I Can Enlighten Everything

The character of the protagonist is a big problem. You can be a good person, but don't be an ignorant and naive person.

Are you sure you want to let those bandits go? Just because you only rob money and don't kill people, you can let it go? Damn it, this paragraph is really childish.

After seeing Chapter 11, I got mad. Let someone use a fruit knife to cut your hand to break your defense? Your equipment has defense and you need such obvious pretense (ー_ー)!! The pretense is so low, with no real character, like a fool, the supporting character was shocked by the forcible intelligence, and slipped away ———————————————— Forced pretense is the most deadly 😓

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I really don't understand why those people are so violent, but I like this style of writing very much. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Why doesn't Qidian say "If you don't like it, you can block it and never recommend it!"

It was close to Chapter 200 before the protagonist fell out with those aristocratic families and recognized his own path. Before that, the protagonist was like being tricked into a monkey. Although it was a reasonable psychological growth, readers would be disgusted by it! It would be great if this psychological process could be condensed into dozens of chapters, and the protagonist is an extremely positive and reasonable protagonist who can easily be manipulated by others. I am a criminal and my family is not guilty, but I can make profits for my family. The protagonist has nothing to do with these family members. The criminal ran away, and the criminal is still behind the scenes to protect his family and deter other unscrupulous competitors 😅 - Now everyone knows why many novels like to write decisive and murderous protagonists! If you are unreasonable, there is nothing others can do to you. If you are reasonable and have a bottom line, the weak will be bullied and massacred, and the strong will be resisted by others using legal principles, and they cannot even take revenge.

After reading two chapters, I thought I had found a good book. But starting from the third chapter, I became more and more disappointed. After about ten chapters, I completely bowed to you. Are you still pretending to be a fairy? A properly behaved loser

The more I look at the 25th picture, the more interesting it becomes. Forgive me for saying something wrong before.

Many trolls complain that the protagonist has an average IQ. It is said at the beginning of the book that the protagonist is an ordinary college student. He has not yet stepped out of school and has been severely beaten by society. He also has almost no work experience. He is a complete social novice, so he seems immature in all aspects of dealing with people. This is very logical and there is nothing wrong with it. I think the author writes very realistically.

The three outlooks are normal. He is not Long Aotian, nor is he mentally ill, nor is he highly intelligent and anti-social. It is just an ordinary person who has not rounded up his horns and has unusual encounters, and eventually grows into an extraordinary leader.

Very good idea. I have persisted through more than 70 chapters, but I still can't stand it. It's too weak, and my interest has slowly worn away.

It's a very bad book. No matter how bad the other books are, it's a big deal that I won't read it. The bad thing about this book is that I regretted reading it even after reading it. After reading it, I have to curse a few words before I feel comfortable giving up.

It starts after more than thirty chapters. To choose a skill, you have to think about a whole chapter in your mind. I spent a lot of space writing about irrelevant things, such as social structure and population composition, and kept comparing it with the current society. I'm not interested in the structure of this world that Ning made up. I'm here to see the story, not to understand the background. What's more, isn't the background of this world the background of ancient martial arts? You can get through it in just a few words, but I don't understand why it can be so watery.

Drive high and go low, lose your temper, and talk nonsense all the time

Why is the Reader's Anger Report? I read this book, and after reading the first chapter, I thought, oh, the grass jelly, eat it in one bite, damn it, it contains 💩, hold back your nausea, read it again, um, it seems to be okay again, take another bite? Damn, still 💩. You said it's hard for readers, but I wonder if the author has a system to collect anger! After reading twenty chapters, I basically want to kill the author...

Well, after reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Brother, you are too boring. The first part should be the essence. Then I read the comments. It's over. I can't read it. In this comment, the later parts are even more stained and watery.

The writing is very good. It truly tells the story of an ordinary person who travels to another world and adapts to this world carefully while maintaining his self-reliance. He has great power and does not act recklessly. The IQ of the protagonist and supporting characters are all online. The logic is very clear. The plot unfolds slowly and is very interesting. ^ω^

Grass jelly → food → tasteless → mentally retarded protagonist After reading Chapter 70, I felt that the supporting character's IQ was on the line, and the protagonist's IQ was pressed to the ground and rubbed by the author. . .

