Starting from the Arrival of Elves into the Real World

This time I must not let it go unfinished. It's not easy for me to pursue your book.

Come on, author! Don't screw up

I feel that strengthening skills is too easy, and it can easily reach 3 levels of Dragon Dance. After that, wouldn't the levels be almost the same? Whoever has more enhanced skills is stronger. It's a bit true

The author should pay attention to the fact that he has written the male protagonist's name as Lin Qianyu several times, so you have to confirm whether the name you want to write is Chen Yinuo or Lin Qianyu, otherwise it will affect the perception.

After looking at the cover, I think the elves in the future should be just those few. Good guys, the Sandstorm team and the fire-breathing dragon are invading each other and hindering the whole family.

After the underground organization came out, I didn't feel it anymore. It was clearly stated that no matter whether it is reality or fiction, undercover agents will die, and gray people will die. Only those who have no way to go will take that road.

Is this kind of slow pace popular now? I wrote hundreds of chapters in less than a year.

This is another common novel from the starting point. I wish I could write five or six chapters in one day in the early stage of the plot. It is so slow, and the later stage is so long that I don't know what is going on. How can I stand up to the mythical beast?

Why do so many elf novels require the protagonist to join the underground world?

Are you sure Charmander's character is like that? Just like Larulas, Charmander is not meant to be strong and fiery.

What about qualifications? The probing skills show no qualifications

Author, when you open a new book, please post a single chapter in the old book.

Shouldn't there be two pairs of elves for two identities? One is the Sunny Team and the other is the Sandstorm Team. Otherwise, it will be a flaw at first glance.

Holy shit, this is my favorite Megazord Sentai grandma's, but it's missing a Boscodora.

It's not about whether female channels can avoid those fancy names. 😐

The third person has finished reading and is now normal.

Your cover shows a Sandstorm team with a fire-breathing dragon?

Are there character cards? I don't know what elves there are currently.

I just found out, is there a female lead? I didn't read the last book because the plot of raising elves was too much and there was no seasoning.

At level 11, you can perform the dragon dance three times at a time. If you choose to perform the Giant Pincer Mantis Sword Dance three times, wouldn't it be nice to kill the entire audience with a flash of lightning?

Can be refined