Battle Through the Heavens: The Azure Lotus Takes Human Form

I'm back and have read about twenty chapters in total. The following are all shortcomings and minor problems for me, but they are poisonous points for some people. 1. There is a lot of inner drama at the beginning. After gaining strength, the character does not match the heart of a strong person, and the character is a sloppy protagonist (please pay attention, the protagonist is followed by this character, with strong strength but no strong character. I hope the author can slowly change in the future) 2. In the first three chapters, he is soft-hearted and merciless when facing Medusa, and the system is not strong enough to respond to the protagonist's requests. (I like the domineering character of the protagonist to conquer Medusa) 3. The protagonist encounters some mercenaries sneaking up on him, but instead of killing him, he lets them go generously. It is better to say that it is a character design in the game life. The character is not lovable and seems to have no temper (no force! Force! Force! It is still a question of force) 4. The protagonist, who is a Dou Zong, wants to accept Qing Lin as a maid, and plans to negotiate terms with Xiao Ding (if you can't accept it, just leave) 5. Xiao Ding actually refused the protagonist's conditions for the sake of Qing Lin's feelings. I think he adopted Qing Lin because of his kindness. He couldn't care so much about Qing Lin (Qing Lin can be adopted by someone and can destroy his competitors. Xiao Ding, as the leader of the group, can't not do this deal even if he thinks about it, and he still cares about Qing Lin's opinion?) 6. Xiao Ding used harsh words to threaten the protagonist because of Qing Lin. I feel that the author made a mistake in writing Xiao Ding's character (they actually said harsh words for Qing Lin, making it look like Qing Lin is Xiao Ding's younger sister. Is Xiao Ding's character setting wrong? Emm) 7. At the end of the matter, the protagonist did not take revenge (the harsh words he said for Qinglin were just inconsistent with the character. I think the problem is not big and can be ignored. If you can read it, just read it as solid food. If you can't stand it, you can find the next book) 8. The protagonist met Medusa again and was speechless, as was Yue Mei. (Alas~) 9. The protagonist's attitude towards the system is explosive. (This system is so easy to talk about, give me a try) 10. The progress between the protagonist and Medusa feels too fast. After the strategy is completed, the skills and treasures just obtained are given away immediately. Generally speaking, it is a bit irritating (if you have objections, maybe I have a different opinion) 11. There is also the issue of naming. The protagonist and Hai Bodong have never interacted before, and they are so powerful that they call Hai Bodong Hai Lao. The protagonist has lost value again. (Author, the protagonist's character needs to be improved, don't lose points) 12. The protagonist has no plans for future development. In addition to rescuing people, he is often led by system tasks (the common problem of system writing is understandable, but I hope the protagonist can have his own opinions instead of being led by the system) Now I see the task of recruiting apprentices in Chapter 27. The protagonist wants to accept Xiao Qing as his apprentice. There are some paragraphs that are not written very smoothly. I hope the author can correct it. (Anyway, these flaws have not yet reached my poisonous point range, so I can continue to look at them)

In the first chapter, you are directly persuaded to quit, and you are rewarded for taking in a woman? How about you pay the actor a salary?

The poisonous points of this book include but are not limited to Xiao Ding, a fighting master who threatens the protagonist who appears to be a fighting king. The author actually praises him for his patience. Also, the protagonist joins the Motie Mercenary Group as a Dou Zong, which is simply funny.

Emperor Lian, why don't you just go directly to Emperor Qing?

Why are all the Kung Fu and Fighting Skills rewarded by this system given to others, without the protagonist having anything to do with them? Moreover, the rewards are given to others as soon as they are given. It seems too cheap. If you put yourself in your shoes, if I were a supporting character, I would only think that this person is stupid and rich: "I just met you, and you didn't even say a few words, and you are not familiar with it, and you just gave me the Kung Fu and Fighting Skills of the Earth and Heaven Levels. Where did this stupid boy come from? What a chance."

I really can't stand it when a Dou Po fan licks Medusa. I don't understand how someone could like a nasty woman like Medusa. Apart from being pretty tall, it has no use. A vicious bunch.

Just came back from Doupo's time traveler with over 100 million points, Qinglian's earth core fire shape has been slaughtered

When I meet Dou Zong, I feel poisonous. If there was a six-star Dou Zong in the original book who found out about the strange fire, he would have strengthened it long ago. Medusa was the only Dou Emperor. I feel really disgusting. Can I get it into my brain when writing a book?

Chapter 1: Persuading him to quit. Pig's feet are too narcissistic and funny. He has the strong demeanor as promised.

I don't want Yafei to accept anyone, I want talent but not talent, strength but not strength, brains but no brains, only cleverness, a fighter in his twenties and thirties, a fighting spirit continent I don't know how many people are prettier than her, but without Xiao Yan, he is nothing.