Superpowers in Sky City

The first few chapters may be because Prince Haihuang is still a little unskilled in writing novels, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. But after reading the latest chapter, all I could think of was please update it soon. I still want to read it. .

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Support the prince! I've let others finish the writing and other things, so I'll just talk about my specific feelings here. Personally, I feel that the prologue is a big scene and the writing is not bad. However, the description of the specific scenes and the appearance of the characters is a bit too detailed and could be slightly blurred. The main part of the text is somewhat different from my imagination. I originally thought that the prince was going to write a more realistic system (like Jojo to fsn?), Or a purely modern world view (or low magic orientation? Anyway, my personal imagination before was closer to reality). I didn't expect that this world view is quite fantasy, and has a bit of a forbidden atmosphere... But the floating city has a bit of FF meaning, and by the way, I also thought of Double Star Story. Finally, let me say something unnecessary. I actually have a friend who has been writing novels on Tieba for more than ten years (basically he writes for his own entertainment, and his writing style is also very bland). If I have the opportunity, I may ask him to come over and have a look, and chat privately about the plot of the writing

Completed yesterday Overall, I was quite happy watching it, and I felt like I was watching Niqing (even with Niqing's unique characteristic of many people not being able to tell who is talking x). Many nerds were very happy watching it, and felt like they were smiling in despair. The writing is okay, sometimes I still feel like watching Anko. For example, the description of people's appearance in the early stage has the feeling of Anko's card introduction, but there is no detailed picture of the characters, so I can't imagine the appearance of the protagonist group. The most important thing is the hair color (sad) The style of the first volume and the second volume is very different. It feels like Giorno solved the Enthusiasm Organization in a short time in the first volume and then ran to form a club with Popo Koichi in the second volume. This volume is an introduction to the setting. At the beginning, it was quite a headache. The relationships between many characters were not very clear, and then at the end, there was a refreshing feeling of connecting all the previously doubtful points at once. Even so, it was still a headache in the early stage. Could you dig less holes or slowly get rid of it in the middle? The character design has always inherited the characteristics of the protagonist of Oji and Neptune, who is a talkative and talkative. Should I say it is a writing habit? Sometimes when the perspective is switched to Shigure-kun, it also gives me the feeling that he is a talkative and talkative. However, most of them are inner descriptions that are not expressed (so it should be said that he is a boring talkative. X It seems that due to the change of platform, the viewers Has the number decreased? After chasing it yesterday, I found out that I was the 52nd one. Are you saving up to watch it or what? (Sad) I will continue to chase it slowly. I hope Wang Zihaihuang can work hard and persevere. The light novel style feels quite rare at the beginning, so everyone should lead the trend of this style! Come on and work hard——!

DOMO, reader=mulberry. Shennong DESU is a very standard Japanese light novel. I guess the rich creative experience of the first four books has been fully utilized in this one (laughs). As the first original article, it is already excellent. Suggestions for latecomers, this book contains a lot of two-dimensional jokes, and the writing style has a strong Japanese light novel flavor (very different from Chinese online light novels), including but not limited to the protagonist carrying a tragic past and bitter hatred, the character's complaints anytime, anywhere, various Riddlers, Chekhov's Gun wholesaler, if you can accept it, this book must be a delicacy for you (appreciation)

This is Prince Poseidon's new work, Blessing~

For me, this book has a huge poisonous point, which is the setting of the male protagonist's psychological problems. I have already watched almost half of it, and the male protagonist is still crazy about self-esteem and self-hatred, despite the fact that the male protagonist has top combat power and brains, being a partner of justice every day, participating in repelling dragon disasters several times to desperately solve the world crisis, many times of deep inner enlightenment from friends such as the eldest lady knight, etc. Talking about it, the male protagonist has been saying "I am a waste, I have no value, I am not worthy of being loved by anyone, I can't do anything, and if I don't die, it will only bring disaster." It is incomprehensible, like the ravings of an extremely advanced black chuunibyou, completely incomprehensible and incomprehensible. This psychological problem setting continues from the beginning to the present (nearly halfway through the book), and has not been solved at all. It made me watch Hong Wen many times, and it was difficult to persuade myself to continue reading.

