A Hunter from Whale Island

To put it bluntly, the pirate's "following the boat flow", the Naruto's "Thirteen Xiaoqiang", and the hunter's "following the group" are written in similar ways! Not many can write it. This is definitely the most difficult type of fan fiction to write. Many times it's just a matter of competing with the original work to see whose plot is more exciting. So I don't understand why some authors like to write like this? Everyone knows the butterfly effect. You want to throw such a big person into the original plot line? You are powerful and familiar with the plot! This is no longer a butterfly, it is completely a twelve-level storm, not to mention that the protagonist has to be a prophet. Isn't it equivalent to destroying many plots of the original work, and then writing his own plot using characters created by others? Isn't this fighting against the opposite platform? How many people can grasp a character with so many distinct and outstanding personalities like the Hunter? Even Togashi's own creation had to be rehearsed many times (there are relevant behind-the-scenes reports online)! Many people will say that I just write my own! But have you ever thought that your opening like this is equivalent to forcing the reader to watch you fight against the opponent? It depends on whether you are willing or not! As a result, many wonderful scenes appeared. Many of these articles give people a feeling that there are obviously more people and a lot of things have been done, but you find that the plot development is still the same. It cannot be said that it is the same, it can only be said that it is exactly the same. Reading this is not as good as reading the original work; sometimes it feels that the character written by the author is completely redundant, but is a poisonous point; or it feels that the original character design has collapsed and a series of other problems!

This persona needs to be more stable. One moment he is taciturn, mature and steady, and the next moment he becomes a prophet and starts to popularize science about this and that.

I want to know what the main character's telekinesis ability is. I hate the Riddler.

Others spoil the novel to shock people or make up for their regrets, but the main character spoils the story and turns her into a nanny. This type of spoiler is the most annoying. The biggest highlight of this novel is probably the main character's telekinesis ability. Now I just want to see how the main character develops telekinesis ability. After reading it, I was ready to give up. I had already saved it on my bookshelf to read it, but I was persuaded by this kind of spoiler and had to remove it from the bookshelf. ps: I say this mainly because I feel it is a pity. The telekinesis ability developed by the protagonist is indeed quite interesting. It doesn't matter if it spoils major events or personal ability information. If you keep spoiling these small things, you will always encounter things you don't understand. By that time, the protagonist will become a clown, not to mention that readers all know why the protagonist knows these things.

Unfortunately, almost all of them are copied from the original work, and the few changes brought about by the protagonist are mostly negative in my personal opinion. For example, when Leorio answers the question "who will my mother and wife save?", In the original work, he angrily picks up a stick and wants to hit him. This shows Leorio's impulsive character, but it is not a kind of personality charm; Then there was a heart-to-heart talk between Kurapika and Leorio. But the protagonist threw a skateboard over. It was easier, but the protagonist group also lost the growth it deserved. It's really the same with or without him, or even worse.

1: The Phantom Troupe is a terrorist organization. They don't care about people other than their troupe. In order to achieve their goals, they don't care no matter how many innocent people they kill. The only thing that can restrain them is Meteor Street. Two: Chimera ants are the public enemy of all living things, including in the Dark Continent. Chimera ants are a strange creature. The purpose of its birth seems to be to exterminate other species. Three: The continent where humans live in Hunter seems to be less than one-tenth of the entire planet, and the structure of the continent is very unique, as if it is a test field specially created by something else (alien), just like the game created by Jin and their friends. Four: As a human being, I actually very much support humans exploring the Dark Continent. Even if the Dark Continent is very dangerous and unknown, if humans lose the courage to explore the unknown, then the end will be death! (Ps: Exploration and discovery is the greatest golden spirit of mankind)

