This True Immortal Is Acting Strange

Tian: No matter what happens, no matter what, they will rebel against me. It hurts, it hurts so much!

I think the hacker should revise it and take a look at his outline.

The most interesting behind-the-scenes ones are those who write about luck. Generally, 6 out of 10 people who write about the front desk are eunuchs.

Come on, come on, start water experience, and strive to be an operator as soon as possible.

The beginning is really amazing, come on

The beginning was okay, I used a lot of effort, I thought it was just a routine of learning swordsmanship and Daodaochaotian, but in the end it was just trying to shout about momentum. Oh, it's a pity. The idea is okay, the writing is not strong enough, and the plot is not interesting. The emotions are too superficial. I always shout that I am the best in the world, but I will not become the best in the world. It is okay to read it as a short story. If it is a little longer, all the problems will come out.

Come on, it's pretty good, but it's boring, uninteresting, and unattractive. I wish you good luck and say goodbye.

I saw the invincible flow tag coming in It looks very similar in the front, but in the back I feel like I can't get along with the protagonist That's it

The plot feels like it has collapsed to the end. The imperial edict is taking the exam in advance. Either you are a strong man who can break the rules, or you are a low-level thug struggling. Your writing is like a cat or a dog. For such an act of contempt for the imperial court, everyone involved would be declared a rebel, and the county magistrate and even the state and county supervisors would have their homes raided.

It looked good before! But it's hard to say what's behind