My Wife Came Out of a Game

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If you want to write, then write well. If you don't want to, just leave it alone. Readers don't owe you anything. Take a look at what you write after the PK fails.

I almost didn't fall asleep last night. The uncle next to me was snoring and I got up to go to the toilet in the middle of the night. When I went back to sleep, he suddenly fell asleep!! 😭😭 Finally, I slowly fell asleep with the quilt covering my head.

One thing is said, and the first post is one. I am the boss at this moment, who is in favor and who is against?

After reading the author's previous works, they are all about 250,000 words long. . . How dare I look at this? He entered the palace just looking at it. Who would want to do this? . . Either reopen the vest and write a book, or stop being like this, frequent eunuch

What I want is the exciting feeling of meeting a ghost and being warned of danger. I haven't felt like this for a long time. Look at what novels are nowadays, they are not exciting at all, they are more fantasy than horror. What super powers or unparalleled powers? Guys, open your eyes. Isn't a horror novel still a horror novel? Even if it is suspense, it should have an atmosphere of suspense. This book is quite good.

It took me about 2 days to read this book, and I will write about my feelings after reading this book (I gave some opinions, some of which are straightforward): 1. First of all, the subject matter is not new, but in terms of the choice of subject matter (double world, micro-horror, system, upgrade), I made no mistakes. 2. Personally, I think the first hundred chapters are high-end, and I can understand the male protagonist's initial weakness in ability. He uses his strength to complete the task, and at the same time, the characteristics of his family members are all highlighted, which is remarkable. 3. Poisonous points in the last hundred chapters: 1) The attribute improvement brought by each upgrade of the male protagonist is meaningless. All the battles of the male protagonist in the two worlds rely on external forces (movement, props), even to fight a monster in Building 4, props are required. 2) Bai Xi is not well shaped, and the emotional line is very stretched. Although Bai Xi is affected by dreams, her brainlessness is completely inconsistent with the normal IQ of the management of an official super organization. At the same time, compared with some of the male protagonist's negative emotional intelligence behaviors, it is difficult for me to accept some of the male protagonist's ideas (the sense of immersion in the novel). 3) The real world is not well shaped. The description of the real world is very watery, basically just daily life, and basically only a cat cafe. There is no explanation of official power agencies or world background. Similarly, the appearance of villains in the real world is very strange. Every time they fight monsters, they have to come out to make their presence felt, but they do nothing but say one sentence to show that they are perverted. And the real world obviously has a longer time, but the description content is too little, only daily life. 4) There is a sense of incompatibility between the inner world and the narrative technique in the form of a copy. I initially regarded Inner World as a "world", but the current narrative technique feels like a "game" composed of countless copies, and the copies are separated from each other, making it feel like completing various tasks among countless copies. At the same time, this system is the male protagonist's personal information system on the one hand, and on the other hand, it feels like the game system of Inner World. The two are actually different, but now they are a bit mixed and suspected of being stitched together. 5) The male protagonist has insufficient IQ and strength. 1. The male protagonist does not use the cards in his hand properly. He squeezes toothpaste every time. If he can't beat him, he will use more trump cards. If he can't do it anymore, he calls his wife. 2. The gap in combat power is too large. The male protagonist's combat power is now equivalent to that of an ordinary person with a lot of strange props and provocative power, and cannot have an effect on the battle situation, because the victory or defeat of the battle only depends on whether the wife comes or not. 3. His character is not very good. I feel like he is a scumbag who is full of lies and smooth talk? I don't know, this may be my misunderstanding... Most of them are my subjective feelings. I have read online articles for more than ten years, and this is my first time to write a book review. This book does have potential, but there are also many places that deserve improvement. If you think it is valuable, just learn from it. If you think it is inconsistent with your outline, then follow your opinion. I am just commenting. How to write it is up to the author.

Male protagonist: The whole world loves me. Every woman gives me props. I haven't become stronger from the beginning to the end, but it doesn't matter. I have a group of nc women licking me, and I also secretly step on two boats. I'm so powerful Female 1: I am a sick girl. I love the male protagonist so much. I just want to bite him. Although the stronger ones have lived for countless years, I am old and don't have brains. Men just want to pick on trash and scumbags Female 2: I am the male protagonist's boss. Logically speaking, I am a royal sister and sane? Nonono He's with me behind his wife's back. I'm so excited. It's like I've never seen a man in my life. I want to lick him, lick him to death, and let him know that even Wang Baochuan is not one ten thousandth as good as me. I can go up the mountain of swords and the sea of ​​fire for my brother. What? You ask me what I like about him. I like his infidelity. I like that he treats me badly. I like his food. Author: Although I don't have a framework when writing a book, dig holes without filling them, and have deviated views, but I will sell badly. Other authors spend three months thinking about the outline and two months sorting it out. But this book is my five months of hard work. And the ending I want is very good. But the results are not good. There is no way that I can't generate electricity for love. It has nothing to do with my poor grades. It has nothing to do with my inability to fill in the pits. It has nothing to do with the collapse of my characters. It has nothing to do with the fact that I want to write about reincarnation, mystery, the apocalypse, and the theme of one body and three souls. It has nothing to do with it. In short, I am miserable. But I won't tell you. You can figure it out for yourselves.

Is this multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist? The single heroine bar has so many people who have a crush on the protagonist. There are many heroines, and the wife is so strong, cursed and has a mysophobia. Don't end up deciding on a single heroine at the end and then entangle a bunch of other girls, you can't bear to part with this one and feel sorry for that one.

Sent. Don't fall into the trap! The ending is terrible and disgusting. Bai Xia stayed up late watching.