There are too many meaningless spoilers in Hunter Exam. I originally thought it was to create the character of the prophet, but it turned out to be just to show off. The emergence of nuclear reactors is a bright spot, but using nuclear reactors entirely as a fire method means that development is too limited. The simplest temperature is only the most superficial manifestation of a nuclear reactor. High-energy particle bombardment is the core. In theory, it should be hit as soon as it is seen. It is a fast and unavoidable attack. And the intensity can be completely controlled for scanning and exploration. The huge amount of gas fed back by the nuclear reactor should theoretically accelerate physical growth, and even every cell in the body can undergo nuclear reactions. That would be a moving sun, even if you don't live a human life anymore. It is a waste of this reading ability

It doesn't matter if you are forewarned, but if you spoil everything, you are sick and need to be treated. Neurological exception

Everything else is okay, but it's a bit too baffling to keep showing favor to the protagonist group. You all know how to trade information with Hisoka, so what's the point of giving away so much information for free before? Gon and Killua are indeed two perverted geniuses. I can accept your advances towards them. Will Kurapika and Leorio be of any help to you in your future exploration of the Dark Continent? I can't figure it out. . .

I saw an article analyzing thoughts, and the analysis was very thorough, so I would like to share it. 1. The relationship between the six major departments This is a schematic diagram of the six major departments that I made myself. It can be seen that it is different from the hexagonal diagram in the comics, but in fact I just connected the operation system and the materialization system. I think the main reason why the original six-system diagram caused many people to go into misunderstandings when discussing the Nian system was because the trait system was not separated from the other five basic systems. It is clearly stated in the comic plot that the trait system is an ability that cannot be classified into the other five systems, and theoretically cannot be obtained through practice. Therefore, in this picture, I put the trait system alone in the center, and the other five thought systems as the basic framework. Let's briefly review the explanations of these departments at that time: the strengthening system is a direct attack on the strengthening of thoughts and the body itself; the release system is a (long-range) attack by releasing thoughts; the change system is to change the nature of thoughts; the materialization system is to materialize or materialize thoughts; the operation system is to use thoughts to operate. Generally speaking, in addition to the capabilities of this department, the two adjacent systems (which I call secondary systems) are relatively high in terms of development potential, relative fitness, and practical application efficiency. However, from the perspective of the plot, there is a focus on the secondary system, which I will explain below. Then extending outward, the adaptability of the third-level system is basically very poor. Simply put, the cost-effectiveness of development is too low. Without taking into account the variables of oath and restriction, most people will not develop a third-level system (but it is not excluded that some particularly powerful characters will involve the capabilities of the third-level system in the development process of some high-level abilities). Then, outside of this basic pentagonal framework, I connected the trait system with operations and embodiment, thus making the three systems of traits, operations, and tools a relatively closed triangular system. The reason is that I think that although the abilities of the trait system are very special, most of the trait systems that appear in hunters actually rely on the abilities of the other two systems (especially the materialization system). For example, the basis of Chrollo's abilities is the book "The Thief's Intention"; Niong's "Angel Notes" are embodied pens; Pike's ability to remember relies on embodied pistols... We can see that basically the basis for activating abilities is the embodied special "props", and in the actual ability activation stage, it can be It can be the operating system as a driver or ability limitation: Niong uses his ability to operate his own pen to write prophecies, Pike controls (reads) the opponent's memory, etc... Of course, in addition to this conventional trait system, there are also some trait systems that are similar to Naruto's "Blood Succession Limit", which is an ability produced by combining innate traits. For example, Kurapika's flaming eyes, Meleon (Chameleon)'s "God's alibi" and "God's accomplice", etc., But in the stage of activating abilities, they still cannot escape the conventional methods of operation and realization, such as "absolute time" needs to be combined with a five-finger chain; color change The dragon's ability needs to touch the other party, etc... If you look at the schematic diagram I modified, the operation system and the embodiment system theoretically have three secondary systems to choose from. You can also put it another way, it is easier to cooperate with the operation and embodiment system to generate special abilities