From the Leader of the Ming Cult, He Began to Conquer the Heavens

It can be seen from the beginning that the author has read a lot of books, and the writing style and plot structure are all imitated very vividly. It has the characteristics of an old-school martial arts writer who talks about getting better and better. According to normal thinking, at this level, let alone being king or prime minister, at least he is a platinum-level boss. So, I endured all kinds of poisonous operations in Yitian, and watched various embarrassing plots in the Zombie World and Harry Potter. Finally, I arrived at Shushan, and the plot was about to take a turn. One minute, the green-robed ancestor was fighting life and death with Li Hong. In the next moment, he took over the Yuanjiang Golden Ship, created a new world and became the Emperor of Heaven, and also enfeoffed the thieves and pickled them to become gods. No matter how you look at it, it is all the style of the weasel spirit of Xiaoleiyin Temple! When I got to Journey to the West and saw the protagonist enthroning the Monkey King as the Monkey King, but being pointed at the nose and humiliating the protagonist and a bunch of soldiers and generals, to be honest, I felt a kind of unexplainable joy in my heart. This was my mouth! At this point, I have probably understood it. The author knows it better than anyone else: not only does the character of the protagonist have a big problem, but the plot is also messed up because he has taken too big a step! The protagonist's strength is not connected with the subsequent plot, so it is naturally embarrassing to watch. To sum up: this book succeeds in its writing, fails in its characters, and collapses in its rhythm. Finally, I would like to give some advice to the author: Since Shushan is your strong point, don't look ahead and exploit shortcomings and avoid strengths. Either continue writing Shushan fan fiction, or learn from its worldview and basic settings to write your own original characters and plots. As long as the character design avoids surprises and the plot rhythm remains smooth, there is no need to jump to the heavens or merge the settings. You can still improve steadily, and you will eventually achieve enlightenment! Writers of the old school style of writing need to pay special attention to the fact that modern Internet writers are most taboo about virgin bitches. They are hesitant and hesitant. They dare not kill this one and dare not touch that one. They are not only afraid of having too much backing, but also afraid of causing karma. Isn't this the Shushan version of Zhang Wuji? ! Readers are dissatisfied with the book and it is inevitable to abandon the book.

Judging from the original novel, the Sky Eagle Sect and the Ming Sect are still the main anti-Yuan forces. Judging from the mother-like emotions between the author and the protagonist, the violent Yuan is the real devil! How ironic it is that those who resist the devil are considered by you to be the devil.

Many people say it is poisonous, but I can only say that I am lucky to have read the book. In my personal opinion, it's above the standard! The protagonist of Bon Voyage is worth hundreds of thousands, and it's really nothing new. This book is not abusive, and twists and turns are actually the most normal thing! Come on, author, stop being a eunuch.

This is the only Jin Yong fan I've seen so far who has three righteous views. After all, Jin Yong's books are basically distorted values. I hope you won't disappoint in the future, and we must kill all scum like Yin Susu! There are also Cheng Kun, Xie Xun, Zhao Min, etc., No one is left behind!

After reading more than thirty chapters, I found that the author has done some research on the original work, but he does not know much about martial arts online novels. There are many interesting points that have not been written out, and the protagonist is relatively indecisive, which is taboo in online novels.

What is the reason for Dajin's crazy wisdom? About Du Dajin's crazy and coquettish operation, he must wipe out his own family. I have the following points that I can't figure out: 1. The protagonist has made it clear that he is a match with the Tianying Cult's minions. Where does he have the confidence that the protagonist can protect his family? 2. His whole family was detained and could be wiped out at any time, so why did he save his face and not go to Wudang to report the news? 3. As a person who has been running an escort agency for many years, he is never too careful, especially for an escort whose value is far beyond his imagination. How could he allow his actions to be inconsistent with being cautious? It's like you can usually do one project a month and get a commission of about 10,000 yuan. Suddenly someone gives you a big order and you can earn 300,000 yuan after completing it in a month. I believe everyone is just as careful as I am. After reading the story later, I finally understood. It turned out to be "you won't be able to write a series without the original plot." It seems that the protagonist is making trouble, but the main storylines of the sword-raising conference, Ice and Fire Island, Zhang Wuji's origin, and Yin Susu's suicide have not changed at all. However, the author is clever in giving Yin Susu the identity of his enemy, so that he won't have the feeling that "the protagonist will appear useless if the plot remains unchanged" like other works of the same type.

