The Beginning: Mastering Skills in the World of Film and TV

The Little Thing of First Love Xia Miaomiao as an adult

Because a certain author has been squeezed out and can't add more updates :), I couldn't wait any longer and had to do it myself. This is the plot after waking up in the second world that I was discussing in the group. I sorted it out and made it into a 10,000-word extra to satisfy my brothers and sisters. For the first time If you have any comments, please leave a message and tell me, thank you orz Maimai's pink dress

How can I put it, it seems so awkward now, when two people who like each other have to twist and turn, it is the readers who are tormented. The blurred memory is a big poison. The protagonist has all kinds of promiscuity in the film and television world, but in reality, he is submissive. They are two different worlds. Not to mention how much has changed, but at least he must build up his confidence, right? Anyway, now I suggest you get your memories back as soon as possible. The two of them are sweet together, and the other is to build up the protagonist's self-confidence. His character is too twisted. Above.

Maimai

. . . . What is the difference between this protagonist and a psychopath? Because you know and like Zhao Jinmai and then you go crazy over Li Shiqing? Is she still shy? Still worried about you? If Xiao Heyun didn't enter the cycle, only you and her would be able to make sense of this reaction. Now the beginning of this book feels like this to me: a psychopath knows that he likes Zhao Jinmai's face and wants to have sex with her, and then she also becomes a psychopath and you two fall in love with each other.

I didn't see the protagonist, I just saw a psycho who felt good about himself, and a group of psychos who were cooperating with him

Stream of consciousness writing is becoming more and more common. The author is caught up in self-pleasure, and the story narrative is very incomplete. The author needs to change it quickly. You are writing a novel, and you must have the narrative structure of a novel. You have not written a bunch of self-pleasure and obscene fragments. The fragments alone cannot support the outcome of a novel.

It feels like the protagonist is a seriously ill patient

The ever-changing heroine

Did you just let yourself go in the first world? What you know is the beginning, what you don't know is the autobiography of a mental patient.