similar to the trait system. Moreover, due to the triangular relationship, the Trait, Operation and Embodiment systems are actually the second system of each other. In other words, these three systems are particularly closely connected and highly compatible, and can develop very tricky abilities - I guess this is also from a balance point of view, in order to make up for the gap in attack methods caused by their overly strong direct attack capabilities compared to the upper three systems (especially the enhancement and release systems). Second, the relationship between the abilities of this system and the secondary system We can first use the reinforcement system to explain, because the reinforcement system is the simplest, and because Xiaojiegui, the representative of the reinforcement system, is the protagonist, the relationship between the two adjacent systems is also explained most clearly. To put it simply, the abilities of this system are all the basic skills and application skills of Nian (Zhou, Yin, Condensation, Yuan, Jian, Liu, Hard), and then adding the changes of the two adjacent systems, it is Xiaojie's Guessing Fist. In fact, all departments have at least two secondary systems, which means that in addition to the original properties, the abilities of this department also have two variable directions. So I modified the above picture and produced this secondary ability diagram: Basically, every character will have the opportunity to practice abilities other than their own. However, we can also see in the actual plot that different characters have preferences (or talent deviations) for the secondary system. For example, the transformation system obviously relies more on the materialization system than Siji's ability development, but the purpose of her ability is to assist her in strengthening her combat ability; while Maggie's transformation system is relatively pure, and has the property of turning thoughts into threads, which is close to Hisoka. The first is enhanced shooting. I think this term may not be appropriate. In fact, I think the so-called enhanced shooting needs to be understood in two parts. The first is the strengthening system. If an individual prefers the releasing system, he can mainly strengthen the use of expanded thoughts such as "week" and "circle". A specific example is probably Nobunaga. Although he is an enhancement type, he mainly strengthens the sword in his hand (it is not certain whether his ability is limited to this). As for the releasing type, it is closely related to the strengthening type. Therefore, if the strengthening type part can give any gain to the releasing type, it will probably be the help of shooting speed, power, flight speed, etc. Then there is the strengthening and change system, mainly the strengthening characteristics. Since the strengthening system is too simple, it can be directly understood as further strengthening the characteristics of the change system, or in other words, the change of thought itself has another kind of strengthening for itself. The transformation from strengthening to change is probably Xiaojie's "scissors", turning thoughts into "sharp" attributes. By analogy, the "hardness" can also be changed into a relatively soft and elastic state, and further it will be similar to Hisoka's rubber ability. As for Bisiji's transformation ability, although the main body of the ability is the embodied massage girl, I understand that the thought itself changes into a "potion" that can quickly relieve fatigue and promote metabolism. Then return to the bottom of the release system. The ability between the operation system and the release system is what I call the out-of-body control ability. Represented by the release type characters, it is the abilities of Leza and Guolenu, and represented by the operation type, it is the ability of Mo Laowu (I am not sure about Mo Laowu myself, because part of the main body of the Purple Smoke Soldier seems to be real smoke). With out-of-body control capabilities, the actual power of the release system is stronger (for example, Leza's mind beast easily catches Hisoka's bat), and the control ability of the operation system is more complex. I think the change between the system of change and the system of embodiment is multi-nature and multi-form. A specific example I think is Kate's ability "Crazy Clown". Due to the addition of the transformation system, his weapons can have ten changes. At the same time, if the abilities of the operation system or even the trait system are mixed, special effects can be added to the props (such as the life-saving No. 0 Weapon?). In fact, this multi-form and multi-property can be understood by the "enchantment" in some RPG games. Since the materialization system can only create things that exist objectively, if the transformation system and the operation system are mixed, it is theoretically equivalent to producing special props that do not exist in the world. Since the transformation system changes the nature of thoughts, the materialized items may not only change in various forms, but also have additional attributes, such as electrified and poisonous weapons that are common in games, etc.; And the addition of the operation system may cause the prop itself to have additional effects, such as "a net that forces it into a state of despair" and so on. The general effect of this special triangle of operation, embodiment and traits is to produce special effects through special rules and special props. Since the specific situation is complicated, there is no way to give a general explanation. The ability to mix the pure operation system and the embodiment system must have special effects, but this effect is not equivalent to the trait system. In the "Oaths and Restrictions" section below, I will specifically talk about the influence of the trait system, operation system, and embodiment system. 