I'm convinced by the description of this combat power. I can't beat anyone. It's a 50-50 ratio. I mentioned earlier how many moves I can make with Zhang Sanfeng, who is a bit weaker. Later, the attributes were restrained and the Nine Yang Magic was used to defeat the two elders Xuan Ming and they couldn't be killed for a long time. The two elders Xuan Ming = Zhang Sanfeng. Flexible combat capability, right?

，Flag，？ Then go ahead and do it. It's not much better to just push Zhu Baba to the top. After showing off a lot of tricks, it's better to just lie down. The character of the protagonist is also very swinging. From the beginning, he wanted to run away, but he was unable to run. If someone made things difficult for him, he would endure the humiliation and bear the burden. Later, when he ran away after the White Lotus Sect incident, If you have the opportunity and don't run away, you forcefully take advantage of the main plot. The revenge you get is quite outrageous. You are not a sect or a relative, and they let you off the hook, but you end up chasing and biting you like a mad dog. The problem is that Yin Susu will die just as well if you stand by and do nothing, so you force the drama to increase the difficulty of the main plot. It would be nice but not so good, and the logic is not that good

Chapter 5: Taoist Bai Lian is really speechless. People are blocking the road and robbing people. You tell people that you have no grievances and no hatred, and you don't want to hurt people's lives.

The protagonist has a grudge against Yin Susu. He is willing to stay in the place where his family is destined to be exterminated and not move. This is purely seeking death. Others also spared his life.

I just became the leader of the Ming Cult, and I can immediately drive out the Tartars and establish a country and proclaim myself emperor. The author asked the protagonist to change the map. I was a little speechless. I don't know what the author thought?

When I first watched it, I was still wondering why the quality shouldn't be this good. But after watching it, I realized why. It started but ended! I always change scenes in the middle of writing. The biggest problem with this is that the character of the protagonist collapses and people can't have a clear position. If your writing skills are really outstanding and you can attract people to keep reading, this problem won't be big, but you haven't written to this level. In the end, everyone was enjoying watching it, but suddenly it took a sharp turn and suddenly became boring. The first time I could bear it, the second time it was a bit unbearable, and the third time no one watched it. I'll end it here. I hope it will be of some help to the author. I'll take my leave.

To be honest, this book is of good quality, but the protagonist is poorly portrayed. First, you, a modern person, have been in ancient times for more than 3 months. This is the time when the golden finger has not yet awakened. Including walking darts, it is already half a year, right? You still can't adapt? Why don't you just leave honestly? Why don't you save, save, save a ghost? Du Dajin is stupid and greedy, and he doesn't know what's going on behind the scenes. If you can't guarantee that he will listen to you, you should leave immediately. As for the disciples, you can take them away together or let them leave first. Don't you understand? Later, when someone from the Shaolin Temple comes, you just listen to whatever they say. I don't know if it's just stupidity or the character the author wants to create. Second, the protagonist has no reason to kill Yin Susu. The relationship between you and the Longmen Escort Agency is just that of the Escort Agency and the Escort Master. The Escort Agency neither teaches you martial arts nor does it show any great favor to you. You put in the labor and the Escort Agency pays the money, that's all. It's the protagonist's first time escorting. Does the escort agency know that the protagonist knows martial arts? Why not let him go? If the protagonist didn't know martial arts at that time, wouldn't he have died? So, I really don't know why the escort agency hates Yin Susu. Master Zhao and his three apprentices can obviously take away or keep money. For example, if the three apprentices take away money, Master Zhao will leave a sum of money. He will teach you the basics. You can go to the martial arts school and spend 500 taels to teach him, but you can just keep a large amount of money. Third, if Yin Susu lets you go, you want to kill her. Zhu Jiuzhen has another face and accepts it. Zhu Jiuzhen himself is a demon, and his true nature can be seen from the events in the original work. At the age of fifteen or sixteen, his character is basically a foregone conclusion. To sum up, the author's writing style and layout are good, but the protagonist is not generally bad. He has no distinction between likes and dislikes, and good and evil are unclear. What is the modern outlook on life? The protagonist has already killed people and adapted to it. Do you understand? When you use modern people's standards to evaluate ancient people, especially the ancient dark forces, you are already wrong.

