Dou Po: Start with a Fallen Heart Flame

I like novels that are not hostile to the protagonist of the original work (no matter what type of fan fiction, I just don't like to read abusive protagonists. I always retain a little respect for the original work, so please don't comment on my personal opinion) It would be better if some of the plots downplay Xiao Yan. I usually pretend to be cool in front of Xiao Yan, but all the heroines I like have stopped. She acts like a thief in front of Xiao Yan to show affection, and I envy him to death 🤓.

It's okay to have multiple heroines, but please don't be a dick and just drool immediately when you see a girl.

The more I look at the protagonist, the less I can stand it. .

After reaching chapter 37, I really can't stand it anymore (Shennong has fallen)

You didn't say anything about writing Wanjiewen? If I had known it was Wanjiewen, I wouldn't have read it. Couldn't you just finish Doupo and then go to other worlds?

This protagonist is so reckless. A fighter doesn't just run around and make waves. Isn't it hard for a modern person not to understand the importance of Gou?

Xun'er

Queen Medusa

If you travel to other worlds, add a Wu Geng Ji. There are many beauties in the Wu Geng Ji. I personally like to dance with the wind 😍 (if anyone has written about Wu Geng Ji, please recommend it, thank you)

Stop writing about other worlds. I really can't stand the plot. Why don't you just write about Dou Po?

From the introduction, I should like it. I like to be brothers with Xiao Yan, but the chance girl is not polite. It is best to pretend to be in front of Xiao Yan and let him take a big breath of air and exclaim that it is so scary.

Yunyun

Girl who broke off the engagement

The protagonist is so reckless, it would be too silly for you to give a cautious title.

The author is really not selective in the protagonist he wrote. Should every named woman be written as the heroine?

The author, Zhu Zhuqing from Douluo Continent, and Angel Yanshou from Super Seminary? To be honest, I like them the most in Douluo and Super Seminary.

After reading Chapter 9, the protagonist has a very good personality and is very appealing to me, but he was a bit dissuaded when facing Yafei! Hey, I hope this kind of plot won't appear in the future. It's rare to find a book where the protagonist's character is to my liking.

I have seen the latest chapter, and I can only say that the current position is average. When I read it later, I felt that the protagonist had lost his mind and started to look less like a human being. Except for his lower body, he still thinks in a biological way. Either there will be a reason to explain later or it is just too smooth. You are simply in God mode. If you don't have any novels to read, your friends can read it and see that it is almost invincible before the time travel. There is no frustration or fighting at all╯╰ If you are writing a comprehensive comic or a time travel novel based on the current protagonist's strength, you can consider the anime world. After all, there are many supermodels in it. I only know anime better and don't know about TV series. Summary: If it continues like this, it won't be anything good to watch, at least it won't be worth spending money to watch Shui Shui Wen. . .

A world to a perfect world

Aren't you ready for the ending? As for now, Dou Di is just throwing water. Shouldn't the gods wait until Dou Po is over? Now it's all time travel. Dou Po's plot is not even described in a chapter in more than ten chapters.

In this novel lottery, is the more stuff you fill up, the better?

Why is the protagonist always in shock?

As for the Sky Palm Bottle, I remember that the protagonist has drawn the Sky Palm Bottle. With this thing, the protagonist should not be short of medicinal materials. After arriving at the academy, the protagonist will be short of medicinal materials. Why not use the Sky Palm Bottle? Author, have you forgotten this thing?

One star in half a year is still 1 to 2 stars for Fighter