Overturned Tower

The author often only spends half a chapter to advance the plot, then uses one chapter to throw out a lot of background settings, and then leaves the protagonist to think alone for a chapter and a half to deduce the truth. And these settings and intermediate conclusions derived from reasoning, you will not be aware of their existence until they appear again as the gears of another reasoning dozens of chapters later. This leads to two problems. First, many settings in the story are not implemented. Just like the "idol industry" that Happy Island repeatedly emphasizes. We know that this is Happy Island's largest export business. The reason is an education reform proposed by the director, some people will be abducted to Xiacheng District to make short films, and so on. However, except for the two reporters Bing Shui and Xiao Liuli and the three heroes including the protagonist, there has not been a so-called idol in the entire Happy Island chapter, or in other words, there has not been a "grassroots idol" who can represent the idol industry. After all, neither the "hero" nor the "chief reporter" represents the entire industry. Rather than describing a cyberpunk world, the author is more likely to intersperse some "cyberpunk settings" into the story. Another problem is that some of the seemingly difficult problems in the setting don't seem so scary. For example, The Inferior's father and one of the elf directors (referred to as Daddy Scumbag), is second only to the dragon and the chairman in terms of status. Logically speaking, he is at least a boss in the first rank of the Four Heavenly Kings. He is evaluated by "Discord" as being extremely powerful among the elves, enough to make his compatriots acquiesce in the existence of the Inferior. A lot of space is also spent detailing the details of his abilities. But what about in a specific plot? Scumbag made four moves in total. Once, his discordant mother learned and passed on the details and weaknesses of his abilities. Once, Morgan took the initiative to reincarnate until he killed him. The last confrontation with the protagonist directly led to his own death. Co-author Except for repairing a plate when he first appeared, Daddy Scumbag is always deflated everywhere? We must first make it clear that the strength of a character's impression not only depends on the characteristics of its abilities, but is also closely related to its performance. A strong person does not need to have strong abilities. He can be strong just by relying on hard-to-quantify characteristics such as combat prowess. A weak person, even if he has all kinds of fancy abilities, will always make people feel that he may be killed by someone at any time. Just like the Sloth Archbishop in re0, the Invisible Hand is clearly not a powerful ability. Natsuki Subaru, who can see it, can easily avoid it, but after he unilaterally massacres Rem and the Iron Fang mercenary group, the audience will clearly realize the horror of Sloth. But what about Daddy? To put it bluntly, he is simply weak to the point of "I can do whatever I want". I can't even imagine that if a person was in the blind spot of Daddy's vision and used a lethal weapon to launch a long-range attack on the brain, how would he survive without any prosthetic transformation? Or to put it more bluntly, if he were not bound by "fate", would he be killed by his son as soon as he turned around? Scumbag is such a big boss, but he doesn't have one or two stepping stones to highlight how terrifying he really is. It can be seen how lacking the "plot" of this book is compared to the "setting". In addition to martial arts, literary opera also has similar problems. The protagonist's talent in the setting is really too high. As soon as a mystery is given, even before many readers can see that "there is a mystery", the protagonist solves it in three times, five times and five times. And sometimes the basis for the protagonist to solve the mystery either appeared dozens or hundreds of chapters ago, or was vague at the beginning, or simply turned back to tell us "what information the protagonist knew" after the conclusion of the deduction.

What I say is: They all have made great progress in the setting, foreshadowing, structure, and characters of this book, and anyone with a discerning eye can see it. However, the tone of this book is different - if the previous "Player" was rising and the readers were looking forward to the following - then the tone of this book is "sinking", and the readers are subconsciously afraid of the following. We know that the author is unlikely to write a bad ending, but all the previous plots have already shown that everything is developing in a bad direction, and it is difficult for us readers to imagine that there is a satisfying and perfect ending-this is scary. The heavy plot and the huge inertia of the plot make it difficult to breathe, and one thing we know is: "the further back, the more so." The so-called tone here refers to the "whole story". From the full text of one million words, it is not difficult for us to discover the essence of the feelings we get. But, the plots written by many people also have a "sinking" tone? Any questions? ——The problem is precisely——Maomao writes so well that it seems to exaggerate a heavy quality, which will be revealed in the readers' thinking. Even if I guess how the ending will be better, I can't convince myself to accept this quality subconsciously. When I was finishing the last few volumes, I saw some people saying, "I don't want to read anymore, I'm a little tired." Few people could truly express that feeling in detail. Many people cannot accept this sinking tone of "high quality". Especially near the end - the plot is left with only a bad situation... I saw it, but I don't know how to suggest it - ups and downs are elements that all articles have... After all: even this feeling itself is just my subjective conjecture.

