This True Immortal Is Acting Strange

Heaven: Everyone tries to go against me, whether there's a reason or not. It hurts, it hurts so much!

I think the hacker should take a look at his outline and modify it.

The most fun part of writing about destiny is behind the scenes; usually, out of ten writers who write about the front stage, six fall apart and the other four are just eunuchs.

Here I am, starting to gain experience points, hoping to become an operations manager soon, sob sob sob.

The beginning was truly amazing, keep it up!

The beginning was alright, they put a lot of effort into it. I thought it would follow the style of "Learning Sword and Facing the Great Dao," but it just turned out to be a simple effort to show off its momentum. It's a shame. The idea was okay, but the writing was lacking, and the plot was even worse. The emotions were too superficial.

The poison is here, which is fine, but it's boring, uninteresting, and lacks appeal. Best wishes, goodbye.

I came here because of the "Invincible" tag. The beginning is similar, but later it feels like everyone is deliberately making things difficult for the protagonist. That's all.

The plot feels completely off. An exam held ahead of schedule by imperial decree—you either have to portray a powerful figure breaking the rules, or a struggling low-level thug. This writing is like taking advantage of everyone, cats and dogs alike. Such contempt for the imperial court should be grounds for treason against anyone connected to it, and even county magistrates and prefectural officials should have their homes confiscated.

It looked good at first! But things got complicated later on.