My Wife, Something Is Wrong

Goodbye Brothers, this is the first book that I was so immersed in. The story begins in the winter when Qingzhou gets married, and ends in the late summer and early autumn. Countless times I stayed up late reading after returning from school and refused to put down my phone. Every time I read this book in those days there was a heartfelt sweetness. The beauty, subtle ink, and green bamboo are the figures that I can't get out of my mind for a long time during the different stages of pursuing books. It's the longing for beauty that springs up in their hearts when they think of them in the boring dormitory life. The book ends unexpectedly and naturally. The story we saw has just ended, but the story of Qingzhou and the beauties is still continuing. Move forward brightly under the bright sunshine. The green boat will not change and the green water will flow forever. Everyone, we will meet again in the next book.

I really envy Luo Qingzhou. In reality, even if I can experience the beauty of him and any of his little wives, even if there is a girl like them in my life, like the smart, gentle and considerate Wei Mo, the stalking Meijiao, the cold outside but hot inside, the silent dedication, and Xia Chan, Bai Ling, Qing Zhu, Xiao Die and other girls. The Luo Qingzhou described by the author is indeed excellent. Not only in terms of IQ and ability, his sense of responsibility and three views are also unique in real life. He is indeed worthy of so many good ladies. While reading, I thought more than once, how wonderful it would be if I could find any kind of girl described by the author in my own life. I finished reading this novel in ten days, and I felt that my heart was ignited, just like Luo Qingzhou ignited and melted Sister Yue's cold heart, and also wanted to truly seek to catch other girls in life, the kind of love that both parties can sincerely love each other, even if they don't get married and have children in the end, it is a true love. It may be tiring and others may not understand it, but it is worth it.

I have never felt such a great sense of loss and sadness after reading other novels. After reading the extra chapter, I immediately broke down and burst into tears. On the one hand, I resonated with the experiences and voices of Cicada and the second lady, and I felt as if it happened to my own relatives. That kind of intense heartache, on the one hand, I also know that the story of the novel is over. From now on, Luo Qingzhou is Luo Qingzhou and I am me. I am about to face real life. I can no longer tease my wife with him from Luo Qingzhou's perspective, but the stories of so many outstanding women have not yet been told! ! And I am about to say goodbye to them... The author has excellent writing style, which made me deeply immersed in the plot of the novel. I also hope that the author will work hard to become better, and the next novel will definitely handle it better!

Little Bailing

Sister Yue in my heart

Boss, can you apply for a chapter recommendation? Please be familiar with me. It's not easy for newcomers to write new books

The story of Miss Qin may be over, but the story of Luo Qingzhou is far from over. There should be a broader space under this world view, and there are still many pitfalls, such as the demon clan, the origin of the Sun Moon Mirror, the story of Bai Ling and Miss, etc.

It's so good that I feel sick to my stomach, the plot is novel + the plot is touching + the characters are delicate + it's short and weak

-Reading process I haven't read many books, and I just finished reading them in one go. I finished reading it within a week. I read the entire plot of Dayan and all the emotional pull in the whole text word for word. I couldn't really understand the following parts of the Immortal Sect, Demon Resistance and Cultivation. -The main points are undoubtedly the characters, emotional pull and daily life. The combat part is exciting in the early stage, jumps a bit in the later stage, and occasionally has fun. The experience will be better if your driving skills are high enough and your brain is strong enough. -Setting and plot The world setting is very grand and complicated, and many situations and practice content have not been developed. The plot is not complicated and there are no serious poisonous points. Due to the background of great suffering and deep hatred, and enemies all over the world, it is difficult to guarantee roles for characters whose combat power cannot keep up, especially in the later stages. After all, the world is too big, the enemies are too strong, Dayan is too small, and Qingzhou is too weak. Sometimes it is difficult to deal with it without divine intervention. If you don't get entangled with these and use these settings more as a tool to advance the emotional line, the reading experience will be better. -Characterization Most of the harem characters have vivid personalities, and the important thing is that they are interesting enough. There is always one that suits you. For the sake of the characters I like, even if the later battles become very boring, I can bear to continue watching. As for the protagonist, he is handsome, smart and ruthless, and his emotions are basically delicate. I can only say that he is soft and hard. Of course, you have to protect everything, but you also have to bear everything, and you have to rub soft and hard together. Under high pressure, your image will be somewhat deformed and contradictory. It's hard to avoid, that's enough. -Overall experience Interesting enough, the path is wild enough, especially the various emotional pulls are very interesting. After reading it, it felt like a galgame from a different world and a royal harem, but it was a pity that there was only one line. What I like most is daily life, which is interesting and warm. I plan to brush this part again.

