My Tokyo Exorcism Journal
我的东京除灵笔记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 211k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
86Chapters
1.7kRecommendations
26Fans
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I've read 12 chapters, and it's so padded... Lots of unnecessary descriptions and inner monologues, and the background information on abilities... Emmmm
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The collaboration between exorcists and police in solving cases is quite good, but it's a bit too verbose.
The updates are infrequent, and each one is incredibly weak. Just one simple "going upstairs to check" post took several pages. At this rate, I'm losing patience.
Well written, keep it up! These days, most novels about Japanese Onmyoji are too similar – the settings, writing styles, and even the main and supporting characters are all too alike. This one looks good; please don't let it become a palace drama!
Too much redundancy, little focus on the main plot, and too much extraneous description. The main storyline is practically nonexistent; after reading ten chapters, it's just about taking on a case without even going to the scene. It's simply appalling. The focus is severely unbalanced. 🙂
Has it been abandoned? I just discovered this book yesterday, finished reading it, and today marks its third consecutive day of inactivity.
After reading twelve chapters filled with rambling nonsense, it's really padded out. How could anyone possibly want to keep reading?
The pacing is too fast, with too many descriptions and settings. The protagonist earns a million dollars at every turn, easing the pressure of survival, only to be immediately interrupted by a national mission, which feels abrupt. The truth behind the female ghost's death remains unclear, and the internal conflicts within the police department are somewhat superfluous.
Will you continue writing? If you're not, please let me know; it would be such a shame.