Observer of the Stars

I thought they were Paradox Interactive war criminals...

There are two things! One is tradition: Please, everyone, check out my novel! T_T One more thing: I feel like I haven't grown at all! Please point out any parts you find uncomfortable, and I'll change them! (Whispering: I'll try my best)

In my personal opinion... It would be better to put the sixth chapter introducing the "golden finger" (a special ability or advantage) as the first chapter. Then, spending the first dozen or so chapters solely on acquiring female characters is confusing. Where's the main plot, the timeline, the villains? Without any of that at the beginning, it's hard to keep reading.

There are too many flaws. However, its strengths are obvious: the characters' intelligence and the conflict descriptions are quite good. It's a work of love and dedication, and deserves respect. However, the actual book feels a bit like child's play, even more far-fetched than a fairy tale. I've read up to chapter 172.

It's really well-written, but I just can't keep reading. It feels too bland. It's not that it's bad, it's just that I feel like I need to take a break after just a few chapters.

Dude, you're truly amazing! I admire you immensely. Your perseverance is incredible, far surpassing some eunuchs.

It's great, and most importantly, it's free! I feel a little embarrassed that such a great novel is free to read. I'd be happy to let the author charge me sometime.

Is the author still around? 😠

For some reason, the beginning felt a bit strange. There's a hidden treasure in the village, and the little girl being bullied by the villagers is a legendary demon noble, an abyss demon. Is this village run by a retired hero as village chief? It's so unfair that someone with that kind of ability is stuck in a village!

I originally thought I had been writing this for a long time, but it turns out it was only recently. I've written so much in a year!