I Am Searching for Immortality Alone

After reading a few chapters, I feel uncomfortable complaining ① This is his home after time travel. The Lu family is his family. They gave birth to him and raised him. They have not treated him badly in food, clothing, housing and transportation. From the plot introduction, he has not been treated badly or suppressed. Suddenly he defected with a gloomy look on his face? ②The protagonist was born in a powerful family, and the person in charge is his own father-in-law. With such an awesome background and 20 years of planning time, even if such an awesome power is not used, it will become like an enemy. And then the plot foreshadowing keeps praising the protagonist for his awesome strategy, which is boring ③Hidden for 20 years, the first time he made a move was to defect, and he captured another powerful person. The family members, well, that's no problem. The problem is that they are being found out every minute. Everyone, whether it's their own family or the Wang family, knows that the Lu family has never treated him badly. Be careful. If the two families fight, so many relatives will die. The first reaction of the old man is to take him back to protect his shortcomings. Moreover, the person captured by the protagonist is the treasure of the Wang family. As long as the older generation is sent out, the protagonist will not survive more than three chapters. To sum up, the protagonist is a mess (no conscience + no brains + not worthy of a family)

I really regretted reading it without reading the comments. I have low drug resistance. The bald guy who brought him home in the first ten chapters... I think he ran away from the family without thinking about the consequences. He came to the bald family without thinking about the consequences. The bald family is happy no matter what, with a wife and a daughter. Just because of him, ha... He ran away from the family without thinking about anything. He kidnapped Wang Bing without thinking about anything. He didn't kill people when they chased him. Before The writing was so mysterious and so scheming. When I read the comments, it wasn't that he was mysterious, he just used his skills to suppress his emotions. I laughed. That means that the inscrutability he described earlier was actually the result of his skills. He himself was indeed a retard I didn't read the rest of it, and I didn't need to know what his reasons were. When I read the first part, I thought he was just a reckless man. He thought of what he was and wanted to find an immortal. I'm afraid I laughed to death.

A good protagonist is written like a humanoid hedgehog 🦔. It would be better not to write this overseas part. After writing this, I feel that my combat power has collapsed. He wrote so fiercely that he looked like a God of War abroad, and then returned to China and continued to be played by Qu Tong? You are so awesome that Qu Tong still dares to mess with you? Qu Tong is so awesome than her, why don't you go to Longhu Mountain twice 😰, other people's cool articles are to reduce the villain's power, you are to reduce the protagonist's intelligence

I haven't finished it yet. To be honest, I didn't see the point of doing that at the beginning. Why did Kingpin have to die? If it is to restrain the spirits and send generals, there is no need to do this. There are plenty of opportunities. The protagonist used the stupidest method. Seeing that the author never explained the reason, I couldn't stand it anymore. Especially looking for Zhang Chulan. You are being hunted by the Wang family now. Why are you running to Zhang Chulan?

I can't stand it anymore, the first twenty chapters are enough to persuade me to quit. If you go to someone else's house after you are in trouble, you are either really bad or stupid, and there is no way to clean it up. The author's writing style is good, but very verbose. That's it, slip away

What is the relationship between the protagonist and Lu Huan? When it comes to Lu Huan, he seems to have lost his mind and can't even control Qi. You are a time traveler, and she is an original character who died early. How can they have an unforgettable friendship? I was baffled by what I saw.

Let me tell you what I think. I haven't read the book yet, and the comment section is a mixed bag of good and bad, but I can tell you what's bad about it. If the book is said to be good but has no reason to be good, then the book is definitely bad, and the score is only at this level. It may be worse. 50% Of the people who said it was good are money-killing, and 50% are good books. Don't come here and ask me to read a book. I'm afraid I'll encounter a plot that poisons my brain. Who wouldn't read so many books?

I stopped watching it after meeting Zhang Chulan. I don't understand why I have to dwell on the Eight Strange Strategies. The Heavenly Master doesn't need the Eight Strange Strategies to become the number one. Does the protagonist think he is not as good as the Heavenly Master?

A suggestion Under one person, the foundation of life is very important. It is the basis and fundamental of everything. Therefore, some sects attach great importance to tempering the foundation of life. For example, the Golden Light Curse and the Three Levels of Reverse Life both rely on entering a special state to enhance one's life. Golden light and Qi Hua are incidental by-products; Quanzhen concentrates on tempering life regardless of other things; the Samadhi True Fire of the Wuhou Sect is also the fire of life. It can be said that as long as the foundation of life is strong enough, it cannot be shaken by any means. The reason why the old Heavenly Master is invincible is because his life foundation is unparalleled in the world, so even the most basic golden light spell can turn decay into magic in his hands. And the protagonist now has Blue Hand and Ju Lingju General, which can be said to have a good foundation in sex. Now what the protagonist lacks is the skill of destiny. He can awaken the red hand in the future, and if he adds the Liuku Immortal Thief, it will be perfect.

The author's level is not good enough. He has already failed to write and has given up.

The latest news is that the author said that he has temporarily stopped updating this book because Mi Er Ye is too slow to update and he can't figure out the plot behind it. The original plot he wrote is not recognized by everyone, so he is planning to open a new book. He will wait for the original comic to be completed.