It's all a good thing

Hello, foreign friends! If you can see this message, it proves that my plan has been initially completed - please don't show such a suspicious look. This is just a small attempt based on interest and friendliness. Although the "security" of Cangqiong City has been much better than before after certain incidents occurred, unnecessary conflicts are still common here. If my attempt can help all outside friends avoid unnecessary friction and unpleasantness, I think it will be beneficial to both parties. Let me think about it - well, first of all... Be careful of the biochemical kangaroo. Sorry if you are in a hurry to read the survival rules—— Here, I would like to introduce the creature [Biochemical Kangaroo]. Boxing is not a patent for humans. This can be clearly understood from the kangaroos.        …………，1.5M But what if it's a ninja, a ranger, or a hunter? There is no doubt that normal kangaroos cannot defeat these people. So, if you are one of the above examples, or even have the experience of defeating a kangaroo, don't you need to worry? Big mistake! Friends... You have to know that this is the sky city, the dragon corpse in the sky. What's here is not the gentle mascot of Lingdao… what's here is a biochemical kangaroo. The average kangaroo's fighting power is equivalent to that of a human boxer. Their height is 1.5M. And the height of Sky City's biochemical kangaroo is - five meters! Oh my god, a whole five meters! Surpassing humans, surpassing cars, even the legendary war horse of the empire, Red Rabbit, is inferior in height! How high is five meters? Five meters, that's almost the height of a small house! And how powerful is the biochemical kangaroo's mobility? The answer is two meters. The biochemical kangaroo can move a distance of two meters in one leap. "I can do this too?" Wrong! Biochemistry•The two meters of a kangaroo are not two meters horizontally, but two meters vertically! Imagine a small house rushing towards you at a speed far exceeding that of a car: boom! The cabin is coming to you! Jump! The cabin jumped into the sky! Jump! The cabin is pressing down on you—— Car? Train? Shinkansen? Wrong! Wrong! Wrong! These things are simply not enough to describe the power of Biochemical Kangaroo! If I have to use a metaphor - this is almost like Groudon equipped with a three-dimensional mobile device! The knight can't do it! Not a ninja! Not even martial artists! Even the superpowers in this city can't compare with them - I'm afraid, only the strong men of the Disaster Club can fight against these demons! Biochemical kangaroo is really powerful! Biochemistry·Kangaroo is really awesome! Biochemical·Kangaroo, awesome!                    Believe me, friends. The biochemical kangaroo occupies a stranger place in this city than you might imagine. In most places in the city, there are clues of the Biochemical Kangaroo - such as the Biochemical Kangaroo Fort in a fast food restaurant, the flyers about the Biochemical Kangaroo concert on the roadside, and the Biochemical Kangaroo tattoos on some passers-by (generally very strong chest muscles). Even if you are just walking on the road, you may encounter a Biochemical Kangaroo charging towards you! The biochemical kangaroo riot at the beginning of this year is still fresh in the memory of countless people. I heard that if the legendary hero of the sky had not defeated the 18-meter-tall biochemical kangaroo leader one-on-one, the impact of that disaster would have been ten times or even... Fifty times greater!                                       So, what about the Biochemical Kangaroo Fort? Will it become easier to deal with the biochemical Kangaroo Castle after losing its life and even its body? Wrong! The father of Zero Island's karate once argued that the enemy holding a sword is the one who needs to be least wary - because he can only use a sword at this time! Will the sword master of Zero Island become weaker if he loses his sword? Would it be easier to defeat the empire's martial arts master if he dropped his gun? What about Morton's Knight? Even if you put down your weapon and rely on a branch, can't you easily defeat your opponent? The Dragon of the Sky is below! Will a biochemical kangaroo become weaker if it loses its body? A fantasy! They did not lose their bodies, but transcended life and death and gained an invisible personality! Every piece of biochemical kangaroo meat pie contains their immortal will! Even if the form is changed, the body is crushed, and finally made into actual cheap junk food, the will is not lost at all! Nowadays, the sales volume of Biochemical Kangaroo Castle is not high. Friends, can you guess why? Because it tastes bad... Heh, how could it be such a simple reason? This is the sky city, the dragon corpse in the sky, the gathering place of all human scientific research spirits, and the holy land where biochemical kangaroos were born. How could the food produced here—especially a warrior as fierce as the biochemical kangaroo—be so unpalatable? I believe you have also guessed that what changed the taste of Biochemical Kangaroo Fort is the Soul of Biochemical Kangaroo stored in Biochemical Kangaroo Fort! Every ordinary resident who eats the Biochemical Kangaroo Castle will compete with the Biochemical Kangaroo in the actual mysterious spiritual space. Tragically, the vast majority of people cannot resist this wild violence. They fail and suffer heavy losses in their mental space. The human brain is unwilling to process the horrific scene of this actual nightmare! The poor people who encountered G·R·S (Kangaroo·Reality·Shock) in their minds reduced that long hell to a moment. "It tastes so bad!" This is the only impression left by people. Is it really tasteless? No! The true identity of the weird taste is the self-defense mechanism in the human brain. "Don't come again!" The brain wails like this, but to this day, some people are still insisting on buying Biochemical Kangaroo Castle. Why is this? The answer is courage! The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage! The greatness of mankind is the greatness of courage! To this day, every Thursday, there are always warriors who come to the fast food restaurant, with great courage, and use a small amount of money in exchange for the opportunity to fight one-on-one with the biochemical kangaroo! "Gu! Gu! Gu!" The warriors were defeated again. "Are you kidding, you bastard!" "Dogs, I'm going to kill all of you!" "The harvest is great... Can be used for next time..." Indeed, they fell, but every time another Thursday comes, the warriors will step into the fast food restaurant and once again fight the biochemical kangaroo without blood and tears! People who respect and fear the brave call this day crazy with their current demeanor. Their fight with the biochemical kangaroos continues today! Do you understand? Even the sky city, even the superpowers on the dragon corpse in the sky, can't resist the biochemical kangaroo! But if they can really defeat the biochemical kangaroo in the spiritual space, these brave creatures will hand over their power to the warrior who defeats them. Note 1 Friends from the outside world... Please be careful of the biochemical kangaroo. This is the advice that the superpowers living in Sky City do their best to give you. But if you have enough courage and determination, take a look at these creatures... What have humans lost during evolution? What else was gained? The so-called blessings and misfortunes depend on it. That flashing green figure may be a signpost that guides you to the meaning of evolution. [Note 1]: According to Mr. Majin's theoretically impossible dual ability, coupled with his active performance in the Biochemical Kangaroo Riot, it is very likely that he is the only warrior who won the first battle against the Biochemical Kangaroo Castle. In recognition of him, the disembodied Kangaroo will come to help during the battle. Perhaps on the other side of the devil's dream, he and the biochemical kangaroo have reconciled and run together on the endless sandy plains.

