Myriad Worlds: From Soul Master to Dimensional Demon God

I don't know if it's the character problem of the protagonist or the author forcibly writing the plot. Originally, the protagonist is hiding himself. The awakening of the martial soul is manifested as the key martial soul and the first-level soul power. Everyone knows that the martial soul is useless. The protagonist actually has a mental activity and says that Brother Tao is indeed a blind Douluo. This is very embarrassing. I suggest you change it.

As long as you have some emotional intelligence, you won't ridicule and belittle strangers who have no conflict of interest with you in public. It would be okay if the protagonist Yu Xiaogang's hard character is placed after the protagonist grows up. Although many people hate Yu Xiaogang, the way it is written makes it appear that the protagonist has a negative emotional intelligence. A low emotional intelligence is okay. As long as you have real skills, you still have a chance to become bigger and stronger, but if you have a negative emotional intelligence...

Chicken ribs, tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away

Poison Douluo is a bit poisonous. There is no need to write it like this. It would be better if it were normal. Isn't it just to find a backer? It is written that I will almost be killed. If it is me, I will definitely come back with revenge if I can escape.

Let me explain the author's thoughts. In the first chapter, the difference between the two sides' forces is clearly stated. One is the imperial aristocratic force. The other is good at the beginning, but the internal personnel are in chaos at the top. The entire force was in chaos. What choice would a normal person make? One joins the nobles, the other joins the Wuhun Palace and the third builds it by oneself. If it is obvious that both sides have problems, then one should build one by oneself. Then I said that I would join the Wuhun Palace and be the dog of the Wuhun Palace. I was shocked when I saw it. Second, the strongest person should be able to teach the strongest person. But the reality is that there are many world-class boxing champions whose teachers or managers are not boxers. The teacher just gives you the formula. How you use it is your business. The second theorist must be a strong one. What about this? I can't refute it, let me give you an example. Is Hawking a strong person? He is not. Ah, he is a theoretical person. Do you dare to say that he is not good at theory?

That's it. The setting of this book has collapsed into a mess. Epic-level enhanced Douluo. I even doubt that the author has ever read Douluo. He pitted Douluo against the Dragon Clan. That's why the author dares to be so stubborn about Douluo when most readers recognize the Douluo in the sewer. That's it. I thought I would be able to read it in the early stage, but it's a pity.

It's not fun enough, the plug-ins are all fancy, it's too cliche and boring.

The data in the latest chapter is a bit confusing. These can be read in the library. When the grass jelly appears later, don't directly tell the effect and how to do it. It is best to give a vague explanation based on the material composition and similar energy composition. Refer to the effects of short legs of ordinary medicinal materials. As for picking, the medicinal materials themselves are easy to react with certain substances, so tools of this substance cannot be used. What is the composition of the energy cycle of the plant itself, so how should it be picked so as not to break the energy cycle and cause the loss of medicinal efficacy? Although it is nonsense, isn't the novel written to be self-explanatory?

Update capsule? Haven't updated for a long time! 😡

Gas Douluo, an excavator pushing horizontally,