Wizard: I Have a Dead Cultivation World

It's very interesting, the wizard has a very advanced civilization feel. Especially the scene where the wizard destroys the world with ice cubes, I feel that if expanded, it could support a short drama or novel on its own. In the novel, there is a high-level wizard who wants to preserve the resources of a world as much as possible. It's like a world dropped an ice cube with 0.02% Of its mass. At first, the attitude of people in this world towards ice was curiosity, vigilance, and ecstasy. But the attitudes of people in this world don't matter at all. Twenty years later, the ice began to melt. Sea levels began to rise and temperatures began to drop. A hundred years later, there are glaciers everywhere, and the world's average temperature is completely uninhabitable. At this time, the wizard only needs to send knights to clean up the world. And the setting of the knight is also very interesting. It is not the kind of knight who practices breathing techniques. But every knight has been transplanted with various combat organs. This seems to be based on the Warhammer setting, but it is very suitable for wizard civilization. You can take a look.

Are you doing third-level witchcraft? Can all six levels be analyzed? After taking one bite of the elixir, you even figured out the formula? Your Eye of Truth is really awesome. Those who don't know better think it's the Eye of Omniscience. Is this the third level?

I feel very good, but the articles often confuse spiritual stones and magic stones. The author can check more after finishing writing.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too dramatic. If you write a Western fantasy, just write Western fantasy properly. If the old wizard is teasing a young wizard, you can change it to him teasing you. The later part of "Uncle Master" is really too dramatic. If you change the name to "Your Excellency", you can add one or two more words.

I didn't even change the name of the TM operation, I just copied it from Warhammer 😒. It's so boring.

The writing is a bit immature, but the thinking is pretty good

Witcher Edition-Warhammer Astartes

The writing is very good. If you don't find other authors to recommend their works, the exposure will be a bit lacking.

The rules and logic are confusing, and it's hard to justify it. It's a pity that the magic effect is subjectively forced for the plot outcome.

I greatly support the author and hope that the results of this book will get better and better I also welcome interested book friends to criticize and correct my book "I have a full level of physical training, but I still have to work as a cow horse?""