Rebirth Starts with Monster Hunting Ancient Dragon

It looks very confusing and confusing, and I have no idea what the main plot is? Even the protagonist can't tell who it is. It's better to say it's an ancient dragon than a chestnut Flower Miko! The main characters have no sense of immersion and are completely unwatchable! Plot: One star Character setting: Two stars Remarks: The writing is really a bit too messy! Is it useful to write so complicatedly? Can't we lay a good foundation? In the first picture, the dragon meets the girl, and in the second picture, he directly becomes a miko. The plot that is obviously still good can be skipped directly! In some places, the plot must be watered down, so that people can have a sense of involvement and understand clearly! Looking at the introduction, Dragon's ability should be to control airflow. It seems that it can be used behind the scenes, so why does it have to be on the front line!

Young man, you can't control it! I understand what you want to write, but this kind of reading makes readers uncomfortable and deceived, and then they come to a conclusion, what on earth did I read🤔... The previous writing is actually quite heartwarming, but the so-called fate in the middle, plus the subsequent chest rupture and sacrifice part, plus the subsequent development like fragments, I can only say: "Blue Skinny Shiitake Mushroom" is written well but it is difficult for me to accept, so be it...

I don't want to read it anymore, it makes me uncomfortable. The writing is too messy. It says Eastern Dragon in the front. I just felt a little bit immersed in it. Then I suddenly jumped to the side of the witch, and then there is no introduction or description. I only have my inner feelings. It's completely self-explanatory. Don't release it if you want to express it. If you release it, you won't consider the audience's perception. I can't watch it.

What is it about? An ancient dragon living in the snowy mountains. Not to mention that he is afraid of the cold. He almost froze to death when he sneaked in to observe a hunter. For a while, the furnace in his body can devour everything and turn it into energy. But for a while, the energy in his body is not enough. According to the settings, you can be invincible just by chewing dirt and eating ores, but as a result, you end up in the same ecological niche as the Big Thief Dragon, not as good as the Big Thief Dragon. The protagonist dragon can't even eat enough. What the hell, the Oriental Dragon, bah! A deadbeat snake.

It feels weird to see the character I created alongside myself.

I don't understand, just leave it to yourself, right?

I don't understand, why did you kill Canglanxing?

Isn't the protagonist a god? Why kill the gods?

I read the introduction because I wanted to make a potpourri. Can you tell me what you want to write? It doesn't matter if you don't say it.