Two weeks, 70+ hours to read. The character creation is very successful. In my opinion, the overall plot can score 98 points in the early and middle stages. When there are too many female characters in the middle and late stages, it seems a bit overwhelming. Some old characters and some uncultivated harems are greatly reduced in length. Many characters fall into a long-term (hundred chapters) offline state. The main story is based on Sister Yue who has been helping the male protagonist to practice. During the practice, the relationship between the two heats up. When the relationship between the two is deep enough, they choose to end hastily. The relationship line is well described from the beginning to the end. However, due to the duration of the second lady's illness, the male protagonist's strength has been in a state of continuous skipping in the middle and late stages. He was even in a state of invincibility before the end. However, because he has not yet reached the treatment conditions, a little space was spent dryly describing the process of the male protagonist spending more than a year to continue to advance. In the last section of the cultivation line, I think it would be better to remove one or two realms in the setting? The cultivation line is not just the last part, is it also a bit abrupt in the early and middle stages? The number one master in Dayan Palace was only the master in the early stage, but he was completely destroyed by a bunch of masters who popped up in the middle of the plot. There were even multiple thunder tribulation masters in the demon tribe's attack on the city. Does Dayan rely on martial arts masters to defend the city? To sum up, I can give you 95 points on the relationship line and 59 points on the practice line. I saw that in the middle and later stages of the novel, it was treated as a daily romance novel. The male protagonist's decisive killing was indeed satisfying, but the multiple consecutive skips made the reading experience a bit weird. The ending of the novel may be a bit hasty, but Xia Chan and Xiao Ruyue in the extra chapter seem to have completed the characters. When I saw the extra chapter at the end, I felt that it was good to end like this. After all, there are too many characters and it is impossible to cover everything. As for the characters with less words at the end or other characters that are not described, let them live in that world with the protagonists in the minds of each different reader according to the reader's ideas.

Having read more than fifty chapters, I can only say that I haven't read such a satisfying book in a long time, both in terms of plot and writing style. I specially rewarded you for writing a book review. If the author can maintain this level all the time, he can become a god.

I originally found this book when I was on the verge of a breakup and wanted to change my mind. Looking at the name, I thought it was about a single heroine. Generally speaking, if there are more than 4 harem stories, I would just abandon the book. After careful reading, I realized that the author has written in most of the girls that every reader can meet, such as the simple, kind-hearted and arrogant Xia Chan who is devoted to love, and the weird tea talk about herself. Bai Ling, who is worried but does things secretly, Qin Weimo, who is knowledgeable and courteous, is as gentle as jade and can be reasonable to everyone, Qin Jianjia, who silently pays for the world when she cares about it without asking for anything in return, Nangong Meijiao, who dares to look directly at her lover who stalks her and never gives up, Xiaodie who is willing to dedicate everything to her uncle, and there are several female characters in the sequel that I still don't know about because I haven't finished watching them. They all have advantages and disadvantages to a greater or lesser extent. After all, no one is perfect and they are portrayed with flesh and blood. Originally, because of my failed relationship, my expectations for relationships were lowered to the freezing point, and I even felt inferior to others. But who doesn't have inferior self-esteem? Chanchan has inferiority complex, Weimo has inferiority complex, Jianjia has inferiority complex, and Zhaluo has inferiority complex. I also believe that if you stick to a correct attitude, you or I can meet the person who belongs to you. I am very happy to be able to meet so many girls with different personalities in the book 😡 This is a single-female book with a harem story, because you will find the type you like.

It's already perfect. Some people say the ending is sloppy, but that's not the case. A novel is actually a narrative of the main theme. So some people say that the hole has not been filled, that the continent has not been fully explored, and that there are immortals on the sacred tree above the God of War. In fact, it doesn't matter. The main theme of this book is that Mr. Luo worked hard to protect his family and one-third of an acre of land. He first eradicated the Chengguo Mansion, then went to the emperor, and then to the Piaomiao Immortal Sect. In essence, he defeated the big ones and the small ones. After the Piaomiao Immortal Sect, there will be no bigger monsters. It is enough for the second lady to improve her realm and protect her family. Other demon clans, monster clans, other continents, and higher realms are not important. The article has made it very clear that he only wants his lover. Compared with his lover, immortality can be given up. If there is danger, he can take his family to hide. He does not care about the world and others at all. He will die when the demons attack the city and Dayan's kindness is over. After the Piaomiao Immortal Sect incident, everything calmed down and naturally there were no monsters to defeat. The main problem was that the second lady was ill. Once this was gone, there would be a happy life. As for higher realms and creating new maps, there was no point in creating new maps or invincible enemies from the sky. It was nothing more than repeated experiences and monsters, which ruined the emotional delicacy of the light novel romance novel. So when I'm reading a book, I don't even want to read reviews. I just go find out what book I want to read. The positioning of this book is already very clear. Why are you pointing blindly here? It's enough to leave just three points of blank space and inner expectations. I look forward to the author's new book.

