A Life Simulator for the Mysterious World of American Comics

I haven't read the book yet, but I have read the recommended ones. I only read the title and introduction for the time being. I have to mention that although it is a collision between the Marvel worldview and the Cthulhu worldview, the Marvel worldview and the Cthulhu worldview do not conflict. As we all know, Marvel editors are a group of Cthulhu fanatics. Marvel itself has a lot of Cthulhu elements. Marvel has published separate comics for the ancient gods of the Cthulhu family, and it is not an isolated universe, but a world As you can see, the Marvel Universe already has a bunch of Cthulhu bosses such as Beholders, and they are the ones who stand at the top of the Marvel Universe. Not only in the comics, I remember that Beholders appear in the plot of the new series of movies. In other words, both the comic universe and the movie universe contain Cthulhu fans. Ordinary people on earth may not be aware of it. The Ancient One is very clear about the Cthulhu system, and there is no problem of not knowing the Cthulhu taboos. You add a Grammatical worldview, but the original Marvel universe includes a Grammatical worldview. How does the author plan to deal with this conflict?

According to your settings, is Ancient One being chased by hounds or chasing hounds?

As for the reason why the author stopped updating, first of all, the author needs to be patient. I am only 22 years old and don't know much about the truth. But if there is no academic qualifications and path in real life, then writing novels may be a good way. But apart from those who are truly talented, most of the remaining good authors rely on accumulation. Everything needs time to settle, and I think the author's writing should not only consider the integration of themes, but also enrich the plot. The weird description of Cthulhu is very important, but what is the protagonist like, and whether the plot is ups and downs enough, I think it is the key point of your mix. The writing style is very important, but it cannot only be the writing style. I read 50 chapters of the last book, but I actually don't know what the protagonist is like. It's just the author digging holes or thinking about it that makes me jump. The description of the battle is also too rough. We are writing online articles, not novels. You need not to make it so difficult for readers to understand (that's what I should say). First of all, you have to consider finishing a book (without affecting real life), secondly, you have to consider having fun (it's a comic and Cthulhu, the protagonist wants to be the mastermind or hero behind the scenes), and the third important thing is persistence. I have seen many talented newcomers die from too many eunuchs.

Too many inappropriate bad jokes mixed in, affecting the perception

At first glance, you are a Marvel novice with this setting. Whether it is a movie or a comic, Marvel has a background of Cthulhu, so there is no need to mix it up.

There are some problems with your article! The first thing is unclear. For example, when the infected body and Spider-Man were fighting at the school at the beginning, the spider was throwing a javelin on the roof one moment, and the infected body's hand could hit him the next moment?? Whether Spider-Man jumped down or the infected body flew up, you didn't even tell. And what about the two infected police officers? Where have you been? Is it life or death? I didn't mention it, there are many such situations in the text. The second point is even worse. The author likes to make bad jokes! I can't understand these jokes, and it feels really bad to read them. Which famous author do you think makes jokes all day long?

He was a student at the police academy in time travel, but became a coward after time travel? He was actually bullied on campus, which was a big deal. Where did the grappling and fighting skills learned in the police academy go? Before time travel, as a police academy student preparing to become a police officer, you didn't have the habit of exercising?

In fact, Doctor Strange 2 is likely to have a villain with a graphic style, or a beholder who is very powerful in the comics.

I feel that there is something wrong with the author's writing. The descriptive text is too wordy and fails to convey the plot clearly to the readers. It makes people feel more and more confused the more they read.

I haven't read it yet, but many fan works suffer from the neglect of characterization. Just because it's fan fiction, there's no characterization at all. Hope this book doesn't.