One book integrates so many classic novels, and has its own ideas and opinions. The writing is excellent, and the reading speed is very fast. It is very expensive.

Duan Yu is not dead yet? It's too forceful to explain, as long as the protagonist likes the co-author, good luck will come! Even if the logic of the story is sacrificed, it doesn't matter, the whole family has a happy ending. Is this ending heading towards a brainless novel? Don't today's readers deserve to read books with their brains in mind?

Damn, I was enjoying reading the first volume, but it ended so hastily? I don't even bother to read pirated copies of this kind of book.

There's no need for the author to write a book like this, right? He also wants to add some ups and downs? Let's start by sadistically torturing the main character so that everyone can have some empathy? ? Who wouldn't scold your mother during this episode of Longmen Escort Agency? Speaking of which, the market for abusive articles is a bit confused now. Why would the author write this way? To put it bluntly, online articles are meant to be fun no matter how you feel about it. You should read online articles just to be happy whether it's unpleasant or obscene. If you can't even make readers happy, then this is it. . It is obvious that no one will be happy with the abusive master.

Wear it as soon as you unify it? What do you mean? The rest of the people have to fight for the throne again? What do you mean?

I'm going to... Yitian makes me feel uncomfortable all over! The emperor is just about to ascend the throne. Why don't you change the map, delete your account, and start again! ! ! ! It's so uncomfortable for people who have just brushed off something that is not the whole story.

I like Shushan Stream, Shushan, Shushan Flying Immortals, Shushan Conferring Gods, Shushan's Road to Taoism, Shushan Green Robe and many other Shushan articles. It's a pity that there are very few articles about Chinese classical fairy tales nowadays, and they are usually Cthulhu deception style.

In the latest chapter, you can shoot that little girl to death for causing trouble. If you go to Qiao Feng to sworn sworn friends in the future, I will look down on you. Tianlong has nothing to look forward to. He goes directly to Xiaoyao sect Kung Fu, hoping to take it by force or exchange, rather than asking for it. Also, you don't owe martial arts favors. It's what you paid for.

I can't understand why so many people criticize a novel that I can read that isn't too trashy. .

A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. Knowing that the family is about to be exterminated, he still engages in nonsense

The author's writing is good 👍 Just don't be too holy in the end, it should be as decisive as the story of Heaven and Dragon Slaying! Think about the plot carefully and don't be too sloppy. Keep up the good work 😁

It's very comfortable to read, neither ostentatious nor procrastinating, just like flowing clouds and flowing water.

The author writes that the protagonist's abilities fluctuate up and down, and his three views and methods have not changed after several worlds. It is typical to live like a dog, and you can barely read it. It is normal to abandon the book if you can't survive it.

Author, do you want to read the comments? Can I ask you a question? You know what readers hate the most? What character of the protagonist do you hate the most?

I can't stand it anymore, why should murderers like Murong Bo and Ding Chunqiu, who are cunning, cunning, double-dealing and sinful, be made gods? Even if you pull out the low-level martial arts masters from Yitian World, it will be better than them!

The author has made great efforts in the knowledge of Buddhism and Taoism.

I just watched it, and I wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist?