Tales of Lake and Mountain

My brother's writing is very good, he has experience and is close to reality, but it seems that his grades are not very good, so I am worried about you. I am not good at writing, but I have read a lot of books online and am an old bookworm. I can't help but want to give you some suggestions. Of course, I also hope that I can keep writing. After all, there are too few good novels now. I am afraid that if I never get results, I may not always have the motivation to keep writing, which would be a pity. First of all, I feel that the way my brother writes books is a bit like physically published books. The time for a book and a story does not take long across servers, and one book has hundreds of thousands of words. Of course, it would be better to publish a physical book, but when writing a book online, I feel that the space is a bit small. It can be extended to several million words, and it would be better to cover most of the protagonist's life. After that, the protagonist of the book written by my brother is a bit ordinary. I don't mean to say ordinary, and he has not achieved much. The protagonist is either powerful or rich, whichever is fine. Also, there cannot be fewer women, and it is not enough to write about just one woman. I feel that the president Song Tiejun in the book about Brother's branch is a good template for the protagonist. It is written that he worked in a bank after graduation. He was an ignorant young man who suffered a lot at first. As he grew up, he slowly got up and was entrusted with the important task of opening a branch. He overcame many difficulties and got his career in order. He is considered to be a high-ranking person. He is also a good and well-liked person. Although he suffered a small setback later, he finally cheered up. The emotional life is also relatively rich, and now readers like to read this. In fact, if the protagonist has money, the audience will be slightly larger than if the protagonist has power.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               It would be much easier to write if it were a rebirth article, hehe. Finally, I hope the author's performance will get better and better. It's a pity that such good literary talent has been buried. ps Looking at the pile of crappy books on the ranking list, I can't read them at all.

Why not put a notice in the old book? I almost didn't see the new book being released

The writing is very delicate. Children are sensitive and fragile inside. The formation of their character may change their destiny. It all has a cause and effect... It would be better if Jia Xifen's mother was gentler.

The old man has opened a new book 👍

Post a single chapter in a used book to attract some people.

Such a good book, why isn't it recommended? Take a look at what is recommended in daily drug guides.

👍Great, come on

After reading a few chapters, vote for the author

The plot of the story is connected with the previous two books. It is really clever and powerful👍

A strict teacher who hides his love in his heart. Only when he recalls it can he feel that it is precious and difficult. The description is so emotional.