The Lonely Bamboo Swallowing the Starry Sky Does Not Stand

After reading Chapter 24, are you serious? Not to mention that in the early stages of the genetic mutation, which was only a few months old, your base with less than a thousand people actually produced more than 60 quasi-warriors? Even in Luo Feng's era 40 years later, the ratio was not so high. Not to mention the secondary mutation caused by Babata's action. Also, can a group of quasi-warriors who require equipment but no equipment and no secret techniques kill an intermediate beast general? Putting aside whether you can break through the defense, can you, a warrior, keep up with their speed?

The upgrade of warriors is written too casually. The Gods of War in the original book first said that those with extraordinary talents have to go through more than ten years of hard training and actual combat, perseverance in gene energy cultivation, and some dragon blood and the spirit of plants and trees in the process to reach that state. Even someone as strong as Luo Feng only reached the level of God of War in just a few years because of his top talent as a spiritual master, Dragon Blood and Millennium Willow Heart. Not everyone has that speed. Even low-level war gods like Lu Gang are very rare scattered everywhere. But in this book, the high-level gods of war disappeared all over the place in the early stage, which was really inconsistent. Secondly, the warrior hierarchy system was originally figured out step by step by warriors, so how could it be so complete from the beginning. Also, writing the secret book is too outrageous. In the original work, Hong and Lei Shen fully understood traditional martial arts, and with a little extraterrestrial civilization information they obtained, they wrote the ultimate secret book of 6 times and 7 times the power. At this point, everyone can claim to have 5-6 times the secret book. They obviously don't have much martial arts training and experience. It is as outrageous as high school students solving Goldbach's conjecture.

It's just nonsense. In the original book, Luo Feng's era, there was a complete training system, and everyone practiced martial arts. Only one out of thousands of people could become a warrior, so warriors had a high status. In this book, the last three or four years, there are only a bunch of gods of war and a bunch of warriors. It's completely mindless writing.

The protagonist has to be gifted but not gifted, and he needs golden fingers but not golden fingers. He is a person of the same era as Hong Lei Shen, but decades later, he cannot take on Hong's moves. It's so useless. He traveled so early. It seems that he has to rely on Luo Feng to get out of the earth.

I have to say that this book was extremely toxic in the early stages, and I was confused until it became normal in the middle stage. It is recommended that you read this book to reduce your intelligence and reduce your anger.

I really don't understand why He Meng and those people wrote this. The fanfic also has multiple protagonists who are drunk.

Do you want to write the later stages of Devouring like Traveler? That feels like it would be better to write about indigenous people. Because it is traveling from Earth to Earth, the only plot advantage of traveling is gone. The knowledge of the time traveler itself is available in the swallowed earth. What is the difference between you and the indigenous people? Is your time travel still meaningful? You have no right to speak, and no one believes what you say. If you want to avoid Luo Feng, you can write about the first two generations of Earth, Origin Star and Mountain and Sea Realm. In the end, the earth's lineage is not bad at all, including the true gods and masters of the universe. Do you think any other ethnic groups can achieve this on one planet? The Lord of Chaos City has only one disciple, Luo Feng, who surpasses the Lord of the Universe.

Chapter 10, the protagonist has no sense of existence and has not entered the main topic. In the previous chapters, I don't know the so-called past life. You are more slow to warm up than slow to warm up. It's really not okay.

... I believed your evil deeds, and if the comments didn't criticize me, I felt free to come in and watch it. As a result, the corner of my mouth kept twitching when I saw the second grade organization. If I can't make up a good plot, I just follow the original work and speed up the time...

Golden Chapter Three... I felt lonely after reading it

Are you sure you have read these chapters about the treasure and the Lord of the Universe? Have you read the original work? Haha

After reading the first ten chapters, I felt it was a bit strange and the style was a bit urban. Personally I don't like it very much, the style is quite different from the original work. It may seem like a slow start at first, but 1 million words is a beast, and this is obviously a fast-paced article, so it's a bit strange.

I don't want to write about the same path as Luo Feng, which is actually quite good, but his strength has always been weaker than Luo Feng, with no ups and downs at all, and Luo Feng's presence has always been highlighted. It is said that this protagonist is really a bit unresponsive, too bland, and he looks like a supporting role. Is he Luo Feng's personal butler?

Updated to now, he was captured by the Immortal Lord for experiments. Later, when he became stronger, he stopped doing it, and his thoughts were unclear.

I feel like the author's writing is very good. First of all, there are no all kinds of exaggerated cheats. To be honest, I feel sick after seeing too many exaggerated ones. I feel good if I am more ordinary. At least it is consistent with certain actual situations. Not everyone is a genius, and not everyone has all kinds of cheats.

It's bland, without any excitement, and the pig's trotter crossing feels insignificant and has no effect.

. . He Meng, what the hell is that! Changed the protagonist?

Can the Ice and Snow Emperor, a passerby with no name, be immortal? The venerable one behind? Author, do you think that the understanding of the law in Devouring is too simple?

Description of the third volume Originally, the third volume was intended to tell the story of the changes caused by the protagonist from the perspective of the new generation of Blue Star people. After all, it feels too monotonous to just go through the data in one stroke. By the way, you can also recover some of the foreshadowing that was laid down on Blue Star. And my idea is that in the end, the main characters mentioned above will eventually grow into strong men in the human race, making the Galaxy Kingdom unlike the original work, with not many talents, resulting in not many true gods and masters of the universe in the end. As for some competitions on Blue Star, there are indeed some spur-of-the-moment reasons, but some of my thoughts are also included. But since everyone's response to this part is not very good, I will try my best to make this part as natural as possible and get over it as quickly as possible. Actually, I still have a lot of manuscripts on hand, so I won't change the earlier parts.

If you don't have a golden finger, you can write a fart that swallows the stars. If you don't have a sense of empathy, what kind of fanfic can you write?

In fact, the overall rhythm is okay, there is nothing too bad, but there are many places during the development period that are not interesting to read. If there is a secret place that I remember, there is no great opportunity, so the author just wrote dozens of chapters. There are many examples of this. The protagonist is not as evil as Luo Feng, but he is actually quite good, but the writing seems to have no sense of existence and lacks a passionate plot.

I thought that after surviving this or something like breaking the Fourth Jedi, something good would happen, but I didn't expect that it was Jiang Lang who died.

I wrote too much nonsense and deserved that no one would read it

I have never read this book. In terms of the number of reviews, generally speaking, there is a certain ratio between the quality of the book and the reviews. A book with more than 500 pages has less than 100 reviews. This ratio is not right. No matter how you say it, there should be hundreds of reviews. Regardless of whether it is well-known or infamous, read a few chapters to test the water first.

What are you going to do? Post it after it's over. It ends so suddenly, just like a eunuch.

What follows is your sincerity. I don't know what you wrote.

I only read the first 29 chapters. I'm still wondering why it's called this book. It's not until chapter 30 that the main text begins, right?

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