In My Eyes You Are All Corpses

The plot is getting weirder and weirder. The characters and plot settings feel like they are about to collapse. Author, please don't let yourself go.

From the author's own narration, we can roughly see the direction he wants to write, but either there are too many problems with the writing style, or there is a big problem with his thinking, and the content he writes is really a bit off. . . I couldn't even guess that it was going to be written in this direction. It's weird that none of the characters of the protagonist team were set up according to the expected goals. If the author hadn't included his own thoughts in the article, I probably just thought that Daily Guide had introduced another Riddler + routines that were written in plain text. But judging from what he said (character design + expected future direction), it felt like it should have been an okay book, but the hardware capabilities were really holding it back. . . Have no choice. Looking at it, first of all, assuming that the author's thinking is correct, in addition to long-term honing of writing skills, the fastest way I can think of to improve the quality of the work is to "copy", or "borrow" to be precise. "Borrow" the scripts and characters that have been perfected and self-consistent from some popular movies, animation novels, such as the plot of Zerg Planet, The transition from beginning to end is inexplicable, and none of it has been written. If you were to travel through a "small alien plane" to explore, the alien plane would be directly adapted from a horror movie or science fiction movie. Not to mention more, the beginning, succession, transition, and co-writing would be infinitely less difficult. Since there is a complete script, you only need to insert people to change the details, and the difficulty of writing will be much lower. . . And the bugs in the details are really a bit outrageous. For example, in the part where the whole network is being trolled, unless the whole world is a fool, most people will think of "brief disconnection" + "drug overdose" = "murder". So assuming that the supplementary setting is "only a small room is disconnected from the network", then "paying murder to kill" + "drug overdose" will also be detected. . . I understand if you have fewer science and technology tree points in the background, but the technology level you set does not match the direction of the plot, so at first I complained that either you have a problem with your thinking (you write routines and white text when the aura of intelligence reduction is activated), or the writing problem is too big (there are too many problems that need to be compensated). This is just a node. . . The problem is that except for the interaction between Xiao Yi and the male protagonist, the entire plot is a bit weird. I understand the writing problem, but I don't understand the Riddler. The Riddler at least gives you all the "character information" or "world information", but you only give a fraction of both and force the readers to guess? The decryption game does not even give a number and asks you to fill in a seven-digit password. At the beginning, I just wanted to complain about this serious gap between "what the author thinks" and "what the author writes". I feel it is quite a pity. I wrote too much 233 casually. To sum up, it only represents my personal subjective complaint and is not for reference. This book has routines, ideas, no writing, no good transitions, and many bugs. It is a book of this level to pass the time.

Can you stay away from that female partner? Tentacle monsters are true love

Now that you have read my daily guide, let's take a quick look at it.

It's quite beautiful. Why is there no one there?

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Qin felt so confused. I just saw her hugging the protagonist to the point of breaking a bone. In anime, it's okay because everyone knows it's just an exaggeration. But in novels, a broken bone is a broken bone. It feels heartless.

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When I went to the back, it felt like a pornographic book, but I have no proof.

Stay away from female supporting characters, tentacle monsters are your true love!

. . . So damn exciting! ! Can you still see such a book at Qidian?

Not bad, but just not hot. ,

Daily Guide, I found it quite interesting, but the introduction is too vague, and most of the introductions nowadays are like this, which makes people uninterested.

It's a good book, no one has read it? 🙂

The title and introduction of this book are too discouraging.

Has the content been harmonized by the system recently?

Cthulhu Mother (reprint)

I've been doing daily detoxification, just take care of yourself

A restful steel