My Yuling Family Has Career Templates

Just wanted to ask if anyone is watching?

Author, what are you writing? It has clear logic, novel angles, and interesting plots. Can you write a book? Book! The kind of boring stuff that makes you sleepy after watching it! Do you understand or not?

Recently, many people have asked whether the combat power will collapse, which is a bit confusing with the plot. Here I explain. The plot is really my fault. It was my first time to write a book. When I didn't get any results at first, I couldn't get into a hurry, so I kept speeding up the pace and missed a lot of details. I sincerely apologize to all readers. It probably won't happen in the future, because I've looked away. It's better to write a good book first than to worry about your grades. As for the issue of combat power, there is no need to worry about collapse at the moment, it is still within the framework. The gods that have appeared so far, except for the feathered snake, are all wrecks and clones. The true power of the gods has not yet been revealed. In the setting, gods have different incarnations. Just imagine, what kind of genre can three incarnations of gods form? In short, there are still many settings and world views that have not been developed later. For example, according to the ten Yuling spirits set by Three Souls and Seven Souls, the protagonist has only obtained three. The evolutionary paths of the three are completely different. What about the other seven? Don't really worry that I have nothing to write. It's better to worry about whether I have the energy to write...

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and there are indeed many things that are not considered enough. Thank you to the book friends who have always tolerated me. I also hope that everyone will not keep books for now. Follow-up reading is very important for new books, related to recommendations and lists. If you think my book is acceptable, I beg you to give me more help.

There was a big drama in the early stage without any foreshadowing. I didn't resonate with it at all. I just felt a little embarrassed. I wanted to hurry up and read the next chapters. I hope the author can work hard.

Only 62 chapters have been written, and there are already 6 female protagonists, which is outrageous

When I saw this profile of the Qi practitioner, I immediately thought of the Qi practitioner in the sandbox game next door, whose body spans half the planet.

Fortunately, the previous plot of the desperate island was a bit confusing.

The setting is a bit complicated, and many places are not clearly expressed. Readers need to figure it out on their own, which makes it very confusing.

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The scenes change too quickly to leave much of an impression.

Collect the whole harem? ? I am lsp

It's scary. There are so many heroines who dare not click and say goodbye.

The setting is quite interesting. I just need to practice my writing more. I can't stand it anymore.

There have been no updates for two days. This is the eunuch preview.

At present, it is basically confirmed that a new book will be opened based on the setting of this book. Of course not now. This book will last until at least two months later. If it really doesn't improve, it will have to be cut. I thought about making major changes, but found that I simply couldn't do it. Because if you want to make a major change, you basically need to expand the details, but doing so will not keep up with the current plot. As for pausing updates, it doesn't work... Because I need to guarantee full attendance, which is the basic condition for my wife to agree to me writing a book. After all, you have to support your family... So I'm sorry to all my book friends. This does not mean that I will not write this book seriously, but I will still develop the setting and plot seriously. At least prepare for the new book. If you can get good grades, you will persist until you finish the book. If you can't get up, there's really nothing you can do. Of course, there are also those who like my setting but don't like the plot of this book, so you can look forward to it. At present, there are basically two directions decided. One is the reopening of this book, which can also be said to be a new timeline. The other one will probably be called "The Cat Lady's Career as a Spirit Controller" You can leave a message to vote which one you are looking forward to more. If you want to scold me, feel free to... Just lie down and let me scold you.

Not collapsed. . . . . . . ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I went to Daily Poison Guide but I can't understand it.

The supporting characters are created in a weird way. Don't conflict just for the sake of conflict. The plot is not detailed and the characters are not fleshed out. They are all tool men. Then there is only creativity left, and it will not last long.

Your first copy was a fight between gods, but your second copy turned into a fight between children. Your jumping was a bit harsh.

I can't say that I don't dare to look at it, but I can't understand it. . No hair attraction points

Good guy, my little friend will call you the protagonist 😰

Seeing so many female protagonists, I directly added them to my book list!

Did you find this cover online?

The plot is too messy. From the looks of it, you either didn't write the outline well, or you just had an idea and then filled it with everything, so it doesn't look smooth. Just like your previous twenty chapters, you can actually write them more carefully and fill them up to about sixty chapters, as an early turning point. It's like changing the map after beating the early boss. The first sixty or so chapters of your book seem to be very pieced together and not very smooth to read. If you don't make some changes, you will get stuck after 200 chapters. If you forcefully write it, it will appear to be weak, and if you insist on it, it will only last 400 or 500 chapters. Here is a little suggestion for you, do it without changing your own writing style and rhythm. Don't change these two randomly, otherwise your book may collapse. You can divide the outline into sections after sorting it out, and divide it into multiple outlines. Each outline is further subdivided. In this case, you need to pay attention to the control of the plot and the inertia of each plot. Another way is to fill in the outline directly with each paragraph. This requires better writing skills, and be careful not to overfill it, otherwise the plot will be very weak and watery. The above are some of my personal suggestions that I hope will be helpful to you.

My imagination is okay, and sometimes I think my writing is quite interesting, but I guess I really don't have enough IQ, and many places are inexplicable. I could still understand the first dungeon, but when the first dungeon came out, I almost couldn't understand it. After practicing the magic stone and purifying it, it was a mess, especially helping others evolve the Frog King, it was simply...