The Loser Is Holy

The title and setting of the book are good, but the story is not good enough and the literary talent is not good enough. I suggest you write a fanfic first to practice. After all, I have written two books but they are not popular. There is nothing worse than this. Give it a try. Find completed anime novels to write fanfics. You can practice setting, structure, plot connection, character emotions, realm and society. It is also easier. You can find all the materials. If there are pitfalls, you can train yourself. See if you can continue it. If you can't, avoid it.

Xiaobai is talented enough to be able to write like this, but he really needs to learn how the big guys write, describing battles, dealing with emotions, foreshadowing, etc. Imagination is the most valuable and least valuable thing, think about it carefully. Stop relying on quantity, rely on quality, and strive to become a god with one book

The author reads to me

No, is this a curse? It's really a forced intelligence reduction, cutting everyone's IQ to half of the protagonist's, to show how smart the protagonist is. Unlimited (biochemical) cooking = God of Cooking, failure to die equals immortality, and failure to punch the earth equals creation of the world... Of course it's not that outrageous. But just pick up the good ones and don't want the bad ones. It's like no one knows how to say it.

Ah ↑ Hahahaha~ The new book is here~

Have you ever felt like reading a running account? . . .

I watched some of them, how should I put it, they were too deliberate, and some of them made me uncomfortable. For example, the protagonist normally doesn't want to die, but in fact he is still alive. The consequences of the original behavior are unknown and the behavior of the protagonist of this book must be contrary to the original intention. Well, I'm thinking about a question, if the protagonist doesn't want to have a wife and then the protagonist has a wife, the protagonist sees his wife as beautiful but doesn't want his wife to cheat on him, and the wife cheats on him, the protagonist wants his family to be safe and then the whole family goes to heaven. Summary: This ability can only be used effectively if you have mental problems.

I guess the author must have played the game "Yi Nian Xiao Yao". It's so similar. There are a lot of realms and it's endless. It's definitely an upgrade mode that forces you to play Xiao Yao.

Chapter 4 is completely different from the previous one. The male protagonist has no cultivation at all. The disciple who was rescued knew it. As a result, in Chapter 4, the male protagonist is asked to take the disciples down the mountain for training. Isn't this funny?

Let's see how long your book lasts.

Have you noticed that this is similar to a running account? This book completely revolves around the protagonist, while the other characters are all passers-by and imaginary monsters. The content is good, but it doesn't attract me

Can't the plot be slower? When you write like this, you have no desire to read at all. You can only stop time for 500 years. I can't read what I write now. Can I meditate while writing a book? The new book feels like it is rushing to advance the plot, too fast, and there is no sense of substitution at all. I hope the author writes well. Sooner or later, if this continues, it will be boring.

To be honest, I admire the author very much. Fighting and losing, fighting and losing, come on.

There has always been a problem. The protagonist will fail in what he wants to do. So how does the protagonist achieve the mentality of wanting to fail the system task? The protagonist should really want to complete something before he fails. In theory, the system task is to save people, and if there are people nearby, the protagonist will be killed if he fails to save the person. So how does the protagonist achieve the goal of killing the target from both the psychological and physical aspects to complete the task of saving the target?

It's over again. . . . .

It's time to sign the contract, let's spread the flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

Is it okay to cut the appendix (~￣▽￣)~

I stopped when I looked through the bookshelf and found out (I only read about ten chapters). I read the testimonials and the data of this book (this book no longer has the testimonials). I was really miserable for the author.