Didn't it say at the beginning that Lu Huan was just an ordinary playmate? It's not like she's a biological sister, and the protagonist also kept a low profile in order to pretend to be a transparent person when she was a child. Why does Lu Huan always make the protagonist lose control of her mentality and explode? Is it possible that he cares more about me than his parents and his immediate family members? Regardless of the parents and family, the family was kind to the protagonist in his upbringing. In the later period, the family also tried to please the protagonist. Isn't it natural that the author chose the family as the starting point to develop the family? Otherwise, it will start with the same old routine of an orphan whose parents are dead, who has a car, a house, and a sister, but they are not biologically related. Creating a family birthplace without caring about the family will disgust all readers.

I don't think about the consequences at all. I don't think about the revenge of the Wang family at all, and Wang Bing is actually not weak. Killing Wang Bing at the beginning, I can't understand at all. Do you think you are an inexplicable master? Or are the Wang family too easy to bully? And many of the things written are very strange, and they are self-motivating.

Author, you must be clear that he is a seeker of immortality, not a gangster! Not the underworld! Underworld! I can understand that one or two characters should be used to advance the plot appropriately, but in the past 50 chapters, I didn't see him seeking immortality at all. I just saw a gangster. Don't put the cart before the horse, okay?

I feel that all the books about one person and society are good, but this one is a bit interesting and has been hacked by various book friends xxxxx. Please, if you have the time to criticize others, I won't read your own good writing. Money is not the problem now, good books are.

In my opinion, the protagonist doesn't look like a cultivator at all, and he acts unscrupulously. In my opinion, distorting people's subjective consciousness is the greatest evil, and it is more outrageous than killing people to refine their souls. And what kind of immortal is this? What are you seeking? It's just fantasy. You kill people and seize treasures every day and pursue various arts. It's not impossible for you to do this, but you have to deal with some metaphysical issues, but there are no taboos in your actions. You still try to use your skills to see the Tao. Do you have this ability? The reason why I don't approve of the protagonist's behavior is that the sense of separation is too severe. The original protagonist group is the nanny and the good guy. When meeting the villain, he directly distorts his cognition and becomes a god, or simply sucks his soul and becomes a puppet. This comparison really made me laugh.

Is the protagonist going around making enemies and being ungrateful and raising a white-eyed wolf without caring about his family? Stop looking for immortals and seek demons instead, because there is someone in front of the immortal. What kind of realm is Qu Tong? As a time traveler, the protagonist is familiar with the plot and can guide people around. Isn't it the same as always writing protagonists who are unpredictable and scheming? The protagonist is prophetic and has never grown up for the benefit of the family. Under one person are modern aliens. What are the ten major forces? Why does Ding Jiuan, one of the two heroes, want to join Quanxing? In modern times, the only way to cultivate immortality is to join a big force. There are too few resources and they are all controlled by the big families. If you look at the Eight Magic Skills, you will know which force captures them.

Say it! This is not an invincible article! Not an invincible article! The protagonist is not invincible when he appears. He cannot punch or kick the old master. In a world under one person, in terms of talent for cultivating Taoism, how many people can crush the old Celestial Master, even if you include the immortals who have emerged from the past? Except for the old Heavenly Master, few of the top experts can crush others, right? Lu Jin had to kneel down when he met the Four Kuangs in Longhu Mountain. Isn't Wang Ye very talented? He was born specifically for the Feng Hou Qi Sect, and he was the only one who had mastered it. So many old guys in Wudang had not mastered it, but they had to kneel down when they should. With the exception of Lao Tianshi, I feel that I pay more attention to the mutual restraint of superpowers. Besides, the protagonist has been practicing for twenty years, but to be honest, the blue color of Soul Ming Technique is not very suitable for combat, not to mention that the red hand has not been awakened yet. And which one of those old guys hasn't been practicing for decades? Even more than a hundred years. I'm not a person who only eats dry food. Without a golden finger, how can you crush others if you just rely on cultivation? The old Celestial Master knocked down Lu Jin with a slap when the young boy appeared on the stage. Can he defeat the Celestial Master of the previous generation? Can we say that Heavenly Master is not good enough? And Zhang Lingyu, as the successor of Longhu Mountain, after so many years of training, can he crush any of the four madnesses with just a little force? Can we say he is a waste? If the protagonist, without a golden finger, can casually kill those old immortals when he is less than twenty, beat ten old men into silence, and transform into an immortal in a few years, then the world view under one person will be shattered. So although the protagonist set here has talent, he is still in the category of human beings. I said so much, in one sentence. This is not an invincible article. If you don't like it, don't force it. Please don't affect the author's mentality. Thank you!

Brother, I've put your book on my bookshelf and haven't even bothered to delete it. I really don't have any other fics that I can read. When will you update it?

There's not enough foreshadowing for Lu Huan. It's obviously the climax, but I don't know why the protagonist is so angry. There are so few updates that I can't keep up.

Come on, author! Keep updating 😊

Will the author continue?😰