Something's Wrong with My Yuling

It's too dry. It could use a little more water. The pace is too fast and some of the world views are not explained in place. It's a bit confusing.

Author, don't be impatient, write slowly and update slowly, we will take our time, and if the conditions are right, then go full-time and cultivate a stable readership group, full-time work is too risky, and you still have to support your family.

When I saw the latest episode, I felt a pain in my head. The power settings were not explained clearly enough, and the plot was confusing. Suddenly, there was a big twist and I almost lost my mind. What on earth did I see?

Author: How can you sleep at your age?

It's great, it's so comfortable to watch I am suitable for watching this kind of thing I hope there will be more Come on, author, we support you

Write slowly, it's a wonderful world, I'm optimistic about you

Later I felt like I was writing an outline.

I didn't understand much after reading more than 50 chapters the first time, but I finally understood it after reading it from the beginning. Although the setting is a bit complicated, it is undoubtedly a masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to write it.

I am so speechless. I always feel that the system of this world has nothing to do with the Chinese system. If it is forcibly integrated into the Chinese system, it will feel very abrupt. If it is forcibly integrated with the Taoist and Buddhist cultivation system, it will feel very abrupt.

This is the first author I wish he had gone to hydrology

Hmph

The writing is good, both in terms of plot and characterization. Come on, don't cut it. This is the first book I subscribed to.

The setting is too complicated and the protagonist is so weak🙄

The elders were a little hesitant. You looked at me and I looked at you, but they just didn't dare to do it themselves. "Hmm, Second Elder." Yun Hua glanced at the old man holding his nose. In the dangerous eyes of the other elders, the second elder forced a smile. His eyes that had been widened due to anger were gone. He stretched out his chopsticks so tremblingly that he hesitantly brought them to his mouth. Seeing that the looks around him were getting more and more dangerous, he took them in with a heartbeat... The second elder's eyes widened suddenly, and he froze there, falling into a deathly silence. Seeing this, the elders turned their dangerous eyes to Lin Ke, who looked confident and disdainful. But then, like a beggar who hasn't eaten in ten days, the second elder threw away his chopsticks and started eating directly. The look of enjoyment and the constant movements made him so greedy when eating immortal meat. The eyes that kept glancing at the pot made other elders realize that something was wrong, "This kid wants to eat alone!" The elders couldn't sit still anymore, so they all picked up their chopsticks and put them into their mouths for fear that they would be gone if they were too late. Immediately, everyone, including the second elder, vomited. "This grandson, he's really acting like this. He could even win an award for his acting skills!" The dangerous eyes returned to the second elder again. Everyone who was about to cut him felt a wave of heat flowing through their bodies. After standing up, he sat back down and lowered his raised hands. The eyes jumped repeatedly, and finally stopped at Lin Ke's disdainful face. Yunhua was shocked by his soft eyes! You need to add more modifying words and sentences, otherwise it will be too stiff and the picture will not be clear. Moreover, if you have more words, you will earn more!

It's all settled. I feel a bit confused about the plot at the moment. Can anyone please help me explain it?

After reading the two chapters updated today, it took less than ten minutes and I ranked first

This is not a plus .