The Great Road to Heaven

I have read a few chapters. Let's not talk about the plot and writing. First of all, this is probably a martial arts fanfic. You should always check the basic settings before writing. Many things are wrong. For example, Zhu Yuanzhang is the leader of Mingjiao after Zhang Wuji... This is obviously nonsense. What readers of this type of novel want to see is the protagonist changing the plot within a familiar worldview, not the author changing all the basic settings! If you want to change it, just change it all. It would be great to just write about the original world. Drawing about tigers and dogs is nothing!

Many people have written about Swordsman fans before. I only write about martial arts training and nothing else. During the Ming Dynasty, the martial arts that could gain fame were very powerful. That's how people respect you. He only knows martial arts briefly. The dynasties at that time were not respected.

Whether it is the Huashan School's mental method or the fragments of the Jiuyin Sutra, they are rare foundation-building mental methods for Taoism.

The plot is mediocre, without any twists and turns, and is unremarkable. The princess who appears later is even more vicious. Is the protagonist unable to walk when he sees a woman?

This book is not worth subscribing to. A fourth-grade official acted alone like a lone warrior. There was also a big wedding without a master or a wife. In ancient times, you must know that the master and the father are of the same level.

The protagonist sees that the woman can't walk, and her IQ is directly 0. Shennong is dead, you continue.

The author is awesome, you can become a scholar if you know 1000 words

Tian Boguang... Since you have chosen a gentleman's persona and a righteous stance, don't imitate that prodigal Linghu Chong. After all, he was also from the imperial examination. If you associate with such a lewd thief who is wanted by the court and despised by the martial arts, it will be a serious violation of your will. He could make some deals in private, but on the surface, he had to maintain a positive image. No matter how hypocrite Yue Buqun was, he still wanted to be shameless in front of his disciples, his wife, his daughter, and the world. He had a reputation as a gentleman's sword, and his image was completely ruined after being cut by a psychopath.

First, there were those who entered the royal guard, and then there were those who came second in the rankings and became county magistrates. Now even the top candidates can marry the daughter of the feudal prince. Can I use my brain to write the imperial examination?

Two factions in Huashan are fighting among themselves. Only thatched huts are left on the mountain. What's the matter? They fought among themselves and hit a nuclear bomb? Are all the houses of a large group with thousands of people flattened?

It's quite baffling to watch, first of all. Is Tian Boguang brainless? Dare to go to the palace to rob sex? Secondly, in the chapters of the Qingcheng Sect, you have a thousand households, and you are considered to be in the ranks of the Jinyiwei. Yu Canghai dares to kill Qianhu? During the Ming Xiaozong period, Jinyiwei had not yet declined, but was still on the rise. I don't understand. Just for the sake of having fun? Forced to show off?

This 🐷 character seems to know something about the plot, but he also seems to know nothing at all. It's completely baffling. The protagonist insists on biting off more than he can chew, while choosing to have both civil and military affairs. The author didn't use the golden finger either, and the three yuan and the third internal strength progressed rapidly and the moves were not missed.

Pig's Feet takes the initiative to tell people his true identity and origin when he meets people, fearing that he wants people to clear his blame (parents, relatives, etc.), Otherwise it will be difficult to explain such mental symptoms!

The scholar is described as a weed on the roadside

When I saw a beautiful woman earlier, I acted like a pig, I couldn't bear it Next, I sneaked in and called out the names of moves, I couldn't bear it any more No doubt about it, I said goodbye.

I saw Tian Boguang picking flowers at Prince Qin's Mansion. Didn't anyone say anything about it in the book review section?

At the beginning of the fifth chapter, Lao Yue is persuaded to quit "Poisonous". At least he is a gentleman with a sword. He only knows 1,000 words? ? ? Can you be considered a scholar if you know 3,000 words? ? ?