3. Fighting style, strength and physique This part is actually how I evaluated Chapter 377 of the "Hunter" comic before? An imaginative easter egg was inserted into the answer at the end. What I originally wanted to express was that I hoped that the character's telekinesis could be roughly identified through the character's size, physique, and strength. However, the original answer was relatively rough, so I hope I can add a little more to improve it. First of all, let's bring up the issue of strength. My point of view has not changed. I think that the strengthening system, headed by the upper three systems, will have a promoting effect on the physique and strength due to the way of fighting and the practice and use of mind. Therefore, from a general rule, I think people in the upper three systems will be stronger. For specific examples, let's take a look at the ranking of the brigade's strength: 1 Wojin, 2 Finks, 3 Hisoka, 4 Franklin, 5 Feitan, 6 Maggie, 7 Captain, 8 Peeling Lev, 9 Nobunaga, 10 Knight, 11 Pike Notan, 12 Xiaodi, 13 Kuhua. The top two are the strengthening system, Hisoka and Franklin are the transformation system and the release system respectively, Feitan is unknown, and Maggie is the transformation system. The following Xia Ke, Pike, Xiao Di, Ku Bie, etc. Are basically the operations, characteristics, and embodiments of the lower three series. Among the middle ones, Nobunaga of the strengthening type has weak wrist strength. As I explained above, he mainly prefers the strengthening of the releasing type, so what he strengthens are objects that leave the body. Moreover, it seems that his fighting method is fast slashing and Iai slashing, which emphasizes explosive power rather than lasting and huge destructive power. The leader's wrist strength ranks first, mainly because of his strong physical fitness. This is a special case given by the plot and cannot be explained. Peeling Lev is said to be a release type, but its attack is quite special, so it can only be treated as a special case. So in fact, as early as in Youke Xincheng, Yoshihiro Togashi had already revealed the relationship between the six major systems and power through the brigade's wrist strength ranking. This relationship is also reflected in the fighting style. I said in my original answer that the trait system and the strengthening system are at two ends of the six systems. One end is "righteousness", which uses basic mind application methods to fight openly, strengthen the body, strengthen weapons, and strengthen one's own mind. The result is the pursuit of absolute strength, absolute power, and absolute destructive power. The other end headed by the trait system is "odd", weird, fragile and special. Special mind changes, special use restrictions and rules, special effects, the pursuit of surprise victory, in the case of asymmetric intelligence, it is easy to restrain the pure strengthening system through special effects. The specific example is clearly shown in the passage where Kurapika kills Wokjin. The ultimate strength of Wojin's strengthening system, when Kurapika uses a necklace involving the operation system to force him into a state of absolute perfection, ordinary strengthened attacks can also damage his body. In terms of combat methods, the purpose of the upper three series is direct damage. It's just that the strengthening type seems closer to melee infantry, the releasing type is more like a long-range shooter, and the transformation type is more like the enchanted warriors in some RPG games (different from mages and warlocks). The main purpose of the lower three series of abilities is not to directly attack, but to create assistance, detection, disruption, indirect attack, etc. Through special rules, special props, and special effects. To put it bluntly, the lower three series are more of a combat method that does not require hands-on combat. Even if it is a method that requires personal participation in the battle, it is more inclined to agile combat rather than a head-on approach. The differences in fighting styles between the upper three series and the lower three series directly lead to the point that I will focus on in the following section, which is the use of constraints and oaths in the six series, as well as the differences between different series. Four. The essence and application of oaths and restrictions In the chapter on the Sky Tower, Yoshihiro Togashi formally introduced the concept of the Six Elements of Nenwa. Then in the Youke Xincheng chapter, he added oaths and restrictions as variables of mind. At that time, it was generally believed that the addition of this concept was equivalent to adding a way for the character to cheat. But until the Dark Continent chapter, through this series of plot changes, I think I roughly understood the rationality of oaths and restrictions, as well as their relationship with the six elements.