Storms Arise in the Heavens

It's really frustrating to read. Everyone is meant to relax when reading online novels. It doesn't mean that they must be enjoyable, but at least they can make people feel at ease.

What I wrote earlier was all about looking for secrets. I can't stand it if I can still read it. The protagonist always needs to develop, and the novelty required for your development is too high for new authors. As soon as the plot of Siao Ao comes out, he starts to pretend to be a virgin bitch, and makes all kinds of excuses. It's disgusting 🤢, I'm leaving.

The book is a bit unpleasant to read. First of all, it does not change the battle of sword energy in Huashan. Secondly, at the beginning of the plot, the pig-footed mother-in-law is so long-winded. In the end, there was no heroine.

Also tell the author, the most important thing is that almost all the comments say that the protagonist is weak and aggrieved, and looks very depressed, but you say that the protagonist is invincible. You don't realize that your cognition has been biased, which is not good for writing at all. The most frightening thing is that you even have cognitive biases, and you don't realize it at all. This is the key

Author, you have made mistakes from the beginning. I feel that you have never let go of writing. You have written in a wretched and vulgar way, which is enough to make people pretend to be false. You are thinking about going over the cliff, and you are still in confinement. You are really strong-willed, can't you hide for a while? , You must go down? Also, since all the Huashan Sword Sect and Feng Buping were dead, why did they leave separately instead of inviting them to the village? You have to follow the plot, it's too rigid. When you get to the village, you can choose a few children, and it's not fun to train them. If you go down the mountain at the age of 10, and go up to Huashan to win the leadership in your 30s, you can cultivate a generation of Huashan people in the village. Pure and speechless

The Huashan Sect was formed by Hao Datong, one of the Seven Quanzhen Sons of Guangning, who integrated Quanzhen's own lineage, these disciples, and some scattered Taoist lines that originally existed on Huashan Mountain. At that time, the Quanzhen religion was destroyed by the Mongolian and Yuan Dynasties, and Hao Datong left Zhongnan Mountain, the ancestral home of Quanzhen, and came to Huashan. Become the leader of a faction. Hao Datong founded Huashan 20 to 30 years earlier than Zhang Sanfeng founded Wudang. From Hao Datong to Xianyu Tong, Huashan had been passed down for nearly a hundred years, and from Xianyu Tong to Yue Buqun it was about 150 years. The martial arts inherited by the Huashan School include the Eagle-Snake Life-and-Death Fight, Anti-Liangyi Sword Technique, Quanzhenxin Technique, Zixia Magic Kung Fu, Hunyuan Kung Fu (Hunyuan Palm), Bao Yuan Jin, and Chaoyang Kung Fu. Huashan Basic Internal Skills, Huashan Basic Swordsmanship, Yangwu Swordsmanship, Xiyi Swordsmanship, Jade Girl Golden Needle Nineteen Swords, Chaoyang Yiqi Sword, Death-Serial Three Immortal Swords, Stone-Breaking Jade Fist, Fuhu Palm, Iron Finger Technique, and Leopard Tail Legs. Jin Yan Gong, Si Guoya Secret Cave and some unknown sword skills.

Yi Buhui had peerless martial arts, and he did not suppress the Demon Sect or seize the Sunflower Book that was forcibly taken away by the Demon Sect. Yi Buhui also did not bribe masters to recruit disciples and cultivate his power. Why not bribe masters to recruit disciples? The author said that for Yue Buqun, it is enough to grant unequal people. Yi Buhui did not contribute anything to the Huashan Sword Qi Sect Two, so he asked the author to kill the damned people. The author hypocritically said that mass killing is not good, and asked the author to improve the strength of the Sword Qi Sect. The author said that he was afraid that the Sword Qi Sect's strength would increase greatly, and Yi Buhui would not be able to merge the two sects. The author was asked to destroy the three great Taibao of Songshan when they were in Hengshan City. The author said that they were not at the point of falling out with Songshan, so he turned around and arranged for Yi Buhui to destroy the second sword fight provoked by the Songshan sect. To merge the two sects, they still have to fall out with the Songshan sect, which also makes the Songshan sect have a clear understanding and defensive mentality of the strength of the Huashan sect. The author also wants the plot to be rounded and reasonable, but I don't see how the plot is reasonable at all?

After reading Chapter 39, I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist in the author's novel is unparalleled in martial arts during the opening moments of Swordsman, and even wears a vest. It's okay to just get a vest, but the key is that it's very unpleasant to watch. Fuwei Escort, Liu Zhengfeng washing his hands in a golden basin, and Jian Zong going to Mount Huashan seem particularly unpleasant, and the author is still looking for reasons. For example, in Fuwei Escort, when the protagonist kills a group of Qingcheng faction members and takes money to compensate the families of the deceased in the Escort, isn't it okay to tell Fuwei Escort to treat the families of the deceased well?

After learning so many superb martial arts, just this... Bah!

Not happy at all! Pig's feet are so powerful in martial arts. The level of internal strength has also been improved, and the martial arts have also been cultivated to an extremely high level. The result is as sloppy as some of the supporting characters in the original work. Not to mention invincible, at least you are worthy of the peerless martial arts skills of your predecessors! . . . The pig's feet are so frustrating and the author's writing is such a shame.

It's frustrating to watch, the main character is a bit weak

Don't click in and read it, it will poison you personally, abandon the book, the protagonist is not an ordinary loser, hesitant, behind the scenes, behind the scenes, the best dog in the world who has a good life, you don't want to kill him? Do you think this kind of book can still be read?

Overall, it's very good, I can give it 4.5 Points. There are two problems. 1. I don't know if Golden Finger has a time-travel function. If it does, it will continue to practice and evolve. If it doesn't, it will die in pride. These are two completely different routes. If you can continue to travel through time, the author's current thinking is very good, he has learned all the martial arts, and developed all kinds of trumpets, without involving relatives and friends. If you want to live a happy life, you must consider issues such as reputation, social status, inheritance, etc. 2. Why do Liu Zhengfeng and Quyang live? The author may have incorrect views! How many people did Qu Yang kill when he was promoted to protector, and then he just retired? Liu Zhengfeng and Qu Yang were killed, and it was okay to protect the rest of the Liu family. You just let him go without disturbing anyone. What an awesome operation! But the others are very good, they are obscene and well-developed, they don't pursue fame and fortune excessively, and they skillfully use the martial arts ideas of the Golden Book, they are all very good!

The protagonist is rubbish. He won't hold his breath when he reaches the ancient tomb, and he is given another test when he reaches Kunlun. He is really rubbish.

The author should reflect on this. The pacing is too slow, and it's okay for Yi Buhui to pretend to be a good Madonna, with neither power nor fame. As Mr. Jin Yong was writing the original novel, Yi Buhui did not put any pressure on the Demon Sect at all. He neither killed the elder disciples of the Demon Sect nor went to compete with Dongfang Bubai. He also did not change anything about the Huashan Sword Qi Sect. He only improved his martial arts strength. The purpose of rebirth and time travel is to change the status quo. According to the plot, why do you need to be reborn and time travel?

This book was renamed "New Swordsman" (including the prequel). I think it's better this way. The protagonist is dispensable and I just need to write a personal biography for him.

This book is unpleasant, the main character is useless and makes no sense. Swordsman, not many protagonists, many protagonists

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