From Kamar-Taj to Hogwarts

Starting from the part where he goes to jail, the protagonist and his alternate soul seem to become two different people, one utterly incompetent and the other constantly showing off. I know you don't want to write an invincible story, but rather a coming-of-age story.

In Western fantasy works, regardless of the novel or legend, outstanding mages share a common trait: an insatiable thirst for knowledge. This protagonist possesses the magical systems and knowledge of two worlds, yet it feels like he's wasting all that knowledge.

A Harry Potter-esque protagonist with a strange sense of justice and an inexplicable heroic demeanor; personally, I don't find the protagonist likable.

Write a long review: • Story background: A rare glimpse into Hogwarts during Grindelwald's era. I've read "I Am Legend" from this period before; the story was excellent, but it differed too much from the original setting, making it less acceptable to fans of the source material.

I read a book before where the protagonist said: "I don't care whether you are pure-blooded or not, because in my eyes you are all the same, just like I never care about the bloodline of ants."

Born with the heritage of Kamar-Taj and a pure-blood family, he killed two dark wizards with a burst of magical power from birth. But he faltered at Hogwarts? His magic power waned? After over 20 years of studying magic, he doesn't seem to have many trump cards up his sleeve? With such a powerful soul, why doesn't he explore it further? I'd like to ask, is the protagonist an idiot?

Or should we figure out what the protagonist is thinking? The current situation is like encountering a serial killer at school, causing chaos. Even if your family is wealthy, shouldn't you use your family connections to go home and hide until things calm down before confronting him? You're not the top student in the school, so why can't all those professors help you? Why do you have to do it yourself?

I have a question: why does the protagonist, who has been a seasoned veteran in Marvel's Kamar-Taj for over 20 years (and the book even mentions that he enjoys reading), perform so poorly in Harry Potter? The protagonist enters school at eleven, so even if he started learning magic at eight, it shouldn't be this bad (his family is one of the 28 pure-blood families).

The idea is good, but why make it so childish? The protagonist doesn't act like an adult at all; he seems very immature. The plot isn't engaging either; it's not even as interesting as the synopsis.

When I first saw Kamar-Taj + Hogwarts, I thought it was an excellent book. The beginning was alright, at least I could keep reading. I couldn't hold back anymore when I saw the protagonist's ghost; the more I read, the more speechless I became.