Simulating Life in the City

Such incidents are state secrets, definitely monitored by satellite and under comprehensive surveillance. You might be able to slip in once or twice, but don't write it like that again. High-precision footage can't be blurry; even if it is, it can be restored.

The protagonist of this book didn't take the simulation seriously at all. Even if you die dozens of times in a game, you at least think of a way to survive. The protagonist, however, didn't change at all. Why didn't he wear a helmet when bugs hit his face? Why didn't he prepare some weapons to protect himself from danger?

Of all the simulation books I've read, this is the most mindless.

The fastest way for the protagonist to cultivate is to rely on the government. There's no need to enter another dimension, and the money needed for the simulator won't flow into the real world, having no impact on the economy. Author, have you considered this? With the government backing you, the government will provide the money to simulate as many times as you want.

The protagonist either does things secretly or openly; acting suspiciously is simply courting death and making a laughingstock of oneself.

Forgive my bluntness, but if you've decided to join an organization, then you should choose the biggest one. You might as well join the nation than the Nanhua Group.

The more I read, the angrier I got. Didn't this protagonist know that you have to nip things in the bud? Why did he have to kill people one by one?

He kept encountering bugs and didn't even bring an electric mosquito swatter; he got bitten by a snake and didn't wear protective clothing. What kind of IQ does this protagonist have? He falls into the same pit ten times before he realizes it. And when it comes to simulating money-making schemes, why doesn't he use the simulator to earn money first? He even explains that construction sites are lucrative—I'm speechless. What's his obsession with manual labor?

The book's writing is poorly considered; there is obvious overlap in the descriptions of agility and speed. The protagonist's choice regarding the simulation results is too discouraging (I don't even understand the author's intention in writing it this way; I don't believe that mindless choices can retain any type of reader).

I've seen other authors where the protagonist's growth is too fast and the story falls apart, but this is the first time I've seen a story where the protagonist's growth isn't fast enough. The protagonist's growth is weak, the money-making speed is slow, and the consumption doubles every five simulations... Is this supposed to be a money-printing machine for the protagonist later?