I persisted until Chapter 40 before I was poisoned and died. It was awesome. I removed all the Shennong first. It was so poisonous that it didn't look like a time traveler at all 🙂🙂

Starting over every time is too toxic. . . Farewell

I am laughing to death while riding a horse. If you can read 3,000 words, you will be admitted as a scholar. The author is really just writing nonsense.

I feel relieved to see so many people spraying you.

Xiaoao is well written. But there is one setting that is really uncomfortable, that is the so-called way of heaven, the so-called general trend that cannot be changed, it is a joke. What is the Way of Heaven? The ultimate principle of all things is the Tao. It can be like the non-extraordinary world in the real world, and all things in nature are the Tao. It can also be like the various evolutionary theories of immortality and cultivation on the fantasy side, where all natural things are also Tao. You can call it the way of heaven, you can also call it the avenue. Tao is the cause and effect of existence of all things in nature. He must be unconscious. You can regard Him as one thing, which is a rule, or you can view Him as everything. If there is some kind of power in a world that consciously wants to take the world in a certain direction, then it must not be Tao, it will just be a more powerful "creature" that steals Tao for its use. If there is consciousness, it is not Tao. Tao has no consciousness. The Tao is inactive, and it is impossible for the Tao to do anything. Tao is not the nanny or enemy of anything. Between heaven and earth, any evolution, the rise and fall of anything, since it appears, is within Tao. Such as the prehistoric way of heaven, since it has consciousness and actions, then it cannot be the way, it is just a "creature" that controls the prehistoric world. Like the so-called way of heaven in the prehistoric world, it is not the way, but a "creature" that lives in the world. Strength and Tao are two completely unrelated things.

It was a waste of time. When he saw that he was still going to marry the princess, he persuaded him to quit. Typical white text.

The emotional writing is so speechless! The second time I saw a woman, I started to touch her! Don't even think about your identity! You are the son of an innkeeper, even though you have now ranked first in the provincial examination! But he is the leader of the King of Qin! The most powerful among the princes of the Ming Dynasty! Can you not write about a female protagonist? Or write about a charlatan woman! If you write Dongfang Invincible as Jon's version, it's better than this.

After watching it for an hour, I realized that being motivated by lust is the biggest failure. Being involved with the princess will definitely bring countless troubles, it will inevitably fall into the whirlpool of court battles, and even countless peasant uprisings will have to be intervened. How can there be time to practice!

Nonsense. I can only read more than 1,000 characters. I can't even read vernacular Chinese, let alone classical Chinese.

The towering mountains blocked the Qin Emperor's ship, and the Han palace held gold plates all night long. Jade skin grows white bones in vain, no more like the roar of a sword that makes the water cold. Alas, I have read so many novels about cultivation, whether it is martial arts, spiritual cultivation or immortality, I still like the kind of protagonist who does not regard longevity as the only goal, because such a life is really empty and empty, and there is no end in sight. When will life be able to shine with beautiful brilliance again because of new meaning? I can't seem to see that day either. So I liked this book at first, but then I didn't like it, and I didn't like it from the second volume. The protagonist no longer lives his own life, and can be said to be dead. What exists now is just a lonely wandering soul who exists for the sake of existence, watching each story unfold, but has nothing to do with this world. I don't like feeling like this, it's so sad.

There is nothing new, Xiaoao becomes a disciple of Huashan, the Divine Eagle looks for Dugu's relics, and Tianlong starts with Beiming Lingbo. .

To be honest, the first volume of Xiaoao was pretty good, at least it was innovative and not poisonous. But it went downhill from the beginning of Shooting the Condor, and it became even more ridiculous after it was released. Tianlong and Tang Dynasty were completely hydrological, with no content but only the framework. The subsequent Nine Cauldron Coiling Dragon was even worse without mentioning it. Nowadays, many astronomical texts were written well when the martial arts was low, and when the martial arts was high, they stretched their hips. Is there any kind-hearted person who can recommend some food and grass that can be seen?

Who would have thought that this is so bizarre that Pangu had a dream while sleeping?