Brother, I will definitely give you the recommendation vote because you have been diligently updating in the past few years in the Tieba forum. But to say a few ugly words, there is a difference between fan fiction and original work. The entire three chapters of yours are in a fog. At a glance, you probably only know that there must be something fishy about the city and the people with superpowers. How many pure Qidian readers can it attract? Let's start Chapter 3 quickly.

1. The devil's tears can cure cancer, but he never cries. 2. The devil never sleeps, he waits. 3. Demon is suing Cangqiong City, claiming that "science" and "mystery" are just two trademarks of his left and right feet. 4. Majin's main export product is fear. 5. If you can see the devil, the devil can also see you. If you are rude, you are not far from being hospitalized. 6. The devil counted from negative infinity to positive infinity, twice. 7. Majin never "fights", because this word means that he may lose, Majin goes directly to "send people to the hospital" 8. Majin never wears clothes, he just wears white matter. 9. The devil has 1/2 dragon blood - this has nothing to do with his ancestors, this guy directly killed a dragon! 10. The last paragraph of "Historical Records of Sky City" states that all records were actually created by the devil, and this book only records those who are close to him. 11. There is no heart under the demon's chest, there is only a sword there. 12. When the demon used white matter to slash people again, the speed was so fast that it exceeded the speed of light. He traveled back in time and killed the Dragon of the Sky two thousand years ago. 13. The idea of ​​Cheerios is just that the devil wants to eat bread. 14. The demon is ten feet tall and weighs two tons. He cannot spit fire but the red lion can. He can be hit by guns without falling down. 15. Sky City was built to trap the devil, but he failed miserably. 16. If you ask the devil... What time is it now? He will tell you the time properly, provided you are polite enough. 17. The devil drives a sports car that can turn into a robot. 18. The demon once gave his heart to the dragon in exchange for his power. Then he chopped off the dragon's head with a sword and took back the heart. The dragon didn't know why but didn't get angry and was very grateful. Now they are drinking tea in the dream of the demon at noon on Wednesday. 19. There are no gangs in Sky City, only a list of "Demon is too lazy to send them to the hospital" 20. Demon once spent an hour eating three giant biochemical kangaroo castles, and he spent the first forty-five minutes of this hour flirting with the eldest lady from the empire.

