
Konoha: Open the Whole Map and Engage in Melee Combat?
木叶:开着全图挂近战?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 402k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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How powerful is your gun? The arrow shot by the spider that Hinata Neji fought with crossed the woods a few kilometers away and made a large hole with a diameter of five meters on the ground.
The plot of Ye Cang is quite disgusting. The protagonist acts like he has never seen a woman before, flirting with every one he sees. The key point is that Ye Cang is not only a hostile ninja, he wants to kill the protagonist from the beginning to the end, but he still wants to get along with him. There is even a plot where he is forced to die in a holy land to learn the magic of immortality.
The Rasengan is pure chakra, it relies on form changes and has no attributes The Rasenshuriken is wind-attributed.
It feels very nonsense, a small family and school competition is like a war...
He talks about the immortality of the protagonist, and talks nonsense to Ye Cang. His strength is completely inferior, and he doesn't feel any fear at all. He is completely sure that he is the protagonist and will not die. As expected, he is not killed, but captured. He survives completely relying on the aura of the protagonist. After seeing this, he has no desire to continue watching.
To be honest, the Byakugan is the real eye, suitable for ninjutsu turrets. The Hyuga family developed it in the wrong direction, and the Byakugan blood lineage has no shortage of chakra. It can be used even in Kaitian, which is outrageous. After all, they are equivalent to the Uchiha clan in terms of bloodline. After equipping Hinata with a bow or gun (there are guns and missiles in Naruto), An Anxin can output in the back row. If the enemy can see Hinata, let alone the enemy approaching, Hinata will lose! They really made a mistake in developing it
Other authors write that they are also very strong in melee combat. They hold two swords and use Bagua 128 palms. The instant slash 128 sword is much stronger than the starburst air current slash. Not to mention using Huitian with a sword, which is equivalent to using the blade to blast while driving invincible.
Isn't it disgusting to have a mean smile on your face every day? Don't blame others, hate him.
Why can the protagonist use a wooden shuriken to acupuncture his acupuncture points? Does he have to press everyone's IQ on the ground and rub it?
Good guy, the protagonist's eye roll is just a decoration. All kinds of deficiencies, the high-purity Byakugan has a visual range of only 2 kilometers, which is not even comparable to the perception range of the mountain clan.
In fact, Hinata's melee combat is not the most outrageous. The most outrageous is 64 palms or 128 palms. I thought about using the crispy ninja setting and attaching a blade to the nail to kill indiscriminately. It was solved in a dozen times.
Those who post posts that don't want followers are all authors, and those who criticize are studios because they know their writing is lousy and have made the starting point a mess, and they are afraid of being scolded.
Naruto has a gun, at least in the anime, there are pistols. Some of Kado's men have pistols. I haven't read the manga so I don't know.
I can't stand it anymore. When you meet a strong person on a mission and you run away, and then your teammates feel rejected, you still think you did the right thing? What's the author's thinking? Since you like Ye Cang, why don't you travel through time to the Kingdom of Wind? If you want to write a harem story, don't write about ninjas!
I still haven't figured out whether the Zong family only has two emperors and princes in one generation, or whether the chairman and board members are all Zongs. If there are several branches, how can the patriarch be dictatorial? The Zong family on the board of directors will dare to speak against you. Is the Zong family the eldest son slavery of Japan or the eight iron hat kings of the Qing Dynasty?
This article is very poisonous, poisonous to the protagonist's emotions and driving force. It does not incorporate the unique bond of Naruto. Although I have always felt that Naruto is like a pyramid scheme, the author is inseparable from the characters in the plot. As a branch of the Hyuga family, there is no feelings for the clan, or the dissatisfaction of being a slave, or the conflicting feelings of Hinata and Hibiscus. It seems that the identity of Hinata is just an empty shell, and there is nothing wrong with being replaced by Uchiha. In other fanfics, the conflicting identity of Hyuga's separated family is a highlight in itself. In terms of driving force, every time the protagonist takes action, it feels like he is going to pick up girls. He is either fighting for women or preparing for women. Under the premise that the caged bird has not been solved, pursuing these is like thinking about your wife all day without having a full stomach. Hyugali's long-range combat only has the novelty of the sniper gun. His other behaviors and combat thinking are not cool enough, the plot characters have insufficient interaction, and there are no other highlights.
After reading Chapter 15, it's really weird. I graduated from the sixth grade at the age of 7, so forget it, what a plot 🐴
Just by reading the introduction, you know that the book will collapse later or the author will slap himself in the face, because the upper limit of the author's sniper style is too low. If you can't beat the Six Paths at the top, and you can't defeat the tailed beasts at the bottom, you can probably handle the middle genin, and the jounin all depends on the situation. The protagonist will definitely have to face the Akatsuki organization, tailed beasts, Madara, Kaguya and others in the later stage. Now I am very curious about how much weapons the author will use to defeat these big guys if he insists on sniping and not getting close.
In a village where Uchiha was asked to fight the Mist Ninja, the protagonist was long gone.
The previous plot was okay, but when I got to the Land of Wind, to Ye Cang, and then back to Konoha, I was extremely confused. It jumped too fast, and it felt like the author was out of context. The connection of the plot felt particularly stiff. The previous sentence was the same and the second sentence immediately changed to a different scene. Overall, it was just okay.