I Have a Broken Game Board

The rhythm, level, and story are all there, but there are some issues with the standards. If it's not time travel, or a lucky person suddenly gets a golden finger, it's no problem to deal with it this way, just like the common people are nameless. It can be said that we have traveled through time. I believe that readers will feel various discomforts when they step into the shoes...

The author is most likely a girl 🙂. This kind of female channel writing style has specific descriptions of emotions and each character. I dare to ask which female channel boss opened a small account to test the waters of male channels! The writing is definitely top-notch among novels, a rare fairy grass!

Whether this book is cool or not depends entirely on the author's skill. The writing style of this book is smooth and the images are clear. There are many advantages and many disadvantages. I hope the author will be great, carry forward the advantages and make up for the shortcomings. This book has a foundation of popularity. Please give your best support to the author. I wish you will write better and better novels. 🤭🤭🤭

I understand. When traveling through time, the protagonist's brain was caught in the door panel, so he only remembered that he was a time traveler and forgot everything else.

After reading about ten chapters, it feels like a puppet show. The author may not have lived in a rural area. When children fight, a group of people will come out to reason like acting, which is nonsense. Otherwise, no one cares. Each family takes the child back and beats it up, and then it is just after dinner.

After reading dozens of chapters, I just feel horrible. The protagonist has completely forgotten his identity as a time traveler, and his state of mind has completely reduced to that of a child. At first, the protagonist will feel embarrassed, but later on, he will completely show off for a child. He even feels that learning is a happy thing. Even with the help of plug-ins, it is not easy for hundreds of thousands of modern people to survive. Especially when going to the county town, the protagonist was even crying, and this was only a few years ago. From my perspective, the protagonist must be at least an adult when he travels, and has his own set of perfect values ​​​​and world view. He has completely integrated into this world. This is no longer called integration. This is assimilation and transformation into the appearance of this world. I didn't see the back, and I don't know the reason for the protagonist's time travel, but it seems too damn conspiracy theory to me.

That's right, after the young master came, the protagonist lost his ego and opinion and became like a puppet. Not like an adult. Leave him as soon as possible, he is not a good person. If it affects your future, why do you need others to judge you when you do your own thing? Just grab him and run away. I guess this coward doesn't have the courage.

After reading Chapter 70, the protagonist just pretended to be young when he was a child. After so many years, he used to pretend to be a child and now he has become a child, and his IQ has not improved. When I first read about the protagonist's skills and that skill, I thought the protagonist would do something, at least change his family's situation. Unfortunately, the protagonist did nothing, and then followed that young man. I thought the protagonist wanted to repay his brothers, but it turned out that he still didn't. After chapter 70, I couldn't see what the author wanted to write.

Very boring and watery! The pig-footed man was reborn, and so was his IQ. He was a childish and disgusting person!

The more I write this, the less it looks like an adult reincarnation.

In reality, children are smarter now when they are three or four years old, because they are well fed and have different exposures. A dozen years ago, if you look at the children in rural areas, their noses would be swollen at the age of eight or nine and they would not understand anything. Many people had no memory before they were five or six years old. You are less than three years old and so smart. Are you possessed by a monster?

Let's just say that the protagonist who was written when he was a child is destined not to be recognized by most readers, and will be labeled as a minority from the beginning. No one likes to see how young children are, especially in novels.

Vomited, did you really become a child by pretending to be a child? You are also jealous of a child. You are drunk.

The author is serious, the protagonist is a child of several years old. .

How did you come to the conclusion that the bones are not good? Doesn't it mean that spiritual energy will appear every time you upgrade, so you absorb a loneliness? Even if a pig is fed Reiki every day, its physical body will become close to Reiki. Such a protagonist is considered to be physically weak. , Did those geniuses grow up in spiritual bubble baths?

The soul of a 30-year-old, the speech and gestures of a 3-year-old child

Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs and died of poison in Chapter 10

A rural area with low productivity These people have their own theories Author, you need to understand the group of characters you are describing... Do you understand these? You must write these family stories...

From start to finish! No sense of pleasure at all! What you see when you are strong is full of frustration! Maybe I don't deserve to read such a good novel! Reality is tiring enough! I only want to spend money to read books that make me happy!

I can only say that it was too slow to pick up, and I had no desire to read it. I skipped the interpersonal relationships and mainly read a few chapters about learning martial arts with the young master. The description of the protagonist is too young. There is no need to write so much about the people and things in the village. Sooner or later, the protagonist will leave here and go to a bigger stage.

If the author said that it would be okay to explain some realms normally, but seeing how seriously you talk about it, I really want to say that there is indeed a problem with your division of realms. If the protagonist is really that talented, why would he need to practice the so-called sword power? Isn't it more useful to instill the will to practice the sword into your body and master every muscle fiber and cell in your body than to practice this sword? To put it bluntly, things like swordsmanship and marksmanship are a method of body control. How to draw a sword, use a gun, and how to use a knife are all determined by the body. Moves are just a by-product, a skill. Being able to inject will into the body, every breath, every movement, everything heard and touched, as well as the blessing of Yuanwu Dao's mental state cultivation, as long as you understand how to use this weapon, as long as you pick up a weapon, you will be a sword master with a sword, with a gun you will be a spear master, and with a bow and arrow you will be a marksman with perfect shots. The so-called moves are techniques for defeating enemies. If the body is controlled to this extent, the opponent's every breath, every look, and every movement will be able to know his next move. You can even directly find a way to crack the opponent's moves and use moves that are completely targeted at him. The protagonist seems to believe in the sword more than the body using the sword. Think of the sword as your core, and your body is used to use the sword instead. It's hard for me to imagine that the Yuanwu Saint given by the author created this cultivation method in order to use foreign objects to become stronger, rather than to be "powerful".

The author's writing is very beautiful. I have to say that this is a novel with grand scenes and human touch among all the books I have read. The admiration between master and disciple, the dangerous turmoil in the world, and the heart of a close friend. It is a rare novel. I hope to finish it.

Do children say they are looking for death when they fight? I haven't heard it since my childhood.

The protagonist upgrades too quickly, his abilities are too comprehensive and powerful, and his moral values ​​are based on saints. There is no sense of cultivation and expectation like at the beginning.

It was fine at first, but when I got to the county, I couldn't watch it any more.

The end of "Spreading Flowers", with such bleak data, being able to finish writing it is much better than many eunuchs. Did the author forget about the protagonist, the master, in the later ending? Didn't the protagonist tell us about his family? Or just take it away

This book is so good, but why are so few people reading it? It's not even on the list.

I didn't want to read Chapter 333 when Qingyu died. It was annoying.

So if it's so well written, why doesn't anyone read it? Why do you feel so tepid?

I mentioned that lowering one's intelligence is childish. Is there any misunderstanding about high school students? 🙂 You have just graduated from high school and have not yet entered the society. If you are still a good boy, your naivety will be beyond your imagination. 🙂 However, it does not rule out that some people come out of the society too early and put themselves in the role 🙂 I think the author's writing is acceptable. Nowadays, high school graduates will feel naive 🙂