One chapter of the novel is not as large as the one update in the post forum before, but it will be slower to write. I will try hard to write more and try to keep it updated every 1-2 days) The update time is about eight o'clock in the evening. This is my first time writing a novel, and I lack experience in many aspects. I will try my best to write it well~ In addition, the cover was drawn by Teacher Yimo (Weibo Yimo No Cat). I would like to express my gratitude here. Attached is a large picture of the cover without words and a simple character design drawn by Teacher Yimo.

He looks like but his joy is eternal The Dragon of Void Light, ()! Artist: Me

The villains of the Prince and Neptune Universe met for an annual meeting, but Ji Diao was late Ji Diao: Sorry, urgent matters and chores were piled up, and I wasted some time in order to create trouble for the martial artist. Gove (Fat Director): What is the important thing? limbo: What are chores? Good and Evil: What creates obstacles for martial artists? Aurus: What is sorry? (Imitated the online writer's joke and wrote a Prince Universe version, picture 1 music)

God among gods, the last time I saw such a powerful and powerful second dimension was Bai Tanlang. It is a pity that the old man was deeply in a mental crisis and has not been involved in worldly affairs for a long time. The third volume of Strategic Angel is far away. I hope the author will not be so easy to let the power of the strong be stimulated and continue to create more surprises.

Interestingly, there is no such two-dimensional novel that is not too two-dimensional. It is a two-dimensional text that is more in line with the language habits and thinking habits of our Chinese people.

