Extraordinary Bloodline Integration

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author is very weird, he uses a lot of jokes, and the ingredients are very mixed. The writing style is there, not bad, and it looks like an experienced author at first glance. There are no major flaws, and the action scenes are acceptable and worthy of a watch. Disadvantages, it doesn't matter if it is a joke, but if there are too many stitches, it will be a word, and it will be messy. I wonder if the author has incorporated Infinite Flow into this book. Even though he has a reading threshold, the exciting fighting cannot cover up the author's self-pleasure when writing. He did not consider the rationality of the combat system and characters at all. The second thing is that the writing is not good enough. The most typical ones are the wrong plot rhythm and the way of promoting the plot that can be called intellectual reduction, as well as the facial makeup of the characters. The protagonist is embryonic killer and warlike, but other than that, nothing else. The other aspects are too weak to stand up. People are not single, they should be complex. As for the male protagonist, in a sense, he is just a tool for self-pleasure described by the author. Then chat, personal opinions, scolding at will. It's easy to write novels with labels like embryo-killing, kingly way, and macho man. You can just describe whatever character has a strong image in your mind, but writing it well is not an easy task. Here I recommend referring to Yin Tian Shenyin's Soul of Burning Steel. It is not to start a fight, and the book is not perfect, but he has achieved a very important point. The male protagonist Joshua, this character is really standing up, complex and simple, humane and divine. The interesting thing about Joshua is that it is reasonable for this person to have no partner, it is too pure, and this should be the benchmark for a macho and crazy character design.

1. The main plot is unclear, the system is dispensable, and the story does not revolve around upgrades 2. There are no questions, and there are not enough bloodlines.

The emotional part is almost meaningless😔

Too few updates and irregular updates

It's totally not enough. Please update more soon!

Hong Kong comic version of Giant of Light

There are indeed some remarkable things about this book. My favorites are Fahai's violent beating of Tathagata, Linghu Chong's hand tearing up the Japs, and Golden Lion King's sword of 999. What moved me even more was the love and loyalty between Wu Song and Li Kui, the love and hatred between Iron Man and Medusa, the love story between Jia Baoyu and Fire Cloud Evil God, Liu Bei and Pai Daxing. It was really tear-jerking and emotional. It was so touching. What I remember most recently is the plot of Kai chasing Zeus. It is so exciting that I can't wait to replace it! But it is not as good as the pig's foot. All the equipment in the beginning depends on roaring. It is so unfair! What touches me the most is the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. Zhang Fei did not hesitate to marry Wang Mang in order to save Wang Mang. My brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun, turned against him, especially when I read about Guo Jing's position as leader of the Sun Moon God Cult and his resolute wandering around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue. Linghu Chong participated in the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father. Dong Zhuo's incarnation was a detailed one-overthrowing forces such as the Tiandihui and the Honghuahui, and the bravery and fearlessness of Jinlun Dharma King Yishou Xiangping.

A perfect score of 10 points would give me a passing score of 6 points. The deduction points are mainly for the characters, especially the pig's feet. The setting of the pig's feet is a bit outrageous. He is a monk, a shadow sect, and has a murderous personality. When I saw this, I felt very outrageous. The initial setting of the pig's feet was a high school student who had just finished the college entrance examination! Playing a game, even if it is a holographic game, where one has a split personality and a murderous personality, it is simply unparalleled in the world, and it is not such a way to make up for the setting.

Let me see how many people like me came from Mowen (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑)

I'm so surprised. The author obviously doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, but he still writes it like a 💩 again and again. The protagonist is worthy of being Zha Cheng. There are many women like those in urban novels seven or eight years ago. She met the protagonist once outside, and she just fell in love with her.

Regarding the ending of Tomb of the Dragon, my evaluation is that the author copied Hai Hu's bad job plot and wrote a bad job plot.