This book is really unforgettable. In fact, when I first read it, I just wanted to understand the strength of the Twelve Heavenly Kings. After all, I was really shocked by the "The Strange Immortal" I read before, and this book also has martial arts elements that I like. I actually don't like harem stories because it doesn't fit with my view of love. Luo Qingzhou in the book has many romantic affairs, but he does not look so cool. From his initial status as a son-in-law to his constant troubles, Luo Qingzhou can always attract the women around him with some unexpected characteristics, but he also has many involuntary helplessness. A friend of mine said that this should be called happy troubles, but even if it is enviable and involves countless right and wrong, one can always read Luo Qingzhou's bitterness. I have only read a part of the book so far. Many of the mysteries that are obvious to readers in the book have always been confusing in Luo Qingzhou's eyes. It took a long time to slowly uncover it. From the beginning about who was that night to the mysterious experience surrounding "my wife", these are obvious but not so disturbing. Instead, they become an interesting part of the advancement of the story. The author's interesting narration and finishing touches are amazing. It really makes people understand the profound skills of the Twelve Heavenly Kings, and they are extremely admirable. Think about it carefully, living in an environment with many outstanding women, it is not an easy task to be completely single-minded. But being able to constantly temper yourself and advance and retreat in a measured manner is what is admirable about Luo Qingzhou.

I think this one can be paired with green bamboo and other things that you can imagine on your own

I started reading it from 8.10 To 8.24, And it took me 64 hours to finish it. This is the first novel I want to read with money. I have ordered it all. After reading it all and combining it with what some elders in the discussion forum said, I think the structure of this book is actually quite complete. Everything is actually written around the line of the eldest lady. Even the illness of the second lady from the beginning to the end is closely related to the eldest lady (it is not mentioned in the text, so I need to think about it by myself). The most attractive thing about this book is that it definitely belongs to the early ancient and daily life style and the very profound portrayal of the characters. Except for the eldest lady, I don't feel very cold about other characters (I like Sister Yue's cold personality and peerless master), but the descriptions of Bai Ling and Xia Chan are really amazing, just like real people (Who? Who is banging?) The early descriptions of the characters are so lifelike. Before Chapter 600, probably before the killing of the emperor, it is indeed the most exciting part of the book. It is obvious that the pace becomes very fast after killing the emperor. The biggest motivation for continuing to subscribe in the middle and later stages is watching the interaction between Sister Yue and Zha Zhou. Every time I see Sister Yue/Eldest Miss in the title, it makes me squirm like a maggot. 🙂 The elder sister who has been helping him to practice is actually his wife. It's so cool for Zha Zhou to know that these two people are the same person. This really makes me chase him day and night until Chapter 1032. Yue Yao no longer disguises himself but uses Jian Jia's appearance to block the three punches of Sect Leader Mei on his behalf. It's really cool, hahahahahaha. It's a pity that I didn't see too many daily descriptions. Although the main plot of the eldest lady ended, the ending came a little too fast. Chapter 1032 revealed the identity and ended in chapter 1046. Most of them were about cultivating the martial god Yang Shen to save the second lady. But maybe I only love the eldest lady. If I continue to write the story of demons, monsters, and Kyushu, I really have nothing to look forward to. But in the end, it is still a pity that the ending is too hasty. Even if the second lady's treatment pace is slower and I write 50 more daily chapters, it would be better. The shortcomings and poisonous points are all within the scope of my acceptance (see how many readers can't stand the description of Yuzu? 🙂 I love Yuzu). The ability to read minds is indeed very disturbing, and it is not used at many critical moments. It can only be said that it is necessary for the plot, otherwise what else will be written after reading what the eldest lady is thinking? But the description of mind-reading is really weird, and it's never been made clear under what circumstances it can be used. It is inevitable that the combat power will collapse in the later stage. The pace is too fast, and Guiyi is like a bad street. One of the clever points of the author is that he never made it clear what kind of cultivation Sister Yue is from beginning to end, which also avoids the risk of her combat power collapsing in the later stages. I just finished reading it and have already started reading it for the second time. The early writing was very impressive and I want to read it again. Many book friends, including me, think that there are many pitfalls that have not been filled in or even mentioned. For example, there are no opponents in Kyushu, so what about the demons and demons? Long Er's father has never shown his face, whether Linghu Qingzhu will be able to have a baby in the end, and why Bai Ling is willing to follow Jian Jia all the time. , Why was Jianjia thrown away at the Qin Mansion when she was still a baby? Fairy Qinyao and the old storyteller did not explain why they did not want Jianjia anymore (public opinion is that QD did not allow blood-related sisters to be admitted at the same time, so the setting was temporarily changed. , Then this is half a trap.) Why did Bai Ling leave the sect? What happened to her when she was rescued by Jian Jia? Why did Bai Ling count 123 without 4 and go straight to 5? Who is Zha Zhou's biological father if he is not Luo Yannian? How big is the stockings and bellyband store he opened? ... In short, this book is still worth reading. The daily life in the early stage is very fascinating, and the interaction with Sister Yue in the middle and later stages is also quite exciting. It makes people want to follow it. I hope that the next book will not end as hastily as this one.

