I, the Game BOSS, Create a Super Copy

The idea is good, the plot is lame, and the early stage is too reminiscent of a horror house.

Let's evaluate it objectively. There are a few points in the first few chapters that personally discourage me. First, the protagonist's environment suddenly has an NPC boss in the setting. And there is still the kind of saying like the goddess of future players. The sense of déjà vu is too strong. I don't know how many time-travel game novels have been written, and they are not well written. To describe it directly, my personal opinion is a bit earthy and boring. The second is to highlight the disastrous failure of a well-known player guild team in the game. The interactions in the middle are publicity and deliberate, and the barrage interactions are also very cliché to ridicule and arouse curiosity. The third one is that a young lady who runs a game company suddenly comes to her family. She is also a well-known gamer boss from later generations. She coaxes and deceives others to work for him. The other ideas are actually quite good. After all, the setting is a dungeon of the Novice Village. If there is no coincidence at all, it will definitely not develop. However, there are too many random things at the beginning, and many references from other books are used in the middle. The mess is mixed together, resulting in a bad start. If possible, I suggest you revise the first few paragraphs. Let alone changing the plot, it would be good to at least polish these processes. Especially when it comes to player interaction, it's easy to write about the player's intelligence and lead to humorous style. When I first clicked on the name and saw the name, I thought it was about serious and difficult survival. I personally am also this kind of audience. It's quite inconsistent when I see this kind of thing. The main reason is that there are too many humorous gamer-type articles on the market, which causes aesthetic fatigue. I have said so much, but it is all my personal subjective opinion, and there are many extremes. After all, I evaluate the article based on my personal preferences and cannot represent the views of others. If you think it has a bad impact on the comment area, feel free to delete it. I wish the book a great success.

The writing is good, but Vivian is a bit of a flaw. Why are you, a boss, so close to a player? Besides, if someone kills you, you can upgrade, get equipment, and gain fame. The author thinks of human nature too simply. It feels like the level of the Holy Mother per capita is

Everyone, in order for this book to survive, we will give the author a follow-up reading after updating every day. Otherwise, it will be too easy to die without data.

The writing is really good, but there are too few. I'll keep it up and catch up once a week.

Very pretty. Just too little. Found out too early! Want to raise again

In short, I only see all kinds of embarrassment for players, but no fun. After all, this is just a game, and this is just a copy. You can't just survive all the time. There are other options. Do people just want to be abused? Masochists also have pleasure feedback!

That Vivian is a bit redundant, and it doesn't seem to have any effect at the moment. On the contrary, it may expose the protagonist.

There is a problem! So far, I haven't seen many successful strategies, and there are no rewards for successful strategies. With just a stick and no carrot, would anyone really be able to do it? Of course you have to say that the monster has a high level and experience! Uh, you're not a masochist, you have nothing to do? After spending a long time and undergoing various operations in the underworld, just to kill a few high-level monsters, there is still nothing? In addition, the protagonist is modifying permissions and restricting player permissions, is no one suspicious?

Come and mess with me! It just doesn't make sense if you don't update ten times a day!

You are already an author of almost 100,000 words, so update soon! Even to the point of vomiting blood, I am not short of this flow!

There has been no update for two hours. The author is too lazy. Get up and update soon

Just found it. After reading Chapter 13, I found this book to be okay. But I discovered that there is more than one labeled heroine. Is this book about opening a harem? If you see anyone behind you, let me know. Now that I don't know the emotional line, I don't know if I should continue reading it.

Although I haven't read it yet, so many book friends say it's good, so I'll save it first and then read it after 100 chapters.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group, please update~

It hasn't been cut for long, can it still be reattached?

I don't know if I missed it, but it was mentioned earlier that the copy was occupied. Why don't I know who it is?