Mo Cheng (serious face): What I say next may be unbelievable, but you must believe me and never laugh! Mo Wen: Don't worry, brother, we are professionally trained and generally don't laugh unless we can't help it. Mo Cheng: The author said, I will be very Asasi! Mo Luren, Mo Wen: Pfft Mo Cheng: Why are you laughing Mo Luren: I thought of something happy Mo Cheng: What I said is true! Believe me! It's really Asashi! It's that rare kind! Mo Wen handed over a piece of paper: Is this what you are talking about? Mo Cheng took it and took a look, and said angrily: This is Y'Shaarji, I already told you it's Y'Shaaxi, come on! You shouldn't mess with me even if you mess with dragons or tigers. I can't stand you even if I bear shit or piss! Mo Wen: The poor, weak and powerless, the weak and powerless, oh la oh la oh la!

There is too much nonsense during the battle, which is a common problem in Japanese comics. If there is not so much beeping, can we just finish it? I recommend watching Soul of Burning Steel

After reading Chapter 26, the article is full of Japanese anime chuuniu atmosphere, as well as the anime character model of the protagonist mentioned by the author. After searching online, I just want to say, it is so ugly that I can't stand it for the time being. I'd better put it on the bookshelf and wait until I have a chance to read it again.

This book is a very good book even if you cut out the part about talking to women. It looks really embarrassing.

Weird In order to get out of the forest to protect the little girl → To protect the little girl and start a business → In order to start a business, he took in a bunch of old, weak, sick and disabled → In order to protect the old, weak and sick, he saved the princess → In order to save the princess, he used his 7th level body to fight against the 9th level strong man → Then he fought hard with the eighth level Not all seventh level heroes, how come the protagonist still lives like a rat in the ditch? The city-state system of personal power requires such a thing as identity proof? ? ? ? You still save the princess and the city at every turn, but the country is not at level 9? Not level 8? And where is the school principal? Are they all dead? Where is the 8th level female wolf king? The performance of the dragon blood at level 3 is so bad that the hybrid dragon will be exhausted after fighting in the arena. The charge of lightning strike at level 1 can break through level 9. Lightning strike is not the ultimate skill

Look at other authors, and then look at our author, shouldn't the author express something?

Can anyone rank the background strength of all current heroes? For example Mortal level: basically relies on its own skills to make a living. Represents things like bounties, guns, airplanes, Juggernaut* and the like Supernatural level: blessed with various powerful alien energies For example, Maxi (look at the ultimate move), Ice and Fire Sisters (powerful mage) Wandering, Almighty (I think it may be underestimated), TK (the pinnacle of the technology system?) And the like. ＊Some heroes are decorated with plot treasures (extremely high presence, changed voice), which will increase the intensity of the plot, such as the Dragon Soul Blade Sword Master and the Mystery Blade pa Demi-god level: ancient strong men, various mythical beasts and demons Two-headed dragons, Karl, prophets, beasts, etc. God level: It is clearly stated in the plot that it is a god/big devil Zeus and his son, the Great Sage, Doomsday, TB (treasure) Quasi-creation level: like those living celestial systems and the embodiment of the basic laws of the universe. Mystery, Ice Soul, Phoenix, Light Chaos, etc. True Creation Level: Does not really appear, just as a supplement. The big bull without self-fragmentation, the electric dog who was once one with the two ruins, gave birth to the original existence of light law chaos. The above is just one person's opinion, to make Bo Jun laugh, and to provide some plot intensity considerations for the author's subsequent skill extraction. There is also a gap in strength between the same levels. If you fight across one level, it is theoretically possible for the weak to defeat the strong (environment, quantity, improvisation), but if you fight across two levels, it is basically impossible. Brothers are welcome to rate and discuss the plots of your commonly used heroes.

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body, which also makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother hurts the body or not, what does it have to do with the sister? Hurry up and add more updates, brother

I haven't read it for a long time. I don't know if the author's sanity has recovered. Halfway through the book, I went to a different world to have fun. Is it a card secret in the new world?

What a bastard! It's really not good to have this kind of enemy who can't be defeated but secretly messes with the protagonist behind his back!

Leveling up is so disgusting, the setting that allows you to use experience to upgrade the Death Legion pops up out of nowhere.