To be honest, I think it looks better than the previous version, although the previous version was already very good-looking. I just hope the author can make it longer and not cut it in half like the previous book 😭

I've finished reading it. I haven't read a novel like this for a long time, but it leaves an indelible impression on me every time I read it, and this novel is no exception. The writing is very good, and in my opinion it is already the best. The plot is very interesting, and the more you read, the more you want to read it. This novel can arouse people's emotions, and people can't help but be immersed in it, but they are also afraid of the end. Each heroine and each story makes me unable to bear to swallow them all. Xia Chan, Sister Yue, Qin Weimo... You will find that you are slowly falling in love with these characters. But the story must end, but we always live in a story, and my feelings will never end. Maybe we will eventually come out, slowly forget, and fall in love with other stories, but this happiness and touch cannot be erased. Okay, I'm going to live my own life. Goodbye, Book Club. Goodbye, Luo Qingzhou.

Good, I just don't like Nangong Meijiao 😅

Qin Jianjia, Sister Yue, wears a ponytail and rides a horse in Mongolia.

The last novel I read in my sophomore year of college. The author is great. Every character has a spiritual character.

It is well written, very literary, and exciting The specific performance is that it is rare for me to spend money to read a book by myself (more than 150 hours in two weeks). My thoughts are ups and downs, and it is difficult to express.

It's a good novel. I've finished it. My eyes are so short-sighted that I spent about 100 yuan. Although the book is full of weirdness, it's still good. Some places can still be modified and some vocabulary can be reprinted and revised. It's ready for publication. If you like this novel, I should thank you for listening to the audiobook version hosted by the Anron team. The dubbing of the characters has their own characteristics. It's very good. Thank you Anron team for giving a suggestion to the novel author. The dual identity of the male protagonist should be distinguished in the novel. When Chu Feiyang appears, he should be described by the name Chu Feiyang. When Luo Qingzhou appears, he should be described by the name Luo Qingzhou. This makes it easier for readers to distinguish and understand. Thank you Yichan Zhixia. Come on 👍👍👍

It's over, it's finally over 🌹🌹 As an LSP who saw the novel on a pirated website, I couldn't help but come to Qidian to pursue it for the first time. I also witnessed the emotional intertwining and growth process between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. At the same time, I came to Qidian to see such a complicated update progress, and felt the difficulty of being a part-time author 🙂 Although I felt very reluctant to let go, things were just like the author said, the story should be over. Too much procrastination will have the opposite effect, making this book that just happened to encounter a major change in the relationship between the characters at the starting point more complicated and bloated. Anyway, it should be over. This is the first time I have gone from pirated copies to genuine copies and ordered all of them. I appreciate this novel very much. 👍 Look forward to the author's new books✊👏

Indeed, it is enough to write it here. The main theme is still a light novel

This book was able to attract me to read it in one sitting and stay up late until the next afternoon. The characterization is in line with my enjoyment point, and the humor is online. It's worth reading.

The painting is Wei Mo and the male protagonist

Jianjia is green and white dew is like frost. The so-called beauty is on the water side.

Call my sister-in-law, one hundred floors will be closed once, ten times will be closed 😍 Three hundred will be closed

It seems that the painting is too childish... But at least it is cute! Thank you Xiao 6 for your encouragement and support~ —— —— Xia Chan, rush!