The Making of a Great Demon King

It's okay, but pay attention to the percentage. You must give an explanation. Otherwise, the percentage data will directly crash when used later. You can adjust it a bit. For example, the percentage bonus and debuff provided by low-level equipment with too high data are useless, just like when playing swordsmanship, the novice sword will explode directly.

Yes, among the many funny characters, there is finally one who is slightly more normal.

The writing of this book is quite good, and the character communication and textual explanation of the plot flow are well connected, but the author suppresses the protagonist's cultivation too hard, and then arranges for the protagonist to contact those with very high cultivation in advance. The protagonist has no golden elixir cultivation, and as a result, he always escapes from the hands of those ceiling bosses. Even if there is a powerful magic weapon, the writing is too far-fetched. If you have a magic weapon, others have it, not to mention that their cultivation is many levels better than the protagonist. Also, the main character It's really far-fetched that the character can always kill people who are several levels higher than the protagonist. I hope the author can restrain himself a little. There are still many plots that can be written, and there is no need to rush to arrange the subsequent plots. For example, the arrangement of the protagonist's power can be written a lot, and the plot can be advanced slowly. The current arrangement of the protagonist's strength is too perfunctory. Since the author has always emphasized the need to develop strength, don't be so perfunctory, or don't arrange the power for the protagonist. Otherwise, it will give readers a feeling that the protagonist is frivolous, unreliable, and has high ambitions and low abilities. The plot advances too fast, and it seems as if the protagonist has to stop for a moment. This kind of writing is really not advisable now. The previous protagonist went to get the true essence of the God of War and agreed to other things, but the result was also very perfunctory. He just gave some skills to a player and asked him to protect the village, and then ignored it. There are many more, and the writing is very perfunctory. It feels like the author doesn't want to write these plots, so he just perfunctory it.

What a pity. The book is very good, with good writing and conception, and a grand setting. However, the subscription data is not good and it can only be left unfinished. It is really a pity.

He kills people decisively, never suffers a loss, is ruthless in doing things, and has a humanoid cheat heroine. This is a pretty good novel!

There are a lot of pitfalls left unfilled. Q originally wrote well about online games, but suddenly it became fantasy.

One thing I can say is that there is really no need for the GM to pursue the target.

The writing is good, but the introduction is too shoddy.

Although this book is about online games, it writes a magnificent world of immortals and heroes, which made me dream back to ten years ago, when I watched Wandering Toad online traveling in Shushan. It can be said to be the legacy of Huan Zhu Louzhu. Worth booking in full.

Because the GM is a template obtained by modifying data in the background, it is not considered a player, resulting in a logical conflict with the "player nemesis", so it can only obtain the "impermanence of life and death" destiny in the primary stage. (Personal speculation: Otherwise it is unclear why the "Player Nemesis" thinks that the opponent is partly a player) That raises a question. Since the official has the ability to modify the data template (or even fabricate it), it means that the official has the ability to modify and view the underlying data of the database (then the destiny of the pig's feet cannot be explained), which is inconsistent with the previous setting that the official cannot intervene in the super AI conflict! It is understandable that the author controls the strength of the pig's feet, but I hope the author can justify it later!