This book has some minor points, but I didn't read it as much as the reviews said. After all, he is not a master yet. The author's book has made significant progress compared to the previous one. I have suggestions that can be made. It is difficult to agree with others. Please read the book rationally and take care of the growing author 🙏

Yudian Dingxuantong is very similar to the seniority order of my family. If the author does not have good seniority characters behind it, I will use some of my family's seniority characters. As follows: Nian, sincerity, Yun, Ming, Hui, Qing, You, Yan, Guang, Zheng, Ling, Xiu, Ze, Xin, Ji, Heng, Qi, Chong, Zhao, Rui, ...

Damn it, it was so fucking uncomfortable to watch. How could a good setting be written like this?

The writing of this book is very interesting, but I hope the author writes more about the protagonist. The role of the protagonist feels a bit small. Also, there is a difference between preaching and preaching. You can preach, but the Dharma cannot be preached lightly, otherwise the power obtained easily can easily cause confusion. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

Let me express my personal opinion: The author is very creative and the first few chapters are quite good. I personally like it very much, but! But what? The author had a bit of a breakdown at the end of the early stage. I thought the author would correct it, but maybe the author didn't control the direction well, which caused it to gradually collapse further. Therefore, I was persuaded to quit when I saw the middle and later stages, and gave up on the rest of the story, and stopped reading it. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) So my personal suggestion is that the first half is worth reading. If you are interested in writing this type of writing, you can refer to this part, thank you 😌

After reading a little bit, I feel that the author's story-telling ability is very good, and the writing style is much better than most works. It may not be impossible to be a master if he writes it down. The only regret is that there is no outline, which leads to constant reading and overthrow of the original design. Then, because he took care of the previous plot and patched it up, he also forcibly changed it later. Firstly, Mr. Qi, who was unable to deal with monsters in the past, set his strength to the Gang Qi realm. Then, in order to show how powerful the royal family was, those who could protect Gang Qi to the extreme could deal with monsters. Then, in order to prove that warriors with Gang Qi protection to the extreme were different from ordinary Gang Qi realm warriors who could deal with monsters, they boasted about how powerful their Gang Qi protection was. The second is that it was set too early in the martial arts world, without extraordinary power. Later, when the Gangqi warriors changed from Kung Fu masters who could fly over walls and walls to humanoid ground Gundams, and the Taoist priests changed from the warriors of the Xiaoyao sect in "Dragon Babu" to the Taoist priests who can't fly in "Zhu Xian", I felt that my face was swollen, especially after the emergence of Taoist priests who can make magic weapons. The third is to brag about the old Taoist, shaping his defeat and death into a tragic self-sacrifice protagonist and a Trojan horse scheme. Although the only use of this Trojan horse is that the wealthy family has an extra beauty power for women to prevent aging and a lot of reserves, it is not so successful. And praise superstition as a way to seize public opinion. This is where I was poisoned and fell down. You can't do it when you are at your strongest? Do you have to be defeated before you can do it? He also used logic to lower others' vigilance. I have written before that before the attack, others did not know that the Taoist sect was powerful. After the attack, they became vigilant and suppressed the Taoist sect. As a result, when others did not care about the Taoist sect before, they became more vigilant, right? I feel like my intelligence has been insulted! Of course, this book is not without its merits. There are basically no brainless characters in the supporting characters. They basically have their own calculations and desires. If you look closely, you will see that behind the seemingly brainless second generation, there are also a lot of machinations and machinations behind the scenes; the seemingly small people on the roadside also have their own wisdom and behavioral logic; the gang boss who seems to be a helper also has his own loyalty and righteousness. These can make this book more interesting and readable. The second is that the plot design is layered, and the seemingly useless scenes all have their pitfalls. When it is revealed later, I suddenly realize that the contradictions between the characters are prominent and reasonable. At least it is not the kind of novel where the villain starts fighting with you because your wife is beautiful, and then forces the plot to fight for hundreds of chapters. This kind of clever, reasonable and unconventional writing style that promotes the plot is a testament to the author's writing skills. The third is to grasp the power setting and plot. I read a book a long time ago. When something happened to the main character, the family not only did not bully, but united and cared for each other. Some book friends commented that it had been a long time since I had seen such a united family in a Qidian novel. Then other book friends replied - 'Qidian novels not only have this kind of thing, there are many more, but they are all villains'. Thinking about it, it is true that the villains in Xiaobai's novels from the starting point usually beat the servant and come to the young master. The one who beat the young master comes to his father, and then the third, second, elder and clan leader. Can you repeat that this force is destroyed by the protagonist, and then the next force continues to fight? Can't this kind of villains be united? However, the forces in this article also have their own factional plans and principles. There are intrigues between several forces and the protagonists. Forces and forces, factions and factions, factions and different factions also have their own logic of behavior. The first three points are mainly for the author to read the book. The last three points mainly want to express that the author has a good grasp of the plot in character creation and description. I just hope that the author can make an outline and the setting can be more detailed, so as not to patch it into inconsistencies when used later.

