Taking a Battleship to the Moon

There are too many bland characterizations. Look at the characterization of the Three-Body Problem. Shi Qiang is very likable, but Cheng Xin is so hated. Your plot has no explosive point at all. Simply put, if there is no clear scene, it is better to write about primitive people farming.

Looking at your profile, why are you going to the Trisolaris Galaxy? Don't you think death is not heroic enough?

How can I put it well? The subject matter is okay, but the author can't control it and the writing is too childish. After the sun continues to decay, only 10 years are left to discover that this is impossible. In the process, the earth's environment will become very bad, not so bad that humans can't survive. The article mentions that the sun is released by advanced civilization. Decay particles can be understood to mean that these particles accelerate the nuclear fusion reaction of the sun. This reaction has been accelerated to 4 billion years and compressed into the time of modern human civilization. In this process, it is impossible for human beings to exist without this environmental condition.

I am speechless about the merger of Blue Star into Xuanyuan. There is no way to solve the religious problem, and there is no way to solve the ideological problem. The correct solution is to properly absorb Blue Star talents. Otherwise, if 7 billion people are integrated, Xuanyuan Civilization will be finished immediately.

This is the first time I see a book with negative reviews. . .

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This subject attracted me, but after reading part of it, I discovered a lot of problems. First of all, Blue Star Unification is just like playing house. Even if it is merged into Xuanyuan Civilization, it is just like the idealized playing house. Brother, that is equivalent to surrender. You can do it with just one sentence? The vote was unanimously approved by a show of hands. Those are the big bosses of capital, the center of power. Even if they surrender, they are still shit. This is just a question. I understand part of the original work. The biggest black humor in Liu's book, the part where the rebels worship the sun, is gone. It's all about Long live His Majesty the Emperor. Are you Lelouch? What I want to watch is gone, only farming and development are left, but this aspect is just like writing hard science fiction. The author obviously has not reached that level. For example, there is no idea of ​​​​evolution of 4.6 Billion replays. The only way is to take a path similar to Star Wars, but I don't like ╮(＿)╭. Sorry, this book is no longer relevant to me.

Just hack into the satellite... And get the data. Interstellar travel is possible, but this is impossible? Let's just talk about building a lunar spaceship. If you want a boat ticket, buy it with resources. There are no resources to buy tickets with talented people and beauties.

Differences in civilization and culture bring great troubles. It would be fine if taken to another planet, but the protagonist also lacks a planet. Republic? How can civilized planners agree? Even if there are restrictions, it still won't work. Chinese people can't pick up Chinese people. Who is willing to share technology? Does R&D not require resources and talents? Only the protagonist in the book is willing to share and give away. Internationally, even gifts are conditional. Nor will he unconditionally trust the protagonist's civilization. After all, humans have their own set of tricks.

It's really poisonous... Author, if you don't read hard science fiction, you can just play with the settings of Stars, Civilization, and Eve. This setting is really at the level of a junior high school student reading extracurricular books...

The author advises you that you cannot master scientific and technological articles. Cut it.

The author is not suitable for writing science fiction. The details are not well controlled and I will give up after reading 3-4 chapters. The colonial ship uses "paper" and porcelain water cups... It is still a colonial ship that has been drifting in space for 100 years. At least change it to a consultation window! Printed materials are too luxurious.

Tai Shui is too wordy, and there are too many scenes on Earth. The main character is Xuanyuan Civilization, not Earth. . . . After reading more than twenty chapters, the protagonist and his civilization are invisible except for appearing at the beginning of the novel. . . .

The setting is good, but suddenly it doesn't look good. It's like the Iraq War, using high technology to fight a World War II-style war. I'm impressed.

How to say it. Pig's Foot is a member of the Yanhuang tribe, but after time travel, the content behind the earth I faced made me speechless. It feels like everything is beautiful and the country represents the earth. Xia country has no role at all. Among the 5 people who landed on the moon. There are also many astronauts from beautiful countries. Anyway, everything is pretty and there are a lot of scenes involving the country Xia. A normal Chinese person who travels through parallel time will definitely be indifferent to the China that he agrees with. The result makes me feel like a banana person

The creativity is quite good, but the plot arrangement and detailed settings all reflect social experience, scientific literacy, etc. Are too much... Such a good story is really wasted.

The idea is good, but it underestimates people's hearts and politics. It's too simple and I feel that the author can't control it.

It feels like the protagonist's civilization is not as good as Blue Star. With such garbage-like productivity, it really doesn't look like a civilization capable of navigating the star system.

The writing is really rubbish, and the writing is really good. There are more than 200 pages that haven't been completed yet, and from time to time they talk about one civilization and another. It's really your mother's fault.

I read thirty chapters at a glance, ten lines at a time, and the writing was as bad as a middle school student's composition

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 17. The main character's writing was so poor that I had no motivation to read on. Unremarkable

The first problem is that the protagonist is too busy to travel, what's the point of taking billions of people on the earth? Originally, we can not write about the earth, and we are not afraid of 404 and re-write the weird one. The second is that all the enemies are controlled by artificial intelligence, and they are all paralyzed. The third is the virtual reality hype story line of water wandering the earth.

Go read the original work of Liu Cixin's "The Wandering Earth", it's not that good

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I am a big fan of this book and the author. After reading the book, I became motivated to write. I also tried to write a novel. I hope that interested book friends can share it with me!