Fellow Daoist Chen, Can You Please Stay Away from Me?

The author's writing is okay, specifically, it's full of grass inside and outside. Let's talk about the problem first: 1. Chapter lsp hints (everyone understands it) 2. Quite water (there are a lot of water for the sake of water) 3. Because it is a systematic article, there will be a special The place with water data (one spiritual root can water 0.5 Point coins) 4. It's still very watery (it's like a flood washed down the Dragon King Temple, and the Dragon King was flooded online) 5. The content of the later chapter can be reduced to 2 to 3 points coins (you just want to have as much water as you want) >6. Neptune's speech (the protagonist is Neptune) 7. Dazzling system (I still don't know whether the judgment space will be increased after the system upgrade) 8. The sea, you are all water Advantages: 1. There is a slight sense of substitution 2. Protagonist It's like Cao Cao is buried, with grass inside and outside 3. Non-toxic points 4. The author deeply shows the highest state of water 5. To be determined PS: This novel is watery, I only want to read it for free, this book is a hint version of Little Porn Book, it can be regarded as food

This book is really attractive. When you read it, you always look forward to the next chapter. Come on, author, this book will become a god

Disappointed, the big guy showed up too hastily. Moreover, he swallowed the Qi-Entraining Pill all by himself, which shows that there is something wrong with his character!

The author used to write beautiful articles, right?

Isn't the issue of the protagonist's strength too big? The main character is that he has no spiritual veins and cannot quickly absorb the energy to improve his cultivation. But the protagonist copies Long Yuan for one moment, and then copies a certain bloodline and a certain physique... What is the result? Mediocre combat power? Can't even reach one or two lower ranks like Yue? Still being driven around? And the copy was successful, and there was a strange buff that doubled the attributes. As a result, the strength was not impressive at all, and it felt like the combat power system was bouncy. What kind of physique, what kind of bloodline, and the name is awesome, but in the end, it was copied and it didn't reflect it at all. It is said to be a plot text, but the plot is about upgrading and fighting monsters. This is a fun article. The first few dozen pictures are interesting, but the rest are really not fun at all. The poison test is completed, please make your own identification!

Let's do some advertising. There are quite a lot of people at the gas station, so just bring some over.

The front 130 is really good. . I was so stupid when I saw him running to collect herbs. . Not only does the pig's trotters' IQ and emotional intelligence plummet, but their operation and outlook also become really confusing. . Did someone else write it? ? The effect of persuading people to quit is too 666😰😰😰

After reading a few chapters, I found that the author did not know the difference between an hour and an hour. One hour is equal to two hours, but the author wrote that one hour is one hour, and he did not change it after reminding the author.

There is a distance requirement when you use other people's WIFI, but there are also strengths and weaknesses within the distance range. You are very strong within five steps👍. What about zero distance (double cultivation is best), it will definitely be amazing, so the male protagonist must catch all the geniuses, regardless of gender, and put them into the harem, and achieve the strongest 🤓🤓🤓🤓

There is cheating, if you don't hook it properly, it is against the moral principles, your cultivation level is not high, wandering around, practice peacefully for a thousand and eight hundred chapters, come out to cultivate and crush all the major monks, hanging up in vain, the novel will be scrapped

In the world of cultivating immortals, it can only be said that science and technology is underdeveloped, but social management cannot be so backward. They are all about longevity. How can you manage such a big sect without any brains?

Author, I want to say something. I am reading chapter 15 now. Around this paragraph, the protagonist gives the senior sister three Qi-entraining pills, one pill, five hours. The time in ancient times is actually two hours now, and they only have 12 hours in a day. The three pills you have are more than a whole day, not just a day.

The writing is pretty good and the creativity is pretty good. But the most suitable one for the protagonist should be someone who has stayed in the sect until he was invincible and then came out. However, it is very inconsistent to design an upgrade route for killing monsters. Moreover, the distance of five meters is too close. For ordinary people, it is very uncomfortable for people within 5 meters, let alone the cultivators of immortals! The home version of the router also has a range of one to twenty meters!

Apart from anything else, I just want to know whether the protagonist is Chen Shaojie or Chen Mu? How about your AI writing a book? Several authors should take turns writing!

This subject is destined to never get better, because one thing has been proved in these introductions. The protagonist was once a rich second-generation scumbag, and he was not taboo about meat and vegetables. Now he is going back to his old career. If you like to watch it, just watch it.

I have read a few chapters and something went wrong Problem of title A handyman disciple calls the Patriarch "you". Although the Patriarch may not care, the protagonist himself has to pay attention 😰

The rest of it feels a bit boring, just go to some forest to feed its grass 🌿

The protagonist is emotionally indifferent, thinks lsp but does not do lsp things, which is realistic enough.

In the first chapter, let's take a look in the mirror. He's so handsome! What I want to say is that if you are good-looking in the world of immortality, why don't others arrest you to make a furnace or a face? What do you think the world of immortality is? A beautiful life of immortality? Don't bring yourself into the work, can you write it from the perspective of a bystander? You can't survive more than a few episodes if you're good-looking but don't have the strength or backstage. I'm most disgusted with this kind of narrative method in novels.

If the author can update twice a day, and update more than 3,000 words once a day, and keep updating, and can guarantee the quality, I believe this book can become a god.

Chen Shaojie=young woman plus Bai Jie🙂

The background of the story is that the protagonist travels through the world of cultivating immortals. Because of his good looks, he was taken into the apprenticeship by a passing cultivator. After he was found to have poor qualifications, he was thrown into the handyman's yard, but the protagonist awakened the portable system. This book is a happy and relaxing book about cultivating immortals. The writing style is okay, the narrative is clear, and the writing is fluent. Apart from always taking some modern things seriously, there is nothing serious about it. Anyway, if you read it without thinking, the reading experience is okay, and it is quite enjoyable to read. ---Recommended by Gong Zhonghao's "Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

It's been a long time since I've seen an update. I updated a chapter and it's gone again. Is this going to the palace? ? ?

Are you ready to enter the palace? Alas, another investment is about to fail.

Others update every day, what about you? The way to success lies in two points. The first is persistence, and the second is continuous improvement of quality. If you can't even do the first point, how can you talk about results? Without perseverance, success will be far away.

Please fill in the gaps, it's very interesting, I finished the book in three days

"Northwest" is a eunuch, and "Wife" is also hastily ended. This one started right off the top and then went to raise monsters. Such good writing style makes people forget to eat and sleep at the first sight. The result is anticlimactic or even no ending. It is really difficult to write a book like this. When you look back many years later, you will see that after so many years of writing, you have not completed a single novel. How can you feel embarrassed? I advise you not to write anymore.

Abandoned! ! ! ! !

Is this the rhythm of a eunuch? ?

Will my investment be in vain? ?