They All Say That I Am a Wife

If you want to write about a harem, then write about a harem, but I don't like any of these women. I have no feelings for them. Guan Yan comes from a piano family, but she is not recognized by her parents. She has a low and negative personality and is begging for the male protagonist. Xu Jingrong, a big star, whose father is the boss of a company, should be Bai Fumei in theory, but in the author's writing, he is a person with social difficulties, a wooden man who is led by his agent. To put it nicely, he is cold and not good at expressing himself, to say it worst. . . Haha Zhuo Feng, a girl from the mountains, a child from a poor family, learned dance at a university for nationalities. Not to mention that dance majors cost a lot of money for a family. She has to be trained from an early age. Just treat her as a gifted girl. This girl was discovered by the director and starred in the third female lead in the movie. She also has low self-esteem and introversion, and is not easy to speak. She is also a little transparent in variety shows. She relies entirely on the halo of the male protagonist and is famous for various small accidents. Hey, it really makes me tired. Can't you be more normal? Beautiful, lively, cheerful, enthusiastic and generous.

What do you think of this little order? I think it's too...

My evaluation is that if you want to write a harem story, don't have so many scenes with the heroine and other male characters. I saw in the latest chapter, one is sweating and a bearded guy sees him and tells them to stop messing around (the author also mentioned that the little vest is very see-through) and the second is another One is carrying the host on his back, and the third is wearing a necklace with another man. Let me just say this. Many people will immediately run away after seeing this. You yourself also said that you should fight against the two recommended. There are so many such plots. Even if it becomes popular, many readers will call it a cuckold, right?

Why don't you mention Xu Xiaoling? It's so unpleasant. In the new chapter, the protagonist says he is busy and even comes over late at night. He will blame the protagonist again when the photos taken are posted online. I have never seen this kind of people who are not very familiar with each other. They are so arrogant every day. They have said that I can refund you without buying the money, and they are still stalking you. It is really disgusting. There are so many words written about this person, why don't you write about Zhuo Lan? Your system is almost gone.

The author has a suggestion for you. When I was writing the last book "Gas Station", I wanted to say it but kept forgetting it. Could you please stop using some English nouns when writing? It's very funny. You are writing a Chinese novel. Don't mix Chinese and English. It's very low-key and makes you look uneducated.

Everything else was fine, except that a fresh-faced man who had just graduated was calm in the face of so many beauties, and was calmer than an old monk. He must be a eunuch.

Lin Bei really can't stand it anymore. Author, do you know how to write a harem story? Let's take a look at the women who have the main contact with the protagonist. One is seen in a very revealing vest, one is wearing a necklace, one is carrying someone, and one is performing a sex scene. My evaluation is: the entertainment industry is very real, but novels don't need to be so real.

What is this about? I can't tell from the title or introduction.

Isn't this a system of injustice? Others succeeded and kicked them away. I feel like there could be a next one. Divorce ××× at the beginning, and then slap his ex-wife in the face

I originally thought it was well written, but in the blink of an eye, I helped a green tea bitch. This green tea bitch reminded me of Tara's troll, and I just wanted to quit.

She keeps writing about what she wants. She just quits normally when she quits the group. She also maliciously slanders other people. Isn't this a person with obvious character problems? I won't subscribe anymore. Goodbye.

No, what's the use of your system? You won't get any benefit from purely assisting yourself? So wouldn't it be better for you to become a teacher in a technical school like Lanxiang?

Green turtle! ! ! ! I hate tauren the most in my life. I have mysophobia and the thought of cuckolds makes me sick. I haven't read this book yet. Reading the comments made me sick to my stomach. If you like cuckolds, go write on pornographic websites. Don't start at the starting point! ! ! ! ! ! ! (I really hate cuckold stories. If there is even the slightest sign, I will abandon the book immediately. Because of this, I, the cuckold, will be banned until 2074)

I feel like the writing is good, keep it up. I haven't seen the LV plot that everyone is talking about yet. I feel that being a tool is not a big problem. As long as the heroines' feelings for the protagonist are getting deeper and deeper in the article, it will be fine.

If you see anything related to the entertainment industry, treat it as rubbish

After seeing that green tea, I have no desire to continue subscribing. The male protagonist's character is too soft.

What kind of society is this? It's really sick to still pay attention to literary youth. Everyone reads novels to relieve stress, not to feel uncomfortable. Originally, everyone lives a realistic life, so they just look for dreams on the Internet. But you ended up writing a cuckold article about literary youth. Damn it, it's going to kill people.

I'm sorry I can't watch anymore. The behavior in that movie is too green tea. On the one hand I wanted to create a dead straight man for the protagonist, but the author was not particularly successful Is there really a dead straight man? There may be, but the author's writing feels like " Pretending to be a straight man" Maybe the author wanted to write something like "the protagonist has no woman in his heart and draws his sword to the God of Nature", but what he wrote was "The two of them quarreled over 'me', just for profit reasons. How could they fight for love like the paparazzi said" Just briefly mention it, and forcefully click on the character of the protagonist as a dead straight man, But the overt and secret fights between the girls are not less written, which makes me read it with a big deviation The girls in the author's works show off their magical powers and fight, and the male protagonist wrote a sentence in his heart In my opinion, this is not only "pretending to be straight" but also a king of the sea But the author has always emphasized that the protagonist is a dead straight man, but he doesn't know how to write a dead straight man (Jane, although I can't stand it anymore, I will pay a dollar for the ticket.

Recently, the existence of plug-ins has been infinitely weakened. . It feels a little off track. . In fact, if you want to see something about the entertainment industry. . Everyone has already gone to see entertainment articles. . The reason to see how much of the system text can be left is to watch the protagonist with cheats live his life as he pleases. . The result. . From the beginning to the end, he is still a wooden figure. . After that, he still pressed himself against the woman's body. . What kind of agent are you? Wouldn't it be better to have a mixed crew? Filming who kidnapped whom, there are so many female stars, and big names are everywhere. You have established yourself as a super mascot for the crew. Isn't it more important to write about it? As a result, a straight man had to become a small businessman. . There are too few things to see🙂🙂🙂

Toxic point warning! The male protagonist helps a black-hearted green tea bitch who does bad things to write a song, and after writing it, he spends several chapters deepening the connection between them. It is very poisonous.

Cuckold writers, literary youth disease, sooner or later will hit the street

I looked like a fool, and I didn't have the desire to pursue him.

This is, to put it bluntly, a story about a breeding pig jumping sideways repeatedly.

This book gave me the feeling that if I were an emperor, I would eat chicken legs every day and wash my feet in the hair salon every day. Even drinking yogurt without licking the lid. Just ask me if this emperor is awesome or not.

I just want to ask if my muscles are almost gone since I don't have time to work out anymore?

Put it in the prepared eunuch folder and wait until chapter 40 is updated before releasing it.

When I saw 22, there was something wrong with the characterization. He looked like an idiot. He didn't know what to do when a woman cried. It was embarrassing. Can the system help others only with talents?

I think we can write some scenes where the female protagonist is seduced by the male protagonist's muscles to highlight the strong muscles of the male protagonist.

This book isn't too bad, but it's a pity...

I have only read Chapter 24, and I want to express my inner thoughts: I feel that this system is very useless and troublesome. First of all, it is troublesome to bind it by sight, and it is almost hypnotic, with the meaning of forcing a favorable impression, which is a bit uncomfortable. Secondly, the rewards are very useless. There are not even rewards for improving abilities in the early stage, making the protagonist look like a prop, without a sense of participation. The star character is self-created, and there is no sense of involvement at all.