A little suggestion It's been a while since I read it, and I just recently had some free time to briefly write a book review. Because I really like the author's books, I decided to come here and talk about what I think after much thought. Discussion is welcome, no quarreling. The author is really great. I was shocked after watching Player Super Justice last year. But in my opinion, these two books actually have a common problem, that is, the content is too full. The author did not intend to write a long novel of 400 or even 5 million words, but he wanted to tell the story in detail and make the characters very three-dimensional. At the same time, he also included many creative settings. In terms of settings, in my opinion, whether it is the mage system, the psychic system or even the curse system and gods in the previous part, it can be developed. However, because the plot is too sufficient, there is not much content that can be used as the focus of other novels. In this book, Russell's spells and spiritual promotion It was quite freehand. I didn't even realize what happened. It was like being caught in a mirror. When I came back to my senses, Russell's red shift had inexplicably increased several levels. In addition, I felt that the jump between Meteor and Lang Yan was a bit big. I felt that this section The plot is like making a rocket... There are actually similar problems, so I won't go into details. This is what seems strange to me. These two books are like roujiamo stuffed with meat. If the cake can be made bigger, it will taste more exciting. I personally hope that the author can try to lengthen the next book. The author is too focused on telling one story, and it feels like he has neglected the overall novel. How should I put it, it feels like "fluidity". Forgive me for my lack of expressive skills: after reading The Overturned Tower, I felt like a box of marbles rolled over. The content is substantial, but not so heavy. After reading it for a while, I forgot about it, because the whole novel is connected through stories, but there is a lack of things that fill the story - just like a fairy tale, writing a story in the same volume, the protagonist will always have a very obvious inner drive, and there will always be some connection between the inner drive, the world view, and the power system. For example, in the first volume, the protagonist initially wanted to become stronger in order to save his life, and took the initiative to enter a secret realm. While experiencing wonderful adventures in the secret realm, the protagonist gained strength and learned some secrets of the immortal power system. ... The interaction between many elements in the world is going on all the time, but the connection feeling of The Overturned Tower only exists at the most macro level, between volumes. This is what I mean by "not so full." A full novel will not be like a marble, but like a puddle of water, slowly unfolding, leaving traces in people's memory, and having weight.

Just to praise the cat I want to call this book "Dianbo Wen" - not the meaning of "Dianbo Department", but "people who are not in the circle may not understand it, but people who are familiar with it will feel very happy." I am the kind of person who enjoys reading it, and even has other feelings, just like what Shen Congwen said in the library, "Seeing so many people writing so much Book, I really don't want to write anything!" What Maomao wants to express and is capable of expressing almost covers everything I want to express. This is undoubtedly a tangled experience for a person who wants to be an expresser-"Damn it, why should I write something good!" I'm not exaggerating, but in my subjective opinion, this book is really beautifully written. My personal criteria for judging a good book is very simple - a book that I want to read and love to read, and the less I dare to read it, the better the book is. The main reason why I dare not read it is because the ending of a good book will give me a huge feeling of loss, which lasts for a long time, and it is difficult to get out of it on my own. This feeling is quite painful, sometimes to the point of not even thinking about food or drink. And Maomao's books (although I have only read "Player Super Justice" and this one) almost always output this feeling to me, although it is not strong, but it continues. So it can be said that I have been in pain while chasing books. Sometimes I even have to do something else to relieve myself after reading a few paragraphs, like a mental masochist. I remember a book said that creation is a kind of "beep——". The creator forces his own thoughts into the reader's mind. When I read this book, I really felt like I was letting the cat "beep——", and then meowing back to him was very satisfying. Fortunately, Mao writes very well at the end of each volume, breaking down the creative ideas and talking about them, so every time when he is almost overwhelmed by [beep——], he can take a break (let me see if this is what I thought. Jpg). Ahem, I couldn't help but said something weird, I hope Maomao doesn't mind ( Actually, I want to continue to praise you, but it feels like it will be even weirder if you continue to praise me - anyway, the days are still long, I hope Maomao will continue to work hard!

One day! It turns out that this is what it means It reminded me of two stories... One of them is "One Day in Prison" by Liu Wenyang, and the other is the COC module "Letter from Tomorrow". The former does not have such a deep sense of despair, because the prisoner in the story will gradually age and die even if he is trapped for a day. In the process, the prisoner also discovers the meaning of his life... As the protagonist, "I" is just a witness who finally discovers the truth, and the ending is also given a blank space that makes people think. The latter, after all, is just a short model and will not have such a long emotional foreshadowing, so the "shock" it causes is stronger than the "sense of despair" And in this story, there is something completely new A kind of deep despair and sadness, there is only one chance, the eternal prisoner or the chosen death. The strong symbolic meaning of the identity of two people, as well as the change of "predetermined destiny". In any case, I hope this story can have a good ending... After all, this is not a cold or even "heartless" science fiction work, it is meant to cruelly show the "unkindness" of the world. The world built by cats has a warm undertone. The bird of paradise will be covered with beautiful feathers, and the soul that has been imprisoned for a day can escape its fate.

It feels like the main theme of this book is like a crashing plane. Russell pulled the joystick upwards desperately, but the more he pulled, the more desperate he became. So much so that Maomao finally wrote the happy ending HE of "The plane crashed successfully and everyone survived", but it made people feel desolate and dreamy. It can be said that the HE was written like BE. However, the emotional line is very interesting and can be recommended to lovers of single female protagonists. You can watch the plot when the plot reaches its climax, and you can watch the emotional thread when the plot reaches its trough.