A little complaint I see that some parts now feel a bit like Japanese light novels. A little more troublesome, a little tougher, fighting and solving enemies is okay, but the other plots are too soft. Don't give people the impression that they are ruthless in words, but the plot is in reality. This is not subversive enough, not crazy enough. If you are afraid that the plot will collapse, don't write a subversive guy. If you are afraid of this or that, the protagonist will be restrained in everything. Just say that the protagonist is a good person and has the ideal of a blue dream. It is more comfortable to use character ideals to promote the plot. The protagonist has a little personality, and the mother-in-law is also very good. . , But others will understand. I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I hope there will be some confusion in the future. I see that the current character design is too single, and I keep talking about how ruthless and crazy I am. I hope other chapters will follow in the future, otherwise the plot will be too deliberate.

The skills have been pumping and the combat power has been increasing, but now it is 33%. I feel that the combat power has not been significantly improved compared to the time when it was 18%. In terms of performance, it takes two seconds to hit level 8. A weak level 8 punch can explode with 1000% of the force. At a normal level 8, either the opponent will be seriously injured and run away or both sides will be injured. The plot trend highlights the frequent occurrence of accidents. The protagonist's goal has never been achieved and he is spinning around in the whirlpool of fate. I was stimulated by the assassin's time echo and took the blame. In order to cover his teammates' escape, he attacked the city and killed innocent guards. It was quite inexplicable. Was it a temporary branch route? That's not to say that the protagonist is a bad guy, but in the past, he was more or less a lunatic with a normal moral bottom line. This time, is the personality of the killer monk starting to merge? Let's see what happens next. Looking forward to a rebound in the future!

The writing is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. However, I am looking forward to the author's next book. I have finished reading Lord God, Mo Wen, and Chaofan. I believe the author will bring a better story in the next book.

The name of this book should be called "Records of Obscene and Obscene Conventionalism"

This book is too rough. It gave me the feeling that the author didn't know how to foreshadow the story, and the shaping aspect was very weak. The emotional scenes have no feeling, the fighting scenes lack logic, the literary scenes all rely on harsh words, and there is a lack of key plots. Take two specific questions as examples: First, the acting is really too casual. This book is written based on the skill settings of Dota, plus a custom setting of the game system. Highlight an idea and write it wherever you think. Let's not talk about the combat power system that collapsed at the beginning. There is no one in the book who has more third-level than seventh- and eighth-level people. The bigger problem is that there is no system at all in combat. How to fight depends on the author's random explanation. Especially the moves in Hong Kong comics can be used just by calling out the name, without knowing the principle at all; d The ota skill is even more convenient. The author has extra abilities whenever he needs it. Dragon blood can inexplicably transform him into a dragon. How can the Ruyi Stick Technique make the stick bigger? Where does the brainwashing and life-shortening abilities of Baptism come from? Although it is actually reasonable to say that it is skill development, the further it goes, the more outrageous it becomes. Even if you leave some foreshadowing in advance, I won't call you green-skinned. The game formula: a strong enemy appears + a domineering skill name pops out of the stone + make up a temporary explanation of how this skill came from the green skin + kill the enemy + some useless Hong Kong comic strongman language to increase the momentum + some rigid trash talk scenes Secondly, the author seems not to know how to make the plot effective. If you were to write a plot of betrayal, a person who had just met but was not familiar with him was bewitched by a villain who died as soon as he appeared and was suddenly resurrected without a single word of explanation. His temperament changed drastically in less than 100 words. After backstabbing the highest level of combat power in the world, he was upgraded from a rookie to a full level in less than 1 second. Then he talked about the tyranny of the world and the entangled friendship between you and me, and wanted to have a fierce decisive battle with you... What kind of experience was it reading? This is the second biggest shortcoming of this book. It doesn't matter if the main line is vague, and it doesn't matter if the connection between the front and back is weak. The fun points and the climax can be mixed as a web article. But if the independent plot segments cannot be written to be effective, it is really hopeless I don't know if there will be improvement in the future, but I won't read it yet.

When it comes to the new map in Chapter 500, it's a bit rubbish to click on the 10 skills you want. A normal person would definitely choose 10 skills. After all, there's not much difference between choosing one out of three. The author just wants to keep his hair and numerical values ​​from collapsing

It's just a template for traveling through another world. It's better to be a little newer. Forget it when it comes to World of Warcraft and Sword Master.

This book is out of date now, but if it matches the brain waves, it is still worth reading.