
Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: I'm Bei Bei, and My First Choice Is Senior Sister
斗罗绝世:我贝贝,首选大师姐
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- Completed
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- 361k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Reborn as a child, you have really become a child. You act and speak no differently from a child. When you see Xu Sanshi, you can even scold each other. You also go to Tangmen. What's the point of this? Is it for the sake of unique knowledge? I haven't seen you write about why you went to Tangmen. You just kept emphasizing that you won't like Tang Ya anymore. I don't know if it's true. I didn't see any main plot in the first dozen or so photos. There's not much about daily life.
Nothing to see, let's go
It's nothing to look at. There's no plan for the soul ring. I choose it at random. I still want to become a god. I can't afford it if I don't use the big hook... How else can I start exercising at the age of four and end up absorbing a five-hundred-year-old soul ring? Ordinary exercise has no effect. I can't bear the high-intensity exercise and just get a high school. The whale glue is over, the protagonist has no brains... The ultimate attributes are useless. There seem to be two or three extreme attributes in Shrek's history, and they have never become gods. If you have the ultimate, you can become a god? Beibei's blue electric tyrannosaurus can take the Thor or Destruction route. 1. God of Thunder: Absorb several thundering hell vines, tap into the power of the God of Thunder bloodline, become stronger when struck by lightning, and pursue the throne of God of Thunder... 2. Destruction: Exploring the Purple Sky-Destroying Dragon of the Sun and Moon, looking for the remains (soul bone) or inheritance (divine core) of the ancestor of the sub-dragon, There are remnant souls that can be transformed into souls, there are still remains of the Ice and Fire Dragon King, there are also dragon valleys, and the ancestor of the sub-dragons should also have secret realms and so on. How to absorb it depends on the protagonist's mind. At this time, the destruction attribute (extreme/god level) should be able to attract the attention of the God King of Destruction...
After reading a little bit, I feel that the writing is okay, but the details are not very good. The big forces hunt for souls, not to say that they are 100% satisfied with the soul beasts. They should show the background of this power, such as knowing the distribution range of age-appropriate soul beasts that match the martial arts of the younger generation, and knowing the younger generation's soul beasts. What kind of soul ring should the martial soul of the generation absorb, what kind of soul beast should be absorbed, and what kind of soul ring combination will have what special effect. Especially a soul master family like the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus should have a systematic soul hunting system. Thousands of years of exploration should have its own unique truth. Instead of randomly refreshing NPC soul beasts like playing games, and as a time traveler, you must also plan the opportunities. You can't just follow the plot. Otherwise, why travel? Why not write about indigenous people? If you don't take the opportunity, it is "eat it without hardship". If you plan the opportunity, the author will write it. In a word: Come on, author!
Harem or single heroine?
If it is a harem, you should go to the royal harem. In a fantasy world, the main palace is the eldest sister, and everything is dominated by you. If you make an alliance with only you in the early stage, and then turn into a scumbag in the later stage and open up the harem, you will not only deceive the eldest sister, but the audiences on both sides will also feel very poisonous. If you have a single heroine, you shouldn't write so many emotional disputes with the supporting actress. In just ten chapters, it's both Tang Ya and Dugu Yan. She has a succubus physique and everyone loves her, especially the part about Dugu Yan. She fell in love with her after knowing her for a long time. The protagonist still has to coax her, and even pursue her after she wins the 2v2 game. The protagonist's two teammates are not strong enough. Are you really not afraid that she will agree to your pursuit? A perfectly matched scene already has the appearance of a heroine. I don't believe you even if you say it's not a harem.
The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Martial Spirit does not absorb dragon attribute soul beasts and cannot be used in dragon transformation. Its strength is much weaker than other Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus that have dragon transformation.
Is the protagonist's martial spirit the same as the Holy Dragon of Light like Mu En, or the twin or triple martial spirit like Huo Gua? After all, the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus has been the worst performer among the upper three sects since the beginning of the fight.
It's not interesting, Wuhun is still the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex
Also, the first choice is senior sister, who is the second choice?
Was that subsidy given to him by Shrek? Not very understanding
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?