Sure enough, I still want to read Qi Miao's occult fantasy. I feel that this book does not have the lively atmosphere of a sandbox player, and the drama of self-talk about destiny is stronger. Although the characters have their own characteristics, it feels like the difference between the sage who predicts Oedipus's fate and the girl holding his old hand is just a pair of huge wings. They both have the same destiny to fly to. In comparison, the body and life are insignificant... Although the setting is originally that Boss Naija used the world approaching dusk to set up a stage for the employees to perform it and watch the show (／_＼) I hope Qi Miao can write a more subtle setting in the next book, and a character with a less strong sense of mission. This is very important for a non-Fu Rui control setting chef, Arigado ()

I have something to say about the narrative of various logical chains in this book. First of all, the author must be praised for his exquisite grasp of different people's information, mentality, and stance. Many times, different people's perspectives are completely different from one person's perspective when they get different information. The narrative trick is very awesome. However, it is precisely the formation and process of these logical chains that appear to be self-consistent but are actually made into conspiracies by the author. They are also the "separation" and "self-talk" criticized by many readers. Here I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you should use psychological description, use psychological description, so as to enrich the character and avoid the controllable or uncontrollable transmission of information. Although I also understand that Russell's mission is to save the world and unite people, and the original purpose is to communicate information, but all understanding must be told to the person you are talking to. This raises several questions: Will people definitely believe you? Will people definitely tell you the truth? Although no one can lie with Russell's talent, is what others say necessarily reliable? Isn't there something preventing people from communicating? I think that even in the cyberpunk era in the book, people's communication is still limited by people's ability to transmit information. According to the description in the book, there is indeed no one except Russell himself who fully understands others. But even if you fully understand others, isn't your own psychological activity important? If other people's psychological activities are analyzed by you, then wouldn't you yourself not speak out what is on your mind? This is the main factor that reduced my perception of "Tower". It's not that the logical advancement is not good-looking, but that it is so good-looking that it ignores the psychology of the protagonist. As a book friend said before, I also hope that the protagonist will be more selfish and not be written as a reasoning machine created just to understand the truth. Having his own psychological activities can actually better show Russell's ice-snow intelligence as a "mirror". It's hard to find words like "secretly thinking" and "mulling over" in "The Tower". This is an inevitable flaw in a novel that focuses on spiritual confrontation.

Discussion on the ability of "God's Vessel" - What is imitation? In my understanding, there are two types of imitation. One is that Plato believes that imitation is always inferior to the prototype, and the other is that Aristotle believes that imitation can create different things. Both have their own reasons. For the current narrative, I agree more with the devil's understanding. When those wandering souls enter the container, I am completely different from what I was yesterday, and therefore I can have some actions that are not in line with my past personality. Even if the protagonist later encounters his own despair and dilemma, he still cannot truly understand Morgan's despair. The forms in the container are already idealized. Why can't these idealized forms be integrated with each other to create new characters? (Fusion Summoning?) Currently, sensory abilities are used more as tools. Except for the Godfather, who is a new student, other characters are still lacking. For example, although the mother's abilities are derived from her, she may not be able to become a new character with a new story. The traces of the past are too heavy, which obscures the possibility of interpretation of these abilities themselves. An idea is that when the protagonist becomes demonic, the characters in the container will run out and have their own souls and lives again.

When I first saw Russell on the airship, I stayed with this book. "The King of Light" is forged into the company's class, and the chaos of "A Song of Ice and Fire" becomes the relationship between lives. When the hero raised his unedged sword, the saint couldn't bear to see the duel under the stone statue. Under the ultramarine sky, even a shadow on the Yuanli wheel will have the right to survive in the sun.

Cheer up, I like your writing style Based on my personal feelings, I think this unit drama format is interesting. I've seen a stage drama performance style at Qidian before, but I can't remember the title of the book, but it's not the same. It is the embodiment of one's own creative pursuit. I like Dai Wangshu very much, and I also like the color cyan. I am very fond of the bird part of the paradise. Remembering this part, I feel a little regretful. I feel that some more tragic spaces that could have been handled were not well presented and conveyed. What kind of belief drove the woman to experience possibly endless reincarnations, the elf mother's behavior of constantly protecting her children, and the chairman's understanding of his own abilities and subjective feelings. There are some gaps. The scary dad was like a blank slate, defeated by all his efforts, but he didn't stand up too much, just like the hero's friend in a trance. I feel that the subtle process of the birth of many abilities can be narrated with a slower and longer lens, or a different narrative method can be used to highlight the uniqueness of these abilities themselves? The male protagonist has too many abilities, and it becomes like a cool novel but not a cool novel. Perhaps as some comments have said, the positioning of the characters is not very certain. The protagonist's abilities are too strong. It seems that many events have happened, but the development is so fast that in the end the big boss has become the younger brother before he even leaves the warehouse. But its own core motivation is still somewhat lacking, perhaps compared to the protagonist Annan in the previous film. But I believe it will continue to develop~ From a personal feeling, the protagonist has too many identities, which makes him a bit too scattered. He is not so much a container of God as a mirror of all living beings. When people worry about whether they forget themselves in the process of constantly imitating others. I like the configuration of the male and female protagonists and look forward to their future development (๑˙ー˙๑) The reason why the male and female protagonists are prevented from falling in love is because the female protagonist is too ordinary. Maybe the female protagonist's life experience will be reversed. Her parents suddenly become spy pawns or something. I hope it's not a knife, but I don't know how it will develop. There are also some small visions. The protagonist's acting feels like a role-playing method, but the analysis of the acting seems to be missing something, maybe to avoid being too similar to a certain novel. As for the character setting, the presence of the mother Alice is a bit too dazzling. Everyone who is older knows it. Although the plot makes sense, the subsequent downfall is a bit abrupt. (My head was spinning and I forgot that I was killed by a curse) The father image setting hinted at a reversal from the beginning. He could also be a pure villain, but I felt that the image was too stereotyped. This setting of the real history of the world is, yes, somewhat similar to "Crown of Silence". But the protagonist is not very curious about history. The protagonist is subverting and creating history, but his own attitude towards the world is a bit erratic. Love? It feels like Aiwujiwu. In fact, it still has a feeling of indifference and indifference of a god. Too strong an ability feels like the protagonist is no longer bound by fate and driven by crisis. Although it is a noble reason for him to be angry at this unfair world, his own divine arrogance has dispelled his feeling of anger. This may indeed be the reason why the protagonist cannot take the road of anger. The other themes and styles have a feeling of dragons, roaring wind and moon. Maybe I free-associated from reading some. Here is the hero as the core concept, and I look forward to a richer interpretation in the future. It feels like there is something almost "anti-heroic" in the context of the overall story, a deconstructive narrative. In a world of business heroes with fallen ideals, it still seems a bit elusive and powerless to stick to something.