~Summary of the background and setting up to the end of the Tyros War~ Is this a session similar to the teacher's small class in the past? But before I talked about the settings of other works, this time I talked about the settings I made myself, which is a bit uncomfortable to think about. But let's put the teacher's picture here) Well, a few days ago, a friend pointed out in a post that the setting of this game is a bit complicated. I thought it was true, but saying too much would spoil the rest of the content, so I will sort out here the background setting and character setting [already introduced in the book] until the end of the Tyros battle, when the two chatted at the ramen shop. By the way, I will write some of my own thoughts and mark them with (). The following are the regional forces that have appeared. ·Celestial City The main stage of the story is the flying city floating in the sky at the border between the Empire and the United States. The superpower shelter city is jointly managed by the Empire, the United States, and the Kingdom. Its predecessor was the Sky Dragon that came ten years ago. The total population is 5.7 Million, most of whom are people with super powers. It is known as a high-tech city, but it is actually famous for its unlimited experiments and biochemical technology products that do not see much practical value, such as biochemical horses and biochemical pigeons. It was nicknamed the Big Prison by local students. The whole city is divided into several areas. The Thorny Area where Gongsun Ce lives and the Dingyi Area where the battle took place have already appeared. ·Yongguang Empire referred to as the Empire. A big country with an oriental impression, the country where the protagonist comes from. The ruler is called the "Emperor". In the plan to build the Sky City, dragon corpses and a large amount of manpower were provided. ·United States of Usters Referred to as the United States. A big country bordering the empire, praising freedom and open people. In the plan to build the Sky City, financial support and technological assistance were provided. ·Morton Kingdom Kingdom for short. An island country located in the southwest of the United States. It was once a country with strong mysterious power, and there seemed to be strong men called knights. Alice Adar is a member of the Wild Hunt unit affiliated with the Knights. In the plan to build the Sky City, it provided assistance in inhibitor technology and undisclosed impermanence methods. Suffered heavy losses in the Kingdom Collapse incident three years ago. ·Zero Island The country where the protagonist's friend, Shigure Reiichi, was born. Judging from the name, it seems to be an island country. Then there are the organizations that have appeared up to this point. At this point, apart from the Mithril Pillar (affiliated to the United States), which has only been mentioned by name, only the Wild Hunt troop to which Alice belongs and the dragon worshipers of Tyros and the Starmen appear. The Wild Hunting Force is an organization established by the government to supplement manpower after the collapse of the kingdom. Its main members are mainly hunters who have accepted employment or hunting commissions in the past, and are active in gray areas to make profits. Dragon worshipers are fanatics who were influenced by the dragon after the dragon disaster and gained unknown knowledge, thus becoming mentally distorted. The two members who have already appeared are vicious mages. Then comes the ability settings of the characters on the scene. The abilities currently available can be divided into two categories: superpowers and impermanence. Among them, superpowers are supernatural phenomena that are actively triggered by superpowers and are not supported by principles. The method of impermanence is a dragon-slaying technique specially used to deal with dragon disasters. It is divided into seven phases: silence, spirit, emptiness, Brahma, wonder, misfortune and desolation, and the five realms of spiritual illumination, clarity, spiritual communication, manifestation and creation. Gongsun Ce's Moment Spiral The ability is manifested by special telekinesis and solid white matter. When activated with telekinesis, it can make simple attacks, assist its own actions, and can also be used as a means of detection. When activated in the white material state, it is often used to create unreasonably powerful weapons or for defense. The attack speed is faster when used as an invisible force, and it is more powerful when turned into a white substance. Why are you given such a name by your friends? He himself didn't seem to like the nickname very much. (I think this is a very convenient ability in actual combat, but it will be a bit difficult to deal with being pulled away from a long distance or fighting close to each other.) Qin Qianbai Property Change Change the "properties" such as the hardness, stiffness, strength, and stiffness of the object. A common method is to turn the things at hand into indestructible weapons. The range of the ability does not seem to be long. (Every time when conceiving the follow-up plot, you have to think about how to use this ability. After all, if it just hardens and turns black, it seems to be domineering.) Alice Adar Shadow Blue Orchid Alice's Brahma form and spiritual communication, the flower blooming in the shadow. You can transport yourself or the materials you come into contact with between flowers. Things touched by flowers can also be included in this scope. Judging from the fact that flowers can be placed in the pants pocket, the definition of "shadow" required to activate the ability seems to be very broad. (Even if there are many restrictions, I personally think this is a very convenient ability.) The starman who makes strange sounds The sky-piercing snake The starman's desolate aspect·tongshen, the red purposeless snake. The snake moves extremely fast and will not be interfered by any material or ability except the star himself and the locked enemy. After being strengthened by Gongsun Ce's ability, he was knocked unconscious and cracked with one punch. (If the star body is also in its heyday, this ability is actually quite good for one-on-one combat. If it is one-to-many...) Tyrros K Dissociation of the Demonic Body Tyrros's desolate aspect, trance, turns his own flesh and blood into poison that corrodes matter. Make full use of every piece of flesh and every drop of blood to create a variety of attacks. Coupled with the strong corrosiveness of its attacks, it can be said that it is very difficult to deal with in all aspects. When this ability is released, the important body (heart) will turn into an immovable red ball. It was broken after being stabbed by Alice's short arrow. (Wide range of abilities, strong lethality, immortality against most attacks, attacks at all normal distances... A very comprehensive enemy. At first I was thinking about removing the weakness of the core fixation, but then I thought about it and thought it would be too much to not impose some restrictions. If Ace's white matter cannot withstand his attacks, this fight will be difficult.) So, that's the end of this short summary. I actually compiled so many settings. It's quite interesting to take a quick look at them. As the plot progresses, these settings that are not discussed in detail will become more detailed. The next time I will make this summary will probably be at the end of the first volume. If you have any questions that do not involve spoilers, you can reply in the post or here, I will read them)

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Artist: Yimo The inner lining in the second picture is the tights worn by Cold Steel when making armor in the midfield, and it is also the night suit in volume one.

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