A Martial World at My Fingertips

I feel like Chapter 11 is a little unreasonable, and how can you sell an A8 car for 3 million? There is also someone who beat your sister due to domestic violence. You went to evaluate the injury. I saw that you described that the head was bruised and the head was wrapped in gauze. It was considered a concussion. It must have been serious for at least three years. Why did you go to his company to beat him? Isn't it a good idea to send him in? This is your fault, and you still have to be sentenced. Although you are writing a novel, it must at least be reasonable.

I would like to make a suggestion to the author. The article says that silver should be purchased in modern times for use in other worlds. I suggest changing it directly to low-purity silver. The purity of modern silver is too high, and it will easily cause problems in other worlds. Some people have measured the purity of ancient silver, which is generally between 70 and 90. Commonly used silver is basically below 80, and anything above 80 is basically official silver.

Written by an angry young man, he was almost poisoned to death

It's better not to write about the real world. It's really not good to write about the real world. The author should check it out for himself.

The formula is a bit old. After reading this book, I suspect it was written in the early 2000s. Other authors' deposits are based on quantity, while yours are on year.

If you don't do the good things of the two worlds, a third-rate warrior will wander around every day.

Am I blind? In the world of ancient martial arts, cordyceps are discussed and sold.

Is this the time to be a general manager?

In the real world, the protagonist should build a country so that he can buy weapons on a large scale in the future.

It develops too fast and the gangster plot is boring. There are also direct kidnappings for the protagonist to fight. A bit poisonous