The plot has become a story series based on volumes. The discussion is good, but the sense of the story is a bit rough and it is easy to get into trouble.

Overall, I'm quite disappointed. Maybe my expectations were too high due to the interconnected and self-contained perfect cycle of the previous book. The ending logic of this one is really a bit too hasty and perfunctory. Generally speaking, this book is really good in the delicate portrayal of the young couple's emotions and the detailed description of daily life. It's eye-catching, but after all, this is the starting point, not the JJ next door. For a fantasy/sci-fi epic work, the daily sweet chapters can only be used as after-dinner desserts, but Maomao, the portion of this dessert is a little too full. It's really delicious, but it's really not good. In other words, if Maomao thinks that the love line is more than just a dessert for this work, I think it makes sense, but in this case, should this line be given a fuller end? At the end, Maomao and Dog have already changed from lovers to family members (I think The handling of this point is very good and must be praised), but for the further changes after they become a complete family, it seems that they can only wait until the extra episode. There is always a strange feeling of "cutting off the poop halfway, telling you that you are done now, come back after a while", which is very uncomfortable. In addition, the boss battle rhythm in this book is very slow, especially when compared with Annan's mirrors. I am too lazy to write the rest. The work is indeed a good work, but it always gives me a sense of immediateness like "Edgewalker". It has such a cyberpunk atmosphere in the front. After it is over, tell me what you want to express in the end is love and peace, or the kind of operatic fantasy. It does not mean that cyberpunk must be dark and cruel, but in the end it becomes the real top directors of the company. They volunteered to sacrifice themselves, but they turned their backs on the ending of the Big Seven and the Masonic Society. Isn't it a bit inappropriate? Even if you say that there is no distinction between air islands and land (which is more or less reasonable), the Seven Giants will either merge or cooperate under the pressure of the Masonic Society, or the Masonic Society will be gradually swallowed up by the Seven Giants, or even both. Then it will still be the status quo of a corporate monopoly society, but it seems that there are signs of something different, some subtle changes. ... I really don't want to fight anymore. The above can only be said to be some of the endings I imagined myself. After reading the final chapter, I found that the things I paid attention to, let alone guessing right or wrong, didn't even have any relevant in-depth descriptions. Then I was a little confused and didn't understand, so I wrote so much. I hope Maomao can satisfy these regrets in the extra chapter. But! As an author! These core main storylines (social lines, emotional lines) cannot be fully explained in the final ending, leaving so many "holes" and expecting the extras to slowly fill them in. I think it is a very irresponsible behavior, and Maomao will punish it😡!

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Article Filling Festival Wishing Season"} Maomao helped me revise my articles and give suggestions every day before. Oh my godthis time let me book the venue and give out benefits! In addition, the cats in my book have wonderful, happy, and happy sounds.

