My Tokyo Exorcism Journal

I read Chapter 12 and it's too watery... A lot of unnecessary descriptions and mental activities, as well as background descriptions of abilities emmmm

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The cooperation between the spiritual master and the police to solve the case is quite good, but it is too wordy.

666

Forget about the few updates, every stick is very watery. I just went upstairs to check and wrote several pictures. If this goes on, my patience is almost gone.

It's well written, keep it up. The homogeneity that I see nowadays in the Japanese Onmyoji genre is too serious. The settings and writing styles, as well as the settings of the protagonists and supporting characters, are too similar. This book looks good, so don't enter the palace.

There is too much redundancy, there is not much main line in the description, too many additional descriptions are mixed in, and there is almost no main line promotion. After reading a whole ten chapters, I just took a case and didn't even arrive at the scene. . Just terrible. . . The primary and secondary bias is too serious. . 🙂

A eunuch? I just discovered this book yesterday and finished reading it. I stopped updating it for three days today.

I read a lot of nonsense after reading Chapter 12, it's really watery, how can I make people want to read on?

The progress is too fast, there are too many descriptions and settings, and an income of one million is easily earned. After the pressure of survival is relieved, a national mission comes up immediately, which is quite abrupt. The truth about the death of the female ghost has not yet been cleared up. The description of the conflicts within the police department is a bit redundant. One description after another shows that the plot is not compact enough. The protagonist has a purpose, but it is not big enough. After surviving, he has become famous, and there are female characters he admires around him, so the protagonist has nothing to pursue. The yin and yang setting is relatively monotonous and there are no enemies. The background is also slightly modern and has little deviation. The plot development is relatively straightforward. Overall, it is still watchable, but there are not many highlights. The female psychology can be written more delicately, and the supernatural agency should be written more mysteriously. The main character is for powerful abilities after all, not for fame. Being too famous is meaningless, and exposing abilities is not necessarily a good thing. The interpersonal relationship develops too fast, and the female assistant's psychological transformation is normal, but the direct writing is too plain, and it feels like calling 666 later. The details of the murder case are not enough, and the key characters' personalities are not highlighted enough. It would be much better to add a more impressive detailed description of the doctor and the murderer. The protagonist seems to have a strong sense of urgency. I kept doing tasks, and leisure and entertainment were simply carried out. In short, the theme to be expressed is not clear. If the theme of Riqing is love, the theme of yin and yang should highlight the supernatural power of yin and yang. The focus is on the magic of yin and yang. Use segmented descriptions to describe the technique and pay attention to the progressive system and ability function. Looking at the yin and yang of the protagonist, the only way to see is the yin and yang eyes, the perception of yin and yang aura, and the attack can only be casually described with a handful of hands. This is more messy and unfocused, that is, there is no sense of expectation. The investigation did not highlight the interesting process. It felt as dull as the work process. The methods used to deal with ghosts were monotonous and the treatment of women was quite satisfactory. I took a simple tour and it was overall dull. The setting of the plot was actually okay. Maybe it was due to the author's writing style. The writing was relatively indifferent.