Transmigrated to Earth, I Evolve by Starting with Max-Level Martial Arts

After reading the opening chapter, I thought this book could confer the title of God, but the rest of the writing is exactly the same as Xiaobai's article 😂

To be honest, after reading the first fifty chapters, I really felt a little frustrated. When the protagonist was in the first level, the senior brother offered him a salary of 300,000? There are less than ten strong men in the whole country! Afterwards, he was targeted throughout the whole process with the Bagua Sect and didn't return it, so he still followed people's orders until the end? Shake m?

Well written. One of the best new books recently. The recommended books on Qidian are becoming less and less popular.

This book is good overall, but it is difficult for the protagonist to achieve success in martial arts. People who practice martial arts are brave, fierce, and competitive people, just like Huo Yuanjia. How can a protagonist be so secretive and timid that he can achieve anything? However, the author sets the protagonist to be the best in martial arts, which makes people feel very stiff when reading it, and it feels like he is forcibly writing a scholar into a common man.

The entire earth star is in danger, and there is still internal strife. The protagonist is still acting like a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be a slap in the face, haha ​​tui has withdrawn

I saw many book friends saying that the protagonist was a failure, and I felt the same way. At the same time, I also think the plot design is also very immature. I won't say much about the first few dozen chapters. The author keeps suppressing the protagonist, which makes people feel frustrated. Finally, there is a national martial arts competition, which gives readers expectations. What is the result? Good guy, he retired again! The plot you designed before made the protagonist unable to stand upright. If you do this, it will only make people feel that the protagonist has a serious brain disease. Or are you saying that you think there are too many readers and you need to filter them? I was ready to leave when I saw this. No matter how wonderful your subsequent writing is, I won't continue reading. Because there are too many Qidian books, if this one doesn't work, I'll change it to another one. If it doesn't work, I can still watch videos and play games to pass the time. When you write a book, you should at least design a storyline with some delicacy. It doesn't mean that the writing is mindless, but there should be some interesting points. Just like the plot where Qiao Feng forced his way into Juxian Village, it released a wave of readers' frustrations about Qiao Feng's experience. Wouldn't that be nice?

Everything was fine before, but Chapter 59 looked uncomfortable: the protagonist has agreed to be a candidate, which means he has obeyed the country's arrangements. The country wants to test the protagonist's skills, but also pretends to be the person who attacked and killed the protagonist. I really don't understand. Just try the protagonist's skills directly. The protagonist is not hiding that he doesn't want to contribute to the country. He is so alienated from others. After all, if something like this happens in the future, do you really dare to fight back and fight with your life? It was pretty good before, so when I read Chapter 59, I felt like I was eating cake all the time and suddenly scooping up shit. This is probably the feeling.

After reading Chapter 40, I knew that I had traveled through a world and that I would be very strong when practicing martial arts. He didn't work hard to practice martial arts for a while and then went to teach others. His father also traveled through time and didn't forget to urge marriage. He didn't feel nervous at all. He knew that he was very strong but let some little people bother him. The country was so strong and he didn't notice it. Logically speaking, it would only be known if something like this happened. After killing the lion, a first-order appeared, so he didn't pay attention to the protagonist.

The pacing is poor, the hierarchy is unclear, and the world view is unclear. The beginning is quite amazing, the description of the fight is too vague, and the plot advancement is abrupt. The most important thing is that there is no psychological description of the characters, which makes it more intellectually depressing. The biggest problem is that the world view is vague, the levels are unclear, and the psychological description is poor. The whole process is written like a robot. More jokes and more interesting scenes can improve a lot of points.

I originally planned to add it to my reading list. Look at the back. It's simply a forced arrogance. Compared with this giant star, the earth is not even a moon. There are 10 billion people in such a big place. How many people can fit on this giant star? Yes~ Just beat him for future consideration, fearing that the people on earth will multiply and there will be 1,000 billion people. Then there are dungeons on your giant planet. Oh, and your various high-tech... What about the background setting? This planet's star field can only be entered but not exited. Doesn't it all depend on how the author sets it? In addition, you said it yourself, the earth once entered this star field 100,000 years ago. That shows that the author has considered that this star field can be entered and exited. Then why does it become inaccessible again in the novel? Isn't it true that the technology of these aliens is so high, many times higher than that of the earth, but they don't even have this level of technology? They all have space to store devices, but don't have any scientific ideas? I don't believe it. In this way, there are bugs everywhere. Let's see how the author rounds things up later. It just depends on the author's imagination. It cannot be said that the author's pattern is small. I can only say... It's hard to say.