Which is more important to Sheath, the road or Alice? 1. The love that Delphinium sees in Sheath is not for any real individual, but for something illusory. Because the object is illusory, Delphinium speculates that this may be love for a certain path. 2. However, Alice has passed away, that is, she does not exist in the world, and Sheath regards Alice not as a lover but as a goddess, so Sheath's love for an illusory object may still be directed towards Alice. 3. Russell believes that Sheath has clear thoughts and clear will, and has not been manipulated or confused by others. Russell may have made a mistake here. Also wrong was Russell's belief that Sheath did not regret the path he chose, but in fact She did. Therefore, the sheath may not have clear thoughts or clear goals, or may even be manipulated and confused by others. In short, she may just do the task without considering the consequences clearly. 4. Sheath's reaction when he saw Alice also proved that Sheath had not thought that his choice might lead to Alice's death, and was unwilling to face the fact that Alice was dead. This also shows that Sheath did not consider the consequences clearly when accepting the task. 5. After listening to Sheath's words, Russell still believed that Sheath was a person who was determined to never look back and was prepared to sacrifice everything. Even until this moment, Russell still believed that Sheath had thought clearly. He valued Dao more and would firmly choose Dao between Dao and Alice. But Russell still underestimated Alice's importance to the sheath. Later, Russell turned into Alice in front of Sheath, when he discovered that Sheath's heart was in chaos. Alice said, "It turns out that you didn't see me clearly at that time." This sentence can be over-interpreted. Not only did Sheath not clearly see Alice sitting in the taxi at the intersection, but when he accepted the mission, he also failed to see clearly which one was more important to him, the road or Alice. Russell felt disappointed after knocking down the sheath. Part of this may have been his discovery that Sheath was not as determined and prepared as he had previously thought. 6. Sheath's self-report also mentioned that he has no desire to save the world, nor is he willing to give up everything. He took the mission because he couldn't accept "having a child with Alice." Personally guessing that the unacceptable point for Sheath is not having a child, but "with Alice". What he fears is not becoming a father, but becoming the father of Alice's child, who to him is only a part of the divine Alice. He wants to prove that he is a great father, but also because he wants to hide his fear that he is not worthy of being the father of Alice's child. In the final analysis, he is still afraid that he is not worthy of Alice. He was able to endure extremely painful transformation and extremely dangerous tasks, perhaps not because of his determination, but because it was in line with his inner desire to punish himself: to punish himself for being incompetent, not worthy of Alice, and for escaping shamefully. Even the reason why Sheath hates herself but is paradoxically ambitious about fame and wants to make herself a great person may have something to do with Alice. Because Alice admires him. Sheath was older. He was Alice's teacher and the senior who brought Alice into the Tower of Babel. This status made Sheath unable to hide behind Alice. Alice's character is focused on protecting the other person's dignity and beliefs, and does not explain clearly when the other person misunderstands but instead caters to him; Sheath said that Alice took his excuse for wanting to escape as the truth, but in fact it may be that Alice saw it but did not expose it, instead encouraging him. But what Shen's awkward character probably needs is not encouragement but reprimand... If the two were of the same age and Alice didn't admire him but was more powerful and led the relationship, Shen might be able to be a defender and a believer with peace of mind. The above is for the sheath. If it were for Alice, I think it would be better not to encounter the sheath (no mercy). 7. Conclusion. My personal guess is that for Sheath, between Daotu and Alice, Alice is actually more important, but when he accepted the mission, he didn't think clearly about what he really valued. Until he got the secret of the dragon and realized that his path was wrong, he regretted it at this time, but still said, "What's wrong with choosing a future with greater possibilities?" But after seeing Alice appear and realizing that Alice was dead, he was too panicked to care about the road battle. At this time, he knew that the most important thing to him had always been Alice and not Tao, but it was already too late.

The monkey-faced eagle is sure that it will integrate with everyone who comes, and it can upload and download completely by itself. The scabbard is negation, counterattacking and denying all existence. It can completely delete consciousness from the Internet and completely defeat the monkey-faced eagle Russell is the negation of negation, so he is an epitaph, not just a copy, but a summary, refinement and sublimation of a person's life. What dialectics ( )

Players who have followed me all the way will talk about the advantages of the tower: the world view of the tower is a mixture of fantasy and science fiction, with psychoanalysis as the core engine (personal subconscious and collective unconscious, very Jungian and Freud), and combines wizards, elves, dragons, righteousness, etc. The body, psychic energy, chips, etc. Are integrated into one pot, and there is even a furry setting (yes), but it doesn't feel like there is any stitching at all (it's all stitched together 😜). It's seamless and makes me so happy (JOJO face. Jpg). One last time, praise the cat, meow meow meow meow

The author actually writes a good story, but why does he have so many big words? In fact, omitting some of them does not affect the reading at all. On the contrary, if there are too many, it will make people feel bored and alienated from the story. It seems to be the same in the previous books. Can't it be changed 😥

