My Balcony Connects to the Three Kingdoms

It's well-written, but I remember Zhang Zhongjing was once the governor of Changsha. The author portrays him as so ignorant and "overwhelmed with gratitude," which makes me feel very uncomfortable. Apart from that, everything else is fine.

The protagonist's halo is just ridiculous, like the whole world revolves around him. Especially the part in chapter 24 where the soldiers and bandits attack. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. His cheat ability is only the ability to travel back and forth between worlds.

Furthermore, Cai Yan's courtesy name was Zhaoji, but it was changed to Wenji to avoid the taboo of Sima Zhao. Your Sima family hasn't even become emperors yet, and you've already started avoiding taboos?

No other meaning intended, just posting the chapter review of the first chapter. Those who need it can enter.

The first chapter of this book gave me the impression that a man who gets cheated on still has to give the woman who cheated on him money and a house. How incredibly sycophantic! Are all men this twisted nowadays? Is the author from a female-oriented novel?

I deliberately went past the free period and paid to come and ramble on. The author had absolutely no understanding of clans in the Han Dynasty. The problem is that they also claimed to have checked. The impoverished families of the Han Dynasty were different from those of the Tang Dynasty and later.

It's a good premise, but the character design and background are a bit outrageous. A small-time thug dares to mess with a powerful family, and the Wei family isn't just any powerful family. They seem abnormal, and it's hard to relate to them. It's a pity.

Hello, Cai Wenji and Zhen Mi were not from the same era.

Let me put it this way, author: your very first chapter has deterred many readers. Otherwise, your subscription rate would definitely have increased even further.

The reason why so many people like to write fantasy novels with endless worlds is because historical fiction is not something you can handle. You either need to be extremely familiar with a particular historical period, or you need to be fully prepared. It's okay to write based on your own ideas.