Traveling Through the Heavens, Starting from Dou Po

Taking a woman across the heavens and still not listening to you, this book is about to beat. Zhu Tianliu drags his family and licks the heroine of the original novel, Shennong is half-blooded.

This is not a joke. How could a soul at the peak of the spiritual realm not be able to defeat the Dou Huang? I really feel that this place is suffering from a serious battle breakdown.

First of all, the early stages of this book are very emotionally toxic. Because the author was single-player in the early stage, he wanted to bring down Quan Qin, and he handled all things in a funny way, so there were all kinds of idiotic jokes, which were completely unreasonable. Second, I rarely get close to the main plot, and I have no interest in going through the original story with the protagonist again. Third, there are many girls, but no stallions. To reiterate, Xun'er and Medusa are because the author is a fan of Dou Po. They belong to Xiao Yuan Meng, and Bibi Dong is because there is nothing to write about at the current stage, so they did it casually. There will be a follow-up, but not more. After all, the follow-up is Dong Ge's book, and the female characters are just makeup. Fourth, don't be a nanny. If you think that some of the protagonist's actions are still being a nanny, then let's get together and part ways. I hope you find your favorite book. Fifth, I opened a fan forum to speak, because I was tired of being criticized, and my mentality exploded. You can say that the book is not good, but don't dump your negative emotions on me. Finally, I wish you all a happy reading. Finally, I opened a fan value speech. There is no need for you to reward me for this, and I am not here to make this kind of money. If you really want to continue watching, but feel that some aspects are not handled properly, there is a free fan group, and there is a link below the introduction.

There must be multiple heroines, don't worry about that, but I don't know how to stall, and I won't meet one after another.

The writing is okay. It's just a lack of logic. Or just take off with invincible Liushuangwen. You have a lot of super skills. There is also a strange fire nearby. She can't beat a fighting emperor's Medusa. It feels a bit unpleasant. . .

You don't have to care about the world level comparison, but it's strange that the protagonist can't defeat a high-level Douzong with so many god-level skills and 5-star Douzong.

The saints in Zhe Tian can destroy the stars, and the Three Immortal Kings are probably invincible in Dou Po! 😏😏😏

You put the snake people who kill innocent people at the border, but what about the human beings who kill innocent people indiscriminately? What should you do. There is no way to do this kind of thing perfectly. It would be best not to write it at all. If it is written, it will be a poisonous point.

You do one thing to your face and another behind your back. You said you really like Xiao Yan in Battle Through the Sky and didn't want to change his story. In the end, you robbed Gu Xun'er and stole the ring. It's not that I object to you doing this. After all, this is a cool article. It's cool as you want, but it's disgusting for you to act like a cousin and set up an archway.

It would be better for the author to put harem and multiple female protagonists on the tags to filter out readers who don't like these genres and attract readers who like harem and multiple female protagonists. I personally like the protagonist to take the people he likes with him through the heavens (I think it's OK to bring a few, not too many), because in this way the plots of other characters have a continuation of the story. Instead of just leaving your woman or friends in the original world and leaving them alone. I have read many novels about traveling through thousands of worlds before. The protagonist travels to another world. It turns out that in that world, the flow of time is suspended, the flow of time is different in different worlds, etc. Others are not tired of it, but I feel tired of it anyway. So I support taking people through time travel, because I like the protagonist to have a companionship process with the person he likes, rather than a passerby (personal opinion, the author carefully refers to it)

Those who have mastered the Dao of Cutting will be basically invincible if they fight back and defeat them.

Emperor Dou is only at the level of a king in Zhetian. A saint can reach for the stars and the moon. A strand of hair can kill a powerful man and collapse mountains and seas.

Your introduction can be more straightforward and only needs one sentence. Wrong, my (pig's trotter) eyes are only on women. 😅

If you want a heroine, just have a female supporting role. Don't use innocence as a license. Scum is just scum and can't be cleaned. It's still okay if I don't wash it.

The combat power has long since collapsed. Normally, if a Dou Wang reaches the limit of Douluo, he will just kill them randomly. But here it is so good. He actually fought against a hundred thousand year soul beast and didn't want to go up or down. I laughed to death. It is even more poisonous to take people across time and space as soon as you come up.

Your Fire God Technique is a bit poisonous. You can imitate fire when you touch it, which is barely acceptable. But you can imitate strange fire directly at no cost. I can't accept it. I am just a Dou Wang who has just advanced, and his fighting spirit is impossible. Is it interesting to create something out of nothing?