I'm going to make a rumor about the story after the cat was written, before Russell awakened his past life memories Mainly because of the rumor that Sally Ruth petted a cat for the first time (huh? Who doesn't like to pinch the kitten's paws!? It's a bit surprising, but in fact, Sally Ruth was still working diligently as a wage earner under a certain evil boss) Russell, at least at that time, was not a person who particularly liked to look up at the sky. What's so good about the unchanging blue sky? The dark-haired, almost effeminate young man would always refuse the overly self-disciplined father and son's suggestion to go to the balcony to enjoy the air when they had rare free time on weekends. In the room, accompanied by various drinks and screen lighting effects, he spent a weekend that didn't seem to be that leisurely. Although the more leisurely seniors would search out several large bags of garbage from his room at the end of the day and throw it in his face before going to work, this time really belonged only to Russell - the social life of going to school and working. Tired enough, who would want to see living people and the sky when alone? Isn't it possible that I'm not busy enough? Say goodbye. Russell's facial features hidden by the layers of hair twitched unconsciously, and then he laughed happily in the empty room. So, when he came from another world. Before he woke up in the sky and met the Samoyed who said he was a bad day and drank the orange juice in front of him unceremoniously, he was indeed not interested in this boring gray sky. But he still had doubts occasionally. Blue is not a rare dye in this world. It is rich, pure and indestructible. Blue always appears in all kinds of standard clothing. When I was in school, the gentlemen at the school would always emphasize that it was the color of the deep sea that they could not see... When Russell first went to college, there was a chapter on mineral materials in the compulsory material science for prosthetic assembly and maintenance that required a visit to the exhibition hall. Among them was a blue stone with beautiful texture and pure color. The lecturer mentioned it casually. There was sea bluestone, which can be used to make ultramarine dye. Russell, who was surrounded by his classmates, somehow blurted out: "Lapis lazuli?" "Hey, what is little Russell talking about?" Showing appreciation, Elf Tutor Sally Ruth opened the door and appeared in the Ore Exhibition Hall. As an Elf Director, she can naturally appear anywhere on Sogo Island... But it is really rare to suddenly break into the classroom like this. Her beauty is almost like a magical weapon... Her crimson dress is as burning as fire. Looking into the eyes of ordinary people, it was as if they were seeing a scene that did not exist in this world - everyone including the lecturer was a little dizzy, and then... Unsurprisingly, he fainted. Russell was inexplicably unaffected and just turned his eyes away slightly, but he still muttered a little: "The average tuition fee for a class at Sogo University is quite expensive." ——The poor little cat lowered his ears and looked at the fallen classmates, feeling that he was being targeted. He couldn't afford to pay for the inspections of so many people. Sally Ruth raised her eyebrows in a funny way. The multifunctional emergency robots that were everywhere in the sight of the three sages dragged away the fainted students and tutors in order, cleaned up the floor, and then closed the door of the exhibition hall that now contained only half of the machines except for the two of them. Sally Ruth's walking route was quite clever. , Just blocked Russell, so that no matter which direction he sprinted towards the door, he could not catch up with the speed of the door closing. Russell, who was just a little nervous at first, suddenly felt his heart skip a beat. The sound of the door engaging was actually not loud, which made Russell's unconscious swallowing sound particularly noticeable. He looked at the skirt of the elf mentor, and then. He looked at the closed door... Even though the Three Sages System had always emphasized that elves are the saviors of mankind, and the elf in front of him was a gentle mentor with a ridiculously good reputation in the school, the alertness from the desert cat spirit relatives still made him take a half step back unconsciously, arched his back with some vigilance, and put his lower back against the light strip of the display cabinet... His hand also touched the emergency escape door. "Our outstanding student representative is furious," the woman walked up to him curiously, gently and deftly held his hands, and removed them from the huge touch pad. She smiled softly and kindly, "Kitten, am I a bad person?" -But you are really doing this! You don't look like a good person! Russell cursed secretly in his heart, but his face remained obedient, even with an innocent student smile: "Excuse me... What do you want to see me for?" "I didn't come here specifically to see you, kitten." ... Huh? So this is harassment? Right? ! Russell's hairs started to rise as he gently scratched his palms as if he was squeezing a little doll. Russell was on the verge of tears, but the cautious observation he had developed in his early years still made him ask meekly: "Then...?" " "Little Russell," one hand pinched Russell's wrists. Sally Ruth easily passed through the display case with her other hand and picked up the well-preserved blue stone. "What did you say just now?" "Lapis Lazuli...?" I didn't know what to say. Russell said uncertainly what was going on. "Haiqingshi has such a name... Is it the name of other empty islands?" Sally Ruth smiled, but Russell almost broke out in a cold sweat - Alice... His mother just passed away not long ago... The highly cybernetic Sogo Island does have very strict control over the people. Harsh, but the public's overall trust in the Three Sages system has reached a point where Russell, who was born on Sogo Island, instinctively felt that something was wrong. However, his mother never connected to the Internet and never used those Internet-connected home products... Even though their life in Xiacheng District was not difficult... She was obviously not an aborigine of Sogo Island—— This Did the powerful elf director come here for his mother? Russell suppressed his worries, but did not notice the smile in Sally Ruth's eyes. He answered calmly: "Maybe... I saw it by chance in a certain database when I was looking at the school library?" ——He also guessed. But. Sally Ruth seemed to accept this statement without hesitation: "It's easy to learn, kitten." Huh. It's not just for mom... Russell glanced at his chest without leaving a trace - under his neat Sogo University uniform, there was no trace of Alice's chip on his body. He swept across the ground, but looked away faster than Russell, allowing Russell's attention to return to the pure and rich blue. "Lapis lazuli - an expensive, beautiful and ancient pigment, isn't it?" "Sorry, your wording surprised me a little." "You mean, 'ancient'?" Lilus finally let go of his grasp and handed the piece of lapis lazuli to Russell, "Humans nowadays really don't say it - but who made me an elf?" Russell held the stone and thought that the elf director's emphasis on "expensive" was probably intentional. He had a strong intuition that as long as he ran away with the stone, this seemingly-like person would be dead. It seemed that some evil spirit would immediately sound the alarm in the museum. So Russell held the stone politely and waited for her next words. "If you were a painter, where would you crush it?" "The building's exterior wall? The roof? Or the girl's skirt or those neon signs that never go out. ?" "Or let them take on the responsibility of drawing the water surface... Or the sea in everyone's imagination?" Sally Ruth was really asking the question seriously. She seemed to be an art teacher who stopped by to examine the students... It stands to reason that such questions are just ordinary multiple-choice questions. But Russell's expression was a little hesitant, as if he was doubting. I wondered why I had such an idea. "Little kitten." "Hmm... Huh?" "Honesty is the virtue of a good boy." "Then," Russell said his somewhat ridiculous idea bravely, "This kind of blue... This kind of blue should appear in the sky. " The gray dome is common sense, memory, and the truth that can be seen by looking up at the sky. Among the paintings that can be exhibited today, even painters who have overly subjective processing will not add such thick solid colors to the chaotic picture. A bit deviant, but maybe very appropriate. Russell thought about what the blue sky looked like, and felt It should be said that it is very suitable. He didn't know what he was thinking, but fortunately someone confirmed his idea without reservation: "It's a good idea." Sally Ruth clapped her hands gently, took away the stones in Russell's hand, and put them back where they were: "Actually, I just walked here by chance." Maomao casts a shocked look at you. Jpg "It's true, little Russell, you have to know that for elves, deception is meaningless - this is a fact, but it does not prevent me from suddenly being curious about a familiar student. After all, I just got your student loan application uploaded by the college." Huh? ! "Little Russell, do you want to be my student? I will grant you the maximum loan amount, plus monthly accommodation allowance." Huh...? ——This invitation is not so sincere... It is even too sincere. When I was an undergraduate student, I was attracted by a certain tutor. Not only does it show that this student has unlimited potential, but to a greater extent, it is acknowledgment that this undergraduate student will study for a bachelor's degree and a master's degree... So that he can skip the postgraduate entrance examination and directly get a master's diploma from Sogo University. "But," Russell's reason came back with difficulty, "Why me?" —— It's just casual chatting and wild answers. There are so many people applying for student loans, why did they choose me? "Just think..." Sally Ruth smiled happily, "Beautiful little guys always have privileges, right?" "Or, do you want to pay for the examination fee of the whole class?" end

