you have no courage to face the ball. This skill weakens the opponent's overall strength and can suppress the opponent's three levels of strength. [Falling Stars] Absolute power. [Heavenly Punishment] I haven't thought of this function yet, let's think about it 😂 Selfless Realm: The limit of understanding through repeated tempering, the limit of brilliance, the limit of seamlessness Asura Shinto: Lord of Heaven - Emperor Haotian

Both are Ichiro One is called Genichiro, and the other is Shinichiro One is called Genichi, and the other is named Shinichi Isn't that bad?

To be honest, anyone who has read the manga knows that even Byodoin doesn't dare to fight Ryuya easily. You are so powerful. The protagonist often fights Ryuya.

The ghost is one year higher than Byodo-in. According to what you wrote, Sanada and the first-year ghost of Byodo-in are already in I17

I used to watch The Prince of Tennis and I thought it was so irritating, but now I think it's just a middle school dream of a group of junior high school students?

Come in and complain when you see the name! I would like the author to first learn about Japanese names before writing a book... Anyone who can be called Ichiro is a boss, okay? Your name is so funny! If you write it as the elder brother, then Sanada has to be changed to Jiro, do you understand? 😅