Observer of the Stars

I thought he was a P Society war criminal. . .

There are two things! One is tradition: You guys, please read my novels T_T Another thing: I feel like I haven't grown up at all! If you feel uncomfortable, point it out and I will change it! (Quietly: try your best)

Personal opinion. . . It would be better to put the sixth chapter, which introduces Goldfinger, in the first chapter, and then there are more than ten chapters of plot just to attract girls, which makes people confused. As for the main plot, the time world view, and the villain, there is nothing at the beginning, which makes it difficult for people to watch. Moreover, a heroine who only relies on the protagonist is really not likable. It is better to set it up as a mystery, with a clear purpose (it is not necessary to tell the protagonist, or simply lie). If you think the protagonist is a mage, you don't have to reveal it. Be wary of each other, you can lay some foreshadowing, and then go directly to the main plot to tighten the rhythm.

There are too many flaws. However, the advantages are obvious. The characters' intelligence and conflict description are very good. The power of love is worthy of respect. But the real book feels a bit like playing house, more ridiculous than a fairy tale. I saw Chapter 172. Basically, it can be summarized: a person traveled to a foreign country, adopted a little girl, and developed a parasite on his body that can save his life at night. In order to raise a little girl, I went to the capital of a country where chaos and discrimination were serious. The capital is the political center and houses more than half of the country's military forces. As a result, terrorists will plant nuclear bombs in the capital every one to two weeks. The protagonist's task is to solve each terrorist attack, and the reward is to give the little girl the right to play with friends. The place where the nuclear bomb is buried is very hidden and protected by terrorists. As a result, the capital sent the protagonist and a soldier king to solve the problem. However, the soldier king wanted to protect the dignitaries, so a problem that could lead to the country's destruction if not handled properly was handed over to an ordinary foreigner who was invincible at night with a pistol. This foreigner knows he has to deal with terrorists, but he never exercises, sleeps at night, and causes trouble during the day. There are more than one wave of terrorists, and multiple nuclear bombs may be planted at the same time, but no matter how many nuclear bombs there are, the capital will always send only the soldier king and foreigners. Although the soldier king can rebel by force alone, he is a waste if the officer is tied up. Not only can the nuclear bomb not be found every time, but the terrorists are always late to attack, leaving an ordinary foreigner to deal with death. The survival of the country depends entirely on the luck of foreigners finding nuclear bombs. That's not how fairy tales are made

The writing is really good, but I really can't stand it anymore. It feels too bland. It's not that it's hard to read, but I just feel like I want to take a break after reading a few chapters.

Brother, you are really awesome. I admire you from the bottom of my heart. You are so perseverant that you can defeat some eunuchs.

It's good-looking, and the important thing is that it's free. I'm embarrassed to read such a good-looking novel for free. I'd be happy for the author to charge me for it whenever he wants.

By the way, is the author still there?😠

I don't know why, but the beginning feels weird. There is a secret treasure in the village, and the little girl who is bullied by the villagers is the legendary demon noble, the abyss demon. Is this village the kind where a retired hero becomes the village leader? It's too embarrassing to stay in the village with such ability.

I originally thought it took me a long time to write, but I didn't expect it to be recent. I wrote so much in one year.