I feel that Qi Miao's books are a bit anticlimactic (can this be said). In the later stage, I can obviously feel that I am rushing to progress. The pits I buried before were either brushed aside or not filled in at all, and the plot development began to accelerate significantly But even so, I quite like reading his books, because apart from the shortcomings of rushing to progress at the end, other parts of Qi Miao's works are really to my liking. The only authors whose starting point perfectly suits my taste are Big Eyeball and Qi Miao.

In fact, the name "Toppled Tower" is really inconspicuous in the pile at the starting point. It was purely a coincidence that I clicked on it - because it has cyberpunk elements, and I happened to be writing about cyberpunk, so I planned to come in and take a look. As a result, once you enter, you cannot get out. We all know that people are talented; a person may be particularly good in a certain aspect, but usually he also has other shortcomings - just like when we were students, many classmates were good in these subjects and poor in other subjects. All-rounders are always in the minority. For me, Maomao is an all-round academic master: from the perspective of the author of "Toppled Tower", I feel that he is better than me in every aspect; maybe in one aspect, I can reach his level after a lot of writing practice, but many gaps accumulate... And I am crushed. From another perspective, Maomao is the person I hope and hope to be. When reading the summary of each volume, I can often resonate with it. This is probably the main reason why I joined this alliance. As for the advantages of this book, they are actually very obvious, let's talk about it: First of all, it is the background setting. The background setting of this book can be said to be very complicated. The cyberpunk society and seven empty islands with different styles constitute the first obvious contradiction; the supernatural power composed of psychic disease, psykers and demons is the second layer we see; and behind these, mages, humans, elves, dragons, the history of the world... These represent the third layer of truth. But Maomao writes these complex settings very well. Ask yourself, if you give me this setting, it is absolutely impossible for me to write it to this level, and it will definitely collapse. Then there are some details that show the power of writing. To be honest, I have more bookmarks in The Overturned Tower than in Lord of Mysteries, such as Russell and Delphinium's first date, the small gestures of clapping and shaking hands between the two, Delphinium's past, the spiritual awakening of "bad because of love", the complex creation of the character of the bad guy, the rise of the Godfather in the lower city... I can't list them all, there are too many. Anyway, come on, Maomao~

Who is the Pope? I don't know him, and I didn't leave a place for him ( I forgot that someone in Morgan designed the plan, so I made it according to my own understanding Original story "Sea Tiger"

When will Qi Miao write this style of writing again? Although the game time travel writing is also very beautiful, it is not as amazing as the first time I read this book. What kind of style is this? I haven't found a meal replacement for a year after this book 😭