This is just a fool who accidentally brought everyone's IQ down to the same level in a battle of wits. . . .

Let me say a few words. The idea is very good, but the writing is not good. The front is too wordy and the back is too sloppy.

I also voted 3 times to support it. I think there is nothing wrong with the protagonist's outlook and behavior. This kind of silly and sweet virgin may not feel that the scheming dog is plotting against him. Really, because I am so stupid myself (cross out 🙃)... I may just have low emotional intelligence. I have suffered a lot for standing up for others, but now I have learned to behave.          ，，，，，，，，，， It's the same for everyone. Reality is so painful. Why can't the spiritual world be happy? On the Internet, everyone prefers to vent their emotions. In this chapter, the protagonist begins to take the initiative, and the author begins to let the protagonist integrate. To be honest, this plot is really slow. In the third golden chapter, the protagonist directly adapts to the new world (●—●). I don't hate having apprentices either. Is there anything wrong with accepting a poor girl as an apprentice? There's nothing wrong with it. The previous article has laid the foundation for it. The protagonist is pitiful about the low status of women. Maybe it's because many articles inexplicably lose their wits as soon as they write supporting female characters, so many readers are a little angry and a bit violent, which is understandable, but I don't like it either, but the foreshadowing is okay and acceptable. When writing female characters, it mainly depends on the author. Some are good at writing, but some are bad at jokes. It's good, but it's not good, and even good jokes can be scolded. So if you can read it, just wait and see what the author writes next. Don't be in a hurry to start scolding. If you can't stand it, just write a post to clear it up. After all, everyone has his own Hamlet_(:з∠)_.         ，，，，

This book is not just ordinary water, what the heck, how could there be so many inner dramas that can be written chapter after chapter?

I came here to read it on a free basis. The front is indeed a bit wet, and there are many explanations. The setting and skills and items are laid out in a relatively open manner, but it does not affect the overall reading. The author is also slowly improving. It can be seen that the outline may have been changed, and the author has become a little weak after the map was enlarged. It can be read as a refreshing article from Anzhou to the national conference. Personally, I think it was the best before attending the Anzhou Conference. Qi Yu's setting is quite amazing. When the showdown is dark, the aura of the big boss is perfect. Unfortunately, the whitewash is too fast and there is no plot, which is a waste of a good character. The plot after the unification of Taoism looks relatively pale. It is too deliberate in order to create a new system. I can also understand the author's idea of ​​​​improving the inheritance of Taoism alone to develop the subsequent plot, but it is too abrupt and the setting is relatively simple. Basically, it is all-people weapon repair. Taoist priests, warriors, spiritual beasts, ghosts, all natal magic weapons. There's a big question mark on my head. Isn't this just a branch of weapon repair? If you want to set up a more perfect setting, there are many materials on this site that you can learn from, such as the natal golden elixir of alchemy cultivator, the natal spiritual talisman of talisman cultivator, the natal formation of formation cultivator... You can also use the five routes of traditional cultivation of heaven, earth, gods, humans and ghosts. There are a lot of materials for writing books on this site. The plot after leaving Tiansend Plain feels very tasteless. You can watch it or not. I don't have the urge to stay up late to read books in the early stage. In fact, the author's own general design is quite good. The origin of the Taoist priests in this world is very interesting, but the Taoist priests' characters are severely stereotyped. Basically, Taoist priests are great and upright people, the aristocratic families are all selfish, and the royal family is a bunch of fools. Because there is a protagonist, the human race in this world has been catastrophic. The royal family's concealment of the spiritual energy recovery and the awakening of evil spirits did not have much impact, so they were allowed to get through it. He spent a lot of time creating a very disgusting thing and then didn't deal with him. There are also the protagonist's first two named disciples. They fell too fast, and there was not enough foreshadowing in front of them, causing them to directly become soy sauce characters. There are some other bits and pieces that I don't want to write about. The main issues have also been mentioned. Now that I'm reading the whole book, it doesn't have as many poisonous points as the comments, so I can still read it.