Sword of Prairie Fire

I read 96 chapters in one go, and I feel that overall it is a good book. Advantages: The writing is delicate, and some details are described, such as the recruitment part in the slums and the training part of the beastmen. It is written very tastefully and is a highlight. Climbing technology is not a brainless climb, and the control is relatively restrained. Several supporting characters have relatively distinct images, and the author is very good at using a small amount of pen and ink to outline very clear images, which is very comfortable to watch. What I don't understand: In fact, normally the first climax of this book should be to integrate the resources at hand to deal with the great changes in the family (all men are almost dead) and the various families who want to take a bite. However, the story suddenly takes a turn here and turns to opening up territory to fight against the demonic tide. For those who wanted to take a bite, he used a few words to describe the extraordinary power of the head maid to fight against more than 20 families... There was a kind of punch that was half-charged and missed, and the teammate directly used Gatling to knock everyone out. To be honest, I don't understand it here. In addition, similar to the part where the caravan visited, it was said that there were supplies needed by other disaster-stricken territories, which could be sold at a good price, and then a steam engine was suddenly taken out... Although it was mentioned in the article that the caravan did not think these supplies could be sold at a good price (the impact of the demonic tide was underestimated), the development process of the steam engine was not mentioned at all. Did you, the author, have a sudden inspiration and then write it? You are abrupt. In short, if the author can control the direction of the plot and not go crazy, this will be a fine fantasy novel based on your writing style. It is recommended that the entire outline should at least control the climax and calm period, and don't suddenly have deus ex machina popping up here and there, that would be a pity Also, the reason why there is no chapter is that you set the fan value to 1 before you can publish the chapter. If it is not listed, the fan value will only increase with rewards...

There are too many poisonous points, and he can do everything by traveling through gunpowder and making guns. He also said that everyone who has graduated from high school will understand that after making a gun, he must use it to defend himself. He also said that he cannot let the ruler know about it and will not sell it. It is a fantasy novel. The writing is pretty good, but the logic is outrageous.

A well-written Lord Tired novel, good luck to the author,

You can write better than me. It would be great if you have such writing power. 😭

Hello, author. I just read it today, and I saw something like this in one of your chapters: Modern people travel to slaves in the feudal era, just like people living in a broken house. If you don't have the ability, it may just be like that. If you have the ability, you will definitely repair it. I think it is very good. I hope that the protagonist can go in this direction in the later stage. The change of mentality must be slowly paved in the front and he can accept it. In the later stage, he can lead the world process, but he must not become a simple rentier class. My personal thoughts, if there is any offense, I apologize.

I can speak to help you detoxify. I am seriously ill with young people and have nothing to watch or enjoy. I write about nobles in the Middle Ages who were slave owners and advocated equality for all. I don't understand this setting. If I want to engage in this kind of doctrine, I will just start refugee. The protagonist is hit by two giant poisons. How much does it cost in the comment area?

I like the head maid Miao Lan. I don't know what other people are like, but I feel insecure myself. So I long for a partner like Miao Lan who I can trust 100%. And they are very capable. I appreciate women who are capable and motivated. Of course, Miao Lan in the article is currently unable to betray because of the slave mark. But what about the rest of the story?

Garbage If you do something that goes against the general trend in a certain era, you will definitely die.

To be honest, I just read Chapter 23. The protagonist's behavior really doesn't look like he's doing something big, but it does fit the look of an idealist who just debuted. Generally speaking, it takes a few beatings to grow, but with the author's support, there is a high probability that unreasonable victory will occur. Having just arrived in a world for a few days, I know only a little about the people around me, a little about society, a little about the industry I own, a little about the deep understanding of the world, and even a little about the gadgets I inherited. My foundation is not yet stable, and there are people outside looking at me. I go out for a long time and then decide on an almost impossible goal just because I am unhappy. When I go back, I start to talk to the people around me. I am really convinced. How do you know if they will agree with your rebellious thoughts if you don't understand their thoughts first? Next, will your family agree with what you want to do? What's the difference between this and an angry young man with an upper brain? I suggest that the author should talk less about falsehoods. What you want to do is that as a reader, I am very interested in reading such a story, and what I want to see is a truly capable and determined boss! He is not a naive idealist who has achieved various successes with the support of the author, nor is he an angry young man who talks about things as bragging rights.

The very poisonous opening chapter immediately persuades him to quit. The leader who started the rebellion was released immediately? I have never seen a woman without Sha Zhen. Not inferior to this person

There is a problem with logic, the butt determines the head. Sitting on the dragon throne, thinking about how to help the common people rebel.

The writing is good, but the setting is a bit problematic. If you want to write about farming, what's the fun part? Climb technology and explode your troops. For what? There are many, but it is a big problem if the protagonist sets the goal of equality for everyone. It's not that it's not good, but do you have this ability, and does it fit his personality? This is not a goal that can be put forward at the beginning. Readers (such as me) will only find it unrealistic. The characters in the book are explained by the halo of the protagonist, but how do you make readers agree? Is the protagonist the reincarnation of mks? How to round out his character motivation for doing this? If the protagonist wants to do things without regrets, he has to fight for a goal that is far away and not in his own interest? This is unreasonable. If you really wrote it as the protagonist of some kind of fanatical fundamentalist mks, I think it would be more reliable. But there is one thing to say: this kind of writing is no longer popular now, and it is not the starting point to write it. Of course, the focus of the article is on farming and advancing technology, which is correct, but I think the article on farming is about technological crushing, about breaking the trend with force, and by the way, conquering the world and opening a harem. It's really written as a human rights gm in a different world, so I can only wish you good luck. I hope I can continue writing it smoothly. There are not many articles about Western Fantasy Farming.

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Read the first three chapters. The dozen or so characters that appear are all female. Housekeeper, slave, three sisters, servant. Very questionable; does this book have no male supporting characters? Is the protagonist going to lead cute girls and noble ladies to transform this ignorant and feudal world? Could you please let me know if my friends who saw it later can tell me?

Look what I found. There are more than 80,000 seedlings in one book. Now we can sneak over quietly and kill them in two hours.

How should I put it? It started out okay, but then it became more and more eccentric, with a Madonna plot, and then just a few days after passing through, with no foundation, an outbreak of monsters started. The plot span is too big. Didn't you plan to write this chapter too long, more than one million words?

I feel that the writing is good, but it is a bit out of line with the trend of the times. A mere viscount who wants to fight against an empire will be washed away by the torrent of the times. If it does not conform to the interests of most people, he will be beaten. It is too idealistic.

The fantasy area is still better than other areas. This book is very solidly written. Come on, I read a book last time that was pretty good, but I ended up breaking the contract for about a hundred chapters. I hope the author can guard against arrogance and impatience. If he keeps writing, his popularity will gradually increase!

You're talking about everyone being equal again, why didn't you do it in reality yesterday?

I don't understand why everyone wants to step on others in life. Some books like to write that everyone is equal. You can love the people like your own children, but don't expect there to be no exploitation and oppression. Desire and ability are the ladder of progress. Just like the first uprising in the book, they don't want to be enslaved so they rebel. It is human nature to pursue whatever you want.

Comments by beings with mysterious powers are ridiculous. At most, they just add another class.

I was just about to watch it, you don't know how to be a eunuch anymore 😥

Maid maid

Another middle-class type, writing about utopia.

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