I can only say that it is indeed a Maomao. I would like to ask what type of cyberpunk style it is. This is my first exposure to it. I only saw this book on the shelf and thought it was not suitable for me to read, so I don't plan to continue. The book is very good, but the world view from what I have read so far can only be seen in two words - despair. Because of despair, light is needed for redemption, that is, a hero. In fact, I am very curious about the content behind it, but I am more immersed in reading the book. This book is so depressing that I can't breathe. After reading your comments, I found that the protagonist almost needs to fight against this order. I feel deeply powerless. Compared to the cheerful style of the new book, which is full of hope, the beginning of this book is really full of malice. Happy Island is not happy, and Sogo Island has no light. Hovering over people's heads are dragons and elves who have mastered the secret of eternal life. The seven oligarchs monopolize all resources and use chips to protect themselves from supernatural forces to resist the rule. However, the supernatural power is not that powerful and is limited to controllable because of its greatest super self. However, the power is possessed by the dragon and the elves. At the same time, two opposing directions are established to limit people's internal friction. Just like the caged bird in the first game, the world has become a cage, and the people in the world are all birds inside. However, this cage is relatively large, so the people deep inside are not aware of it.

1. In fact, I have never been very clear about what I should expect to see in the cyberpunk theme... At the beginning, I expected "cyber industrial beauty", "high technology and low life in sharp contrast with our times", and then further "a very spiritual story", but this book did not meet all expectations. The existence of supernatural power as personal force far exceeds that of science and technology. Although people's living conditions have an excellent sense of "high technology", the core part of life - the transformation of basic life by technology, and the views and philosophies people hold about it - are still more like contemporary people... Or even more ancient people. Of course these are just my personal expectations. In the six months since I was shaken off by Lothar's pregnancy, I went through a lot of changes in my thoughts, and finally came back and read the whole book. 2. In fact, I don't really like the "innocent" ideals like Fuji Society... 3. Among the several YY templates I used before going to bed every day, one of them was my own avatar playing all the powerful people, so that the world would definitely get better... I used this template for less than 5 nights. So I gave it up, because it was a way of skipping classes, and you will definitely regret it if you skip classes... "What is worth doing is worth doing right." 4. But in the end, because even though there are things I don't like, I don't have the feeling of being hurt by the things I don't like (meaning a huge poisonous point), so I still like this book quite a lot. I am quite sensitive myself, and almost every book I read at Qidian was damaged. Praise the praying cat with profound virtues.

Let me ask you, many readers in my book circle said that they couldn't stand it anymore. The author was out of shape in the later period, the tone was heavy, and the ending was a hp, but it made people unable to believe it. . . It makes me a little afraid to watch it

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Wish-making Season of Internet Literature Filling Festival"} Personally speaking, the first and third volumes are actually the two volumes that amazed me the most, and the tragedy of Blue Songbird and Fila is also the plot that makes me most uncomfortable. The love and dreams of two people disappeared under the suffocating rule of the company, and Bluebird gave up his studies to sing, which became the beginning of all tragedies. When Phila was talking to Russell, she said "I regret so much" three times in a row. I think that emotion should be passed on to many readers. I have also been thinking, if Fila chooses to spend the rest of her life paying off her debts with Blue Song Yuan instead of letting Blue Song Yun support her in school, whether their life will be like this: in the morning, Blue Song Yuan hums a song, and in the melodious singing, the two of them go to the company to work; in the evening, at home, even though they have worked all day, they may even encounter unpleasant things, but every time the two people look at each other inadvertently, a warmth will always fill their hearts. They will have one or several lovely children, and they will work together until the end. But the tragedy has happened. There is no regret medicine in the world. The ending of Blue Bird and Fila is already doomed. "I would rather believe in the uncoded than the company. They have no morals... But the company has no human heart." But no matter which side they choose, despair is the main theme of their destiny. "The moment you open the cage, there is only freedom - or death." I have remembered this sentence for a long time, which represents the end of Blue Gebald. Perhaps, "clean death" is his best ending. As for Fila, perhaps she was already dead after the death of Blue Bird, so she went to assassinate the elf director. No matter whether she succeeded or not, she would meet her end. I think I may remember their story for a long time... Since it is a wish, then I will make a small wish, hoping that Maomao can write a story about Blue Bird and Fila.

I feel very disgusted and disgusted with "Sheath". This is because I am a person who knows what "responsibility" is and cares about it very much. Sheath has never fulfilled her "responsibility" from the beginning to the end. It is her responsibility as Alice's lover, her husband, her child's father, or some other responsibilities. In short, with him, as long as I find a reason to make myself feel like a waste, I can avoid facing responsibility with peace of mind, and then firmly believe that everything done by those who love him is fake and meaningless, and I can throw everything aside with peace of mind and reject it What a joke, it makes me sick. His purpose of approaching Alice was bad from the very beginning. He never put Alice in his heart. He just didn't understand what responsibility was. No, no, he didn't understand. He knew what responsibility was very well in his heart, so he thought he couldn't fulfill this responsibility. In this case Since I am a coward who cannot fulfill my responsibilities, then I will just find an excuse for myself not to face it directly Then I will tell a false lie and let Alice wait for him and die because of him In the end, he and Alice's love for him also rejected it. It is really ridiculous

It's said to be a vest, but the vest is all about the same person. It's really annoying that the secret is kept being known by different people.

Alice drawn by AI, I will draw a bad one later