Love Makeover Game

Become a straight man by playing strategy games? Is it really yours? Is this how the strategy works? What a will of steel

The twist at the end of the first Green Tea episode was a bit too sudden... I guess the author was too eager to end it and led to the second one, but it still made sense. But I really couldn't understand the third one. We met on WeChat and then had dinner together. Is this an ambiguous move? I feel that the appearance of the third heroine is too hasty and blunt...

There is too little writing about the heroine. The whole story is about the male protagonist. There is too little detail about the heroine. I think readers would rather see the young lady than the male protagonist having fun. Moreover, the author is probably a novice and the twist is a bit hard... But the book is not bad, but I don't have the desire to read it carefully. I just scrolled through it.

The difference between the image of the character Yan Xinmo when she first appeared and the subsequent images is too big, and the feeling of tearing is serious.

When I read this introduction, I immediately thought of a book I had read before called "I Really Don't Want to Fall in Love" (it seems to be that name). Anyway, the male protagonist's name is Qiu Yuan. I think that book is very well written. It can cover the previous collapsed mine and move to the next mine naturally. It's just a pity that it's too short.

The writing is quite good, and the mood and rhythm are on point. I guess if there are enough twists and turns in this book, it will definitely become a hit.

Why don't you update it 😭

Childhood sweethearts are no match for the law of heaven, eh

Let's raise one first, I'm afraid of pigeons |･ω･｀)

The plot is dragging, and I don't know why it is not updated now. I suggest the author write a dog food story. I wrote a lot of chapters for the story in the hotel. There is no big breakthrough in the plot. After writing so many chapters, I feel like it is too watery. I don't know whether it is sweet or not. In short, it is boring and the plot has no starting point.

It's pretty good. It's really poisonous in the front, but it calms down in the back. It's okay. I gave it a vote, but it's really more. I feel like it's too little to keep.

Why haven't Wanwan entered the character card yet?

Are there any novels about mining flow? I would like to recommend it. I remember there is a book called Mining Eunuch. I forgot